The Girl Next Door _An Ishra Drabble_Part 2 on Pg 5

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bscorp13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Meghna_IshRa
Beautiful Pb...Puttar is so confused between his heart and his mind. Loved the way he dresses up to meet his neighbour/investor 😆😉.
The track is really a blessing for IshRa fans, such a treat . Would love to read Biwi's pov too 😳

Thanks meghna😛..glad you liked it..will try to add biwis pov too over the week..not promising though😛

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bscorp13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: eclipse123
Pb... read the the os named "Tum rahe na tum, hum rahe na hum" .It was so beautiful & it gave me happiness,tension,tears,fear...like many feelings,when i was reading each line of that os.U very beautifully described the two lovers mindset & emotions in that single piece of os .I got the feelings & their emotions,pain ...they would have gone through without each other in that 7 years. The ending was painful where they thinks they have no right in each other when in reality they two are living only for each other.Marvelous writing...Pb👏👏.

P.S I couldn't comment in that thread...so commenting here😆

Oh nice...so happy you liked it...that os was written at a time I wished all those emotions were actually shown on the show ..since cvs never bothered to address them...

You weren't able to comment there😕...wonder why..😕..let me check

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Pooja

@eclipse123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: bscorp13

Oh nice...so happy you liked it...that os was written at a time I wished all those emotions were actually shown on the show ..since cvs never bothered to address them...
You weren't able to comment there😕...wonder why..😕..let me check

Yaa,that 7year leap & after whatever happens was one of the biggest disaster happen in yhm😕,by that leap they killed our ishra character & relation somewhat🥱They made raman into a fully fledged jaanwar & made ishita like shagun who leave her child & who live with other man( the reason where different for shagun & ishita tho )& made fun of our ishra's relation🤢.At least they could had gave us raman's pov but no they gave us neelu's pov too in that track but raman only for two times i thinkWhen 7 year leap happen leap & the promos came ..thought we will get at least beauty & beast love story instead what we got was...🥱Let's forget that period conveniently.At least now we got what we want let's enjoy today forgetting yesterday's memories isn't 😊.

But u wrote the actual emotions of them which cvs conveniently forget to gave us.I missed this OS at that time.Happy to read it now tho😊

Edited by eclipse123 - 7 years ago

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divz9769

@divz9769

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Beautiful os

Raman is behaving like teenager

His pov was lovely

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prachii

@prachii

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Felt good reading this!

Could imagine Raman's actions in each and every line. I like your way of writing .
Please let me know if you have any index of your stories .Would love to read .

If possible please write next part of this one with Ishita point of view

😊

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Pb, as always this was beautiful!

I legit miss your writing...you should keep writing before YHM hits the crap fan again 😆

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momb24

@momb24

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

PB- this was the sweetest,loved ramans musing.

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bscorp13

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: prachii
Felt good reading this!

Could imagine Raman's actions in each and every line. I like your way of writing .
Please let me know if you have any index of your stories .Would love to read .

If possible please write next part of this one with Ishita point of view

😊

Thanks Prachi😛...glad you could see Raman in the scene as is😛..yes I do have an index..

Am sharing the link here ..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4727064

Hope you enjoy them too😛

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prachii

@prachii

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: bscorp13

Thanks Prachi😛...glad you could see Raman in the scene as is😛..yes I do have an index..
Am sharing the link here ..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4727064

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Hope you enjoy them too😛</font>

Aww thank you dear for the index link ! Index title is 👍🏼 Dreams delusions and desire !
Yay got a bunch of stories to binge read . 😛 and dream on ishra delusional world 😉