Tujhe teri dhadkan se pehchaan lunga#3,pt 21 on pg 134 updt on Sept 18 - Page 18

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update di
Both wants to b with the other but fate has played a cruel game or to say his parents
She started working for a company nd was waiting for him
Raman pov is so sad
He had to bear so much of pain because of his parents
He even cursed d day when he got his eyes back
Really feeling bad for both of them
He was trying all the ways to find her but was jot getting any clue
How can someone be so cruel that they want to destroy their own child happiness
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Nice teaser di
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PART 16

Media was clicking pics of bhallas and aroras together for the front page news while Raman was feeling suffocated without his jaan with these monsters, who snatched his jaan from him and now not even hesitate to kill her for their benefit.

He said to his mother -I Am going inside I can't take these camera flashlight , it's disturbing me. Itching ho rahi hai.

Mr bhalla -ok u go inside. Shagun take him inside.

Shagun made a dirty face and said -let him go, meri bhi toh pics aani chahiye.

Mr bhalla was about to say something when Raman said -let her be here, I am going inside. He said and turned to go. The moment he turned his eyes got filled remembering the love and warmth of ishita, he closed his eyes and sent a quick prayer to the almighty to keep his ishita safe. He went to his room and sat on the bed. He started remembering all the moments he spend with ishita,how she always loved him, treated him like her baby, loved him, comforted him in pain and how always stood by him in all situation.

Raman hide his face in between his legs and cried.

Raman -sorry jaan, I couldn't protect. Tumhari raksha nahi kar paaya hai,i am sorry ,really sorry. He was saying to himself when he heard, r u OK.

He raise his head and saw the doctor standing there.

Raman wiped his tears and said -yes, it's just eyes r burning. Meri biwi kahan hai usse ander bhej dijiye naa.

Doctor-she is out in media, bulaun kya. He said making Raman realised that he is also sold for money and he will also not tell anything about ishita.

Raman nodded in no and asked -when I can go home.

Doc -u will be discharged soon. He said and went leaving Raman in grief.

Soon he was discharged and was taken to the farmhouse, he look around the farmhouse and remembered how they have spent beautiful time there, his eyes got filled remembering her love and her absence was just killing him but the fear was loosing her forever was making him think and act sanely.

Mr bhalla -everything is packed, we r leaving for airport in two hours, till then Raman, u can rest here.

Raman nodded and went to his room. He closed his eyes to feel her frangrance but sadly the room was smelling of room freshener. He sadly went to shower and cried under to shower to hide his cries. No-one was bothered to even check him. He cried for long and felt light and then thought -its not the time to cry and be sad, it's time to be strong and fight for my love. Ishita ne bahut kuch kiya hai mere liye, apne pyaar ke liye, now it's my turn. Unn logon ne meri ishita ko kidnap kiya hai naa, but I will find her, chahe jahan bhi chupa rakha ho unn logon ne meri Ishita ko, I will find her out and then I will teach them a lesson for life. And for finding ishita I have to plan hard. He thought and start thinking ways to find ishita.

Raman -i have to keep check on papa, maa, shagun and even on aroras ,taaki pata chale ki ishita Kahan hai. He thought and planned everything.

Soon they fly back to Delhi .aroras has went to their house while bhallas came to their. All sat in the hall and had tea and snacks ,later Shagun was going to Raman's room when Raman said -tum kahan jaa rahi ho.

Shagun -tumhare kamre mein, aur kahan jaaungi.

Raman -how can u go to my room.

Toshiji -yeh kya keh raha hai puttar, shagun teri biwi hai toh aur kahan rahegi. She will reside in ur room only naa.she said in a sugar coated voice making Raman angry. He tighten his fist in anger hearing shagun as his wife but controlled his anger thinking about his Ishita's safety.

Seeing no response from Raman, mr bhalla asked -kya baat hai raman.

Raman -tum wahin Shagun ho naa, jiske saath main itne dino se reh raha tha. He said casually making everyone shocked.

Mr bhalla -haan yeh wahin hai why u r asking. He asked in a tense voice thinking what went wrong.

Raman -kyunki Isse yaad nahi ki isme mannat maangi thi ki agar meri aankhen wapas aa jayegi toh hum pure teen mahine ek dusre ke alag rahenge aur yeh matarani ka vrat rakhegi.

Toshiji smiled and said -oh itni si baat, khushi ke maare dimaag se utar gaya hoga. Naa Shagun.

Shagun made a dirty face and said -haan mujhe yaad aaya, mujhe toh alag rehna hai.

Raman -yaad aaya naa, toh jao, guest room mein. Mere kamre mein mat aana, woh kya hai naa, main nahi chahta ki tumhara vrat tute aur meri aankhon mein koi problem ho. OK.

Shagun nodded and raman went to his room thinking -badi aayi mere room mein rehne wali,mere room par aur mere dil sirf meri ishita ko haq hai. He thought and went to his room smirking while shagun sat there making a dirty face.

Shagun made a dirty face and said-yeh kya bakwaas hai, I am not going to keep fast.

Mr bhalla -no need to keep any fast, u go to ur room. I will talk to him and make u shift to his room asap.

Shagun nodded and went while Toshiji said to mr bhalla-i know u don't like ishita coz she is a maid but why we r tolerating this Shagun. Yeh raman ko shaadi ke mandap par chod kar chali gayi thi.

Mr bhalla -I Am tolerating her coz I need her father's land, woh land joh faridabad ke paas hai, I need it for my medical college. Yeh karodon ka project hai and I need that land for this project. That's why I am tolerating this Shagun. He said and both went to their room while Raman felt disgusted hearing his parent's talk as everything is just business for them, even their own son is nothing for them. They r using him as their property then son.

He went to his room not able to see his parent's indifference but he was feeling too suffocated there, so he got ready and went to office to get some peace and some ideas to find ishita.

He entered his cabin only to see his best friend and confidant mihir sitting there. Raman saw him and got happy, may be mihir is the only one in his life to whom raman can trust blindly after ishita.

Both got happy and emotional seeing each other and hugged tight.

Raman -kahan tha yaar tu. U never came to meet me, kabhi check bhi nahi kiya, ki main zinda hoon yaa Mar gaya.

Mihir -aise mat bolo bhai, I was really stuck,ur father sent me to complete a project near Mumbai in a village, Jahan road construction ho raha tha. I tried to contact u but woh itna remote village tha that I couldn't got any network. Chutti bhi nahi mili ek bhi din ki main Delhi aa sakun, parson hi aaya hoon, thought to call u but kisi ne phone uthaya hi nahi. Mujhe toh yeh samajh nahi aa raha why did send me there, kyunki woh kaam bahut mamuli tha, anyone can do it.

Raman -mujhe samajh mein aa raha hai, he did this just to hide the truth from me.

Mihir -truth kaisa truth.

Raman looked at mihir and said -see mihir I am trusting u, please mera vishwas mat todna. Main bahut akela hi gaya hoon. He said with moist eyes.

Mihir -kya hua bhai.

Raman narrated him everything how he got married to ishita and his parent sent them to Darjeeling to hide Ishita's identity. How ishita took care of him and loved him and finally how Mr bhalla kidnapped ishita and was even ready to kill her for his fake status.

Mihir was shocked to hear this and said -tabhi unhone mujhe aapse milne nahi diya and send me there.

Raman -i want my ishita back. Pata nahi kahan hogi, kis haal mein hogi. Kuch khaya hoga ki nahi, Kahin usse kisi ne maara naa ho, Kahin uske saath badtameezi, she is my baby. And she is alone, I am not understanding how to find her, main mar raha hoon uske bina, mihir please help me, meri ishita ko dhoondh lao. He said crying, mihir hugged him and let him cry pouring his every hurt. As he has going to the betrayal of his parent and even his only support, his wife is not with him.

Mihir consoled him and said -chup ho jaiye bhai, u have to think about bhabhi, woh bhi to akeli hongi, u have to be strong for her.

Raman wiped his tears and said -trust me mihir, Ek baar mujhe ishita mil jaaye, I will not leave anyone. Sabko khoon ke aansu rulaunga, for hurting her. I have planned something, thinking to tap their mobile ,so that I can hear their convo. Unke rooms mein CCTV cameras lage hai, thinking to link them to my laptop, so that I can hear everything what they r doing.

Mihir -great idea, even we have to keep a track of where they r going. We have to keep eye on each and every movement of them. Koi detective kiya jaayen kya, who can go and inquire about ishita bhabhi in Darjeeling, kisi ko shayad kuch pata ho.

Raman -but I don't have any pic of her. Aur Maine usse dekha bhi nahi hai.

Mihir -then how we will find her.

Raman -dhoondh toh main usse lunga hi, I don't know how but I will find her.

Mihir -ok then we should start the operation. First u start tapping everyone's phone and keep eyes on all.

Raman -send a detective to Darjeeling also, may be someone remember her face, the people we met, the vendors were we use to roam. Kisi ke paas uski koi information mil jaaye. I can't hire a detective myself coz papa may get to know. Tu kar de naa,karega naa.

Mihir nodded and was going when Raman said -woh bahut padhi likhi thi, kisi naa kisi institution se toh padhi hi hogi. Aur agar padhi hogi to as a guardian Mr arora ka hi naam diya hoga. Can we search her by checking guardians name.

Mihir -it will be difficult, bahut saare educational institution hai world mein.

Raman -i don't think aroras have sent her out, Delhi ke aur India ke institutions check kiya jaaye.

Mihir -it will take time, but we don't have any option. We need a hacker for this. Who can hack the records of the educational institutions.

Raman -ok then get going, we have to find her. Mujhe meri ishita kisi bhi keemat par chahiye. He said and both started working on the plan.

Later in night Raman arranged a family dinner for his family and aroras. All were happy thinking they fooled raman but he installed the tracking and tapping device in their mobiles to keep a check on them.

All had a gala time together and finally all went to their respective room. All slept but raman was wide awake thinking about ishita and ways to find her. He was reading the emails send by her to the clients to feel her but all in vain. He wasn't at peace at all.

Soon time started passing, they were trying hard but not getting any information about ishita, not even a single person tell anything about ishita. All remembered raman, as he was blind but no-one remembered the girl. From everywhere they were getting failures. His family members were not talking anything about ishita as for them ishita was a close chapter. Hacker was checking the records of all educational institutions only to get nothing.in between all these Shagun was trying to come close to him every now and then but Raman always escaped from her.

One day, Raman was sitting on the dining table and was eating breakfast, he thought of something and said -chalo shagun aaj tumhare ghar chalte hai. It's long since u met them. Aaj shaam ka plan banao. He said and went out.

Shagun got happy hearing this and they went to aroras in the evening. They had their dinner and Raman mix sleeping pills in Shagun's food making her sleep. Seeing her sleeping aroras requested raman to stay at night which he accepted.

Mrs arora went to sleep while Raman took mr arora to drink, they drink for long talking anything and everything. Raman mixed a pill in his drink, a pill eating which he will tell everything asked but will not remember anything.

Soon Mr arora was under the effect of medicine, Raman start asking him about ishita, he told everything he knows but couldn't answer that where she is now coz he himself don't know about it.

Raman punched him in anger and he fainted. Seeing everyone sleeping Raman searched the whole house to get a single pic of ishita but couldnt find any. He even scanned the whole marriage video to get a glimpse of her but couldn't get anything. His eyes got moist seeing her hand in his, and how she was supporting him every now and then.

Next day, they came back from aroras. Raman was sad and disheartened as he couldn't find her. Thats when he got the call that the hacker got a pic of ishita.

He got happy and went to mihir happily but got sad to see it was a very old pic of her, when she was just five, as she has attended only the primary school ,no record after class five.

Raman smiled seeing her pic, she was all pink, her hair was tied in two braids and she was smiling cutely.

Raman -dekh mihir, meri jaan kitni pyaari hai, mera bachcha Kahan hai tu, jaldi se mil jaa mujhse. Main mar raha hoon tere bina. He said and caressed her pic lovingly and kissed the computer printout.

He showed Ishita's pic to mihir and said -she is cute naa.

Mihir smiled and said -very cute. But Isse kuch pata nahi chalega. Kaise khojenge bhabhi ko iss pic se.

Raman turned to the computer expert and asked -can u edit this pic aur mujhe dikha sakte ho ki woh ab kaisi lagti hogi.

The person look at Raman and asked -who is she.

Raman -my wife.

Person -apni biwi nahi pehchante kya. He asked laughing.

Raman eyes turned moist hearing this and said -nahi pehchanta, nahi dekha hai, andha tha, nahi dekh paaya, ab help karoge meri. I am very helpless, meri biwi kho gayi hai and I am able to find her. He said folding his hands making the person felt guilty. He nodded and all sat to make the pic.

They sat together and worked hard and finally he could make a pic but nobody knows how correct the pic was. Mihir send the pic to the detective and told him to find the girl.

On the other hand, Raman continued his try to make anyone spill anything about ishita making them drink, first it was Mr bhalla then Toshiji, he even tried on Mrs arora but no-one told him anything as Noone knows where is ishita.

Raman was getting disheartened day by day but still trying to find her. Trying all ideas getting flop raman tiday took Shagun but make her spill the beans but like other sje too don't know anything leaving Raman shattered.

Flashback ends

Raman was sitting under the tree crying when mihir came searching him and saw him crying. Mihir ran to him and said -bhai aap yahan, ghar chalo.

Raman look at him and said -gjar kaun saa ghar. Mere paas koi ghar nahi, main beghar hoon. I am homeless, u know why, kyunki woh eent pathar ka ghar mera ghar nahi hai, uska dil mera ghar tha, her arms were my shelter, but mere parent ne woh bhi chin liya, apne bete ko beghar kar diya. Koi karta hai kya aisa apne bachche ke saath. Isse achcha toh maar daala hota mujhe, mujhse kyun chin liya meri jaan ko. Mihir I want her, mujhe chahiye meri ishita. Please dhoondh lao usse, I am getting tired, ab mujhse bardasht nahi ho raha, please bring her to me. He said folding his hands crying.

Mihir hugged him tight and said -dont worry bhai, bhabhi mil jayengi. Aap ghar chalo, mere ghar. Agar aap hi tut jaoge toh bhabhi ko kaun khojega,u have to be strong.

Raman -I Am not strong, she is my strength. Main strong nahi hoon. I am not strong. He said and cried while mihir took raman to his house.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update.
Literally got tears in my eyes reading this.
Poor Raman, he is going through hell with out his jaan, was not able to see him like this di.
Raman was feeling disgusted to even stand with his so called family who is posing for media n went away but that Shagun was only concerned for her pic..
Raman was broken n was trying to feel ishita in their room but couldn't n they all went to Delhi.
Loved d way Raman never let that chudail to claim anything which only belongs to his ishita.
He made her to sleep in guest room.
He was disgusted listening to his parents talk n know that all they care is for their god dam business.
Raman met Mihir n got to know his father played with him also n send him away so that he will not know d truth.
Just a hope that Mihir went to Mumbai for work so may be he can get info of ishra for Raman.
Raman told Mihir about everything n asked his help n they all started planning n keeping watch on all d members n hire detectives but couldn't get anything.
Raman went to aromas n get d information from him regarding ishita but that was not helpful.
Raman is so happy to find her pic in which she is a kid n asked them to prepare an imaginary pic of her now.
Mihir found Raman crying n tried to console him n took him to his house.
Bechara Raman is falling weak n loosing hope with out his jaan bec she used to be his strength n without her he is so alone.
Di, plz atleast let Raman get any hint of his jaan, wasn't able to see them in so much of pain.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)
Edited by arshifansiri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Raman love Ishita lot I hope hefoind her soon and punish everyone who gave pain to Ishita his baby
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update.
Raman try everything to find ishta.
Hope ishitA jldi mil jaye.
Poor Raman.
Please make them reunite soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update di
Raman was disgusted by his parents
Thank god he was away from shagun
Bhallas only care for business
Mihir was his support
He couldn't find ishita
Hope ishita meets raman soon
Ty 4 d early update di and 4 d pm too😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update. . Only the doctors at the ayurvedic hospital could give an idea bout how ishitha would be. Even if he goes to Mumbai, on a business trip, he cannot identify her. Situation is pathetic. Lets see how the mystery unfolds.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Excellent update
And emotional waiting for next part update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update
Poor raman is doing all means to find ishita
But he is not getting anything
Mihir is helping him find her
But they r not able to track her
Raman is breaking as they can't trace ishita
Update soon
Waiting eagerly for ur update

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