New story ' I Don't Love You ' Part 2 @ pg: 6 on 15/8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello! Its my very first story and I am really nervous, Guys kindly support me its my first story support me by liking first Part and I hope You'll like it
Because of you guys I woke early to write this story cause I am very excited and nervous too...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi, As i think you had read my instroduction so now i think to write story Ok so i am starting part 1

I DONT LOVE YOU

Part 1

"No Mom, I am just going for the audition, for being an actor" Said the handsome boy

"Wait,Raman first you have to eat this, its prasad for you, I bought this from temple" Said his mom

"Thank you mom" after saying that he just take the prasad and went to the doorside

After a while...

He just entered in the huge office he asked in the reception

( i think I also tell reception scene)

"Yes sir, what do you want" said receptionist girl

"I want to know, where we have to go for audition" Raman said

"for audition first you have to go to Ishita Mam's cabin then you will have to simple act there, she'll choose you or not, you'll have to go to Mr Abhimanu's cabin because he'll teach you dance" said receptionist

"So where's the way" said Raman

"Fourth floor, Room no:109" Said receptionist

"Thank you" by saying he just take the lift and went to her cabin

He knocked the door, she didn't give response, then he just opened the door and said: Mam


She turned, he saw her and looses himself in her beauty

she said: yes

He didn't gave any response just stare her

she continously said: hey, hello, are you hearing me

Then soon he came back from his thoughts and said, yeah, I am sorry so i came here for my
audition for being an actor

Ishita: Oh sir abhimanu told me

Raman: Well, you, an actor?

Ishita: Yeah I am an actor i am in 3 movies

Raman: That's nice

Ishita: Yeah, Thanks now back to the work


Ishita takes the paper and gave it to Raman

Ishita: You have to act this scene

Raman takes the paper and read it then he start doing it many times but he was not doing it right
then at 4th time he done this right

Ishita: yeah you done this time right so come sit here

They both sit

Ishita: anything, you want?

Raman: no

He again lose in her beauty

She took the audition paper and said: Your name please?

Raman was not giving response just saying: beautiful

she was shocked and she continiously asked: YOUR NAME PLEASE?

He continously said: beautiful

She dialled the number of abhimanu

Ishita: hello, sir here the guy is not telling his name he is continously saying beautiful, what can i do?

Abhi: you write his name as beautiful

Ishita wrote his name as beautiful

ishita: Whats your surname

Raman: Pretty

Ishita: what?

Raman: yes pretty

Ishita: Okay. And she just write pretty as his surname

Ishita: now you have to go to abhimanu's office

Raman: where's the way

Ishita: first you have to take left from here then right then room no: 118

Raman: Okay Thanks. After saying that he went to his office

He knocked, and abhimanu just welcome him and said: Hello Mr pretty

Raman got a little bit confused and said : who is Mr pretty

Abhimanu: You just told your surname "Pretty" to Mam Ishita

Raman: Oh My God, i said beautiful and pretty to her well my name is Raman bhalla

Abhimanu: What?

Raman: Yeah

Abhimanu: Oh shit, I think she gave the name sheet to the controller and if they scan it and send it to the Chief so your name will be presented as Beautiful pretty

Raman: What? Is she Mental. he shocked

Abhimanu: Wait, I am gonna call her

Abhimanu dialled her number, She picked the call and abhimanu told her about everything she ran toward the controller's office and correct his name then they scan the paper and gave her

Ishita thanked them and went to the abhimanu's cabin and saw many people who became actor there she called Abhimanu toward her

Abhimanu: Is everything fine?

Ishita: Yeah, everything is fine now, but I am so distracted about Mr. Raman bhalla
Abhimanu: Don't worry, He is so good and you know what today director is coming to choose the actor for the movie, and then the actor will represented with you in the movie

Ishita: Okay, I am ready


After a while...

Director came into the cabin and everyone salute him

Director: So what about the actor Abhi?

Abhi: Sir these are the actors from them Mr. Raman bhalla act well

Ishra got shocked.

Ishita(st): What? he is selected with me, I have to shoot film with him, no god please don't select him for me, Its not right because he is totally mental

Raman(st): Oh Thankgod for selecting me with her because she is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen in the world, Thank you god, and I hope she'll surely fell in love with me after shooting this movie

Director: so Mr. bhalla congrats for being an actor

Raman: Thank you sir, I want to ask something

Director: yeah sure you can ask

Raman: when will you shoot this movie

Director: from tomorrow because he also had thought everything and it will goes very famous in hollywood and bollywood

Raman: hmm. So its really good, Now I think I should go, Sir...

Director: Yeah sure, and Ishita you should also go and rest because tomorrow you'll have to come early in the morning, because we have to shoot this movie

Precap: Shooting started


I think its enough cause I am very tired today

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Edited by amnakhan11 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful update cutiepie ❤️
its really nice 😃
she wrote his name as beautiful pretty 😆
and they are ready for shooting 😛
can't wait to read their love story 😳
you are such a good and young writer 👏
continue soon 😳
Thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome chappy
He told his name beautiful 😆
N surname pretty
Update soon
Both to act in film

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

He told his name beautiful 😆
N surname pretty
Update soon
Both to act in film


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update dear
SO FUNNY UPDATE
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start
His name is beautiful surname pretty 😆
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for your first story dear
Awesome starting
So Ishra are gonna act together
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all a big welcome to the forum 🤗 . Though it's your first story you did well and yup I can sense your nervousness through your update. Overall this is nice concept and I am sure it is going to be interesting. So ishu is a star already and Raman bhalla got a chance to act with her yeah. All the best Mr.Beautiful Pretty oops I mean Mr.Raman bhalla 😆. Thank you for Pm dear. Will be waiting for next update. My support is always there for you. Do continue soon 😃.
Edited by FreedomOfSpeech - 8 years ago

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