My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Awww good start n thanks for pm n waiting part raman entry n waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Sanjna55

Heyy..

First of all..

Many Many Congratulations for your First ever Story Dear..

Hope u will write more..

Coming to the Update..

It was fabulous..

Love it..

Ishu N Miku both are soo cute..

Teasing their Amma..

Hahah..Appa is also enjoying..

Both are Shaitaan..

Miku loves Mihir..Hmm..

Hawww...

But u didn't give our Hero's intro..

was scrolling like..Abhi Aega..Abhi Aega..Abh to Ahi jayega..😆😆

Koi nhi..Next part main intro to de hi dena..

N yeah..

Continue Soon..

Thanks alot for PM..

TakeCare..

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Congratulations on your first story!!!
A great start!!
Ishmi bonding is lovely!!
And Ishmi with Appa is very cute!!!
Amma wants the girls to behave and act grown up!!!
Extra classes ke bahaane Mihir Mihika kaa milan!!

Eagerly awaiting our hero please!!!!
Please continue soon!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Nicely start

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Congratulations for ur very first story harshita

Hope u write many more

Lovely start

Loved ishmi

They r cute

Loved how they r teasing amma

Appa was also enjoying their teasings

Waiting for raman's entry

Updt soon

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: divz9769

congratulations for ur first story

superb update

ishita is younger than mihika ishita and mihika scene was cute amma was complaining about ishita and mihika to appa and he was defending his darlings ishita and mihika were mimicking amma appa was laughing they ran from there to escape from amma's scolding mimika loves each other ishita is helping them to meet

waiting for out hero raman's entry

pls continue soon