My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8

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Harshita Srivastava

@harshiidiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Divanru
Welcome to writing world harshita
Congrates for your first story.
Lovely start
So Mimi's are already couple .
Waiting for puttar .
Update soon .
Thanks for pm

Thanku dii..
I m glad that u like it..

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divani

@divan19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Hi harshita...
Congratulations for your first ever story...
Superb start...
Mihika is ishita's elder sister here...
It's interesting...
Obviously waiting for our hero's entry...
Continue soon
Tanx for the pm

Edited by divan19 - 8 years ago

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Ayesha

@ayeshakapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Nice start dear...& congratulations for you're first story...waiting for Raman entry...Eagerly waiting for next part...

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Rithika

@srithika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Congrats for your first story dii
IshMi bonding was awesome
Family bonding scene were just so fab
Waiting for our hero's entry
Update soon
Thanks for the pm

Edited by srithika - 8 years ago

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Awww good start n thanks for pm n waiting part raman entry n waiting for next part

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Sanjna55

@Sanjna55

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Heyy..

First of all..

Many Many Congratulations for your First ever Story Dear..

Hope u will write more..

Coming to the Update..

It was fabulous..

Love it..

Ishu N Miku both are soo cute..

Teasing their Amma..

Hahah..Appa is also enjoying..

Both are Shaitaan..

Miku loves Mihir..Hmm..

Hawww...

But u didn't give our Hero's intro..

was scrolling like..Abhi Aega..Abhi Aega..Abh to Ahi jayega..😆😆

Koi nhi..Next part main intro to de hi dena..

N yeah..

Continue Soon..

Thanks alot for PM..

TakeCare..

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Congratulations on your first story!!!
A great start!!
Ishmi bonding is lovely!!
And Ishmi with Appa is very cute!!!
Amma wants the girls to behave and act grown up!!!
Extra classes ke bahaane Mihir Mihika kaa milan!!

Eagerly awaiting our hero please!!!!
Please continue soon!
Thank you so much for the pm!!