Tujhko main kitni shiddat se chahoon - last part on pg 138 on 2/9

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Akriti154

@akriti154

Trailblazer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

Lovely update di
ishra shared their past n grief
ishita assured him dat sje will nvr leave him
nt u ended it so soon
want epilogue
thnxxx 4 pm

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sweetdivya24

@sweetdivya24

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#522

Beautiful update...

Ishra knew each other

Gappu is raman only

Happy ending..

Loved it

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xLavenderx

@xLavenderx

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

Superb one
Ishra miss each other
Raman finds his happiness in ishita's presence
He was upset hearing abt bad treatment by her parents
He proposed her
She was happy

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sharmilasairam

@sharmilasairam

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#524

Last part.
Offo y u end it dr. Atleast i need epilogue
It amazing storyline i just love
it m dissappointed that u end the story
I want epilogue please

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#525

eagerly waiting for the epilogue Di

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sweetdivya24

@sweetdivya24

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#526

Superb update didu

Loved it

It was scary n touchy

Raman is really ruthless

Seems he's full of insecurities

But what insecurities he's having

Sorry maine yeh part miss kr diya tha

So late reply

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#527

NOTE

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At first thank you so much friends for your immense love which you have showered in this story .I have received many positive as well as negative response in this .Though I have ended this story but many of you wanted me to continue this so I have thought to write two three more parts .

Hope you will like to read it further .

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#528

TEASER

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I- gappu you told me that you often goes to our orphanage .

R- humm , I don't had any one na ,so whenever I feel lonely ,I went there and spend my day with the kids .you know I there are two kids ria and rahul ,they are close friends when ever I see them they reminds me of our childhood .

I(excitedly )- gappu please I want to go there ,take me na .

R(after thinking for a while)- OK as you say but not now after a week on your birthday .

I- you still remember my birthday .

R- of course, I never forget anything about my chotu .

I- but now I m not chotu .

R- no you will always remain my chotu,yaad hai how I use to care for you.

I- yeah ,after my mother left me ,you were the only one who cared for me .

R- so its final we will go there next week .

I- humm ,I m so excited for that .

That's all for teaser ,further updates will depend on response .

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