Ishra SS_Aashiq surrender hua...[part11 on page 123, 3Rd sep] - Page 6

Originally posted by: Muskan193

Interesting story dear
I love to read ishra college love..
Raman is a flirty boy,but hope here is no abshagun
Haww romi n mihir is jalous on mihir.
I think here i get a jkr n ravan kumar war at the starting..
I am so excited for ishra firet meeting,
Update soon dear
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much anju

Originally posted by: pyara12

hii viji

nice concept

well written

update soon

thanks for pm

Thank you roshi

Originally posted by: Khushiishra

Grate start di😊

Very intresting and amazing part😛

Raman is collage cool boy and ishita is simpal girl😉

His frds are jaluse for raman for his look and girlfrds😉😆

I think Ishita will be raman cruse😳and he loves her from the 1 time he will see her😳😃😉

Thanku for PM😊

Wating to read next part😊

Update soon😛

Thank you kushi

Originally posted by: sweetdivya24

Wow superb update

Very nice concept

Collage saga I loved it

Both are so different

Raman is flirt guy n ishita is simple girl

How he fell for her will treat to read

N we all know opposite attracts

Waiting for next update

Update jldiii diii

Thank you so much...
For that lovely comment on

Originally posted by: keyzest

Superb concept

Nice start

Itz attitude bhalla vs nave iyer

Raman z flirting like nothing

Ishu z so innocent, charm girl

Waiting to read da story further

Thank you so much roshi

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

congrats for another wonderful new story dear

interesting

intro of ishra was fabulous

loved boy gang

raman is best in flrting and loved his attitude

continue soon

Thank you lakshmi

Originally posted by: fSharm

Ishra are poles apart...
Interesting...
Update sooon..

Thank you sharmin

Originally posted by: akriti154

Interesting start
ishra r poles apart
let's see wht happens wen dey meet
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

Thank you akku

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Part 2:

Raman and friends were fully engrossed in their talks laughing and making fun of each other... That's when a guy came with hokey stick in his hands and aimed at raman's head... Raman at the same time bent down to pick up the goggles that had fallen down... the next moment all were startled with the sound... Thud the hokey stick broke into pieces hitting the wall... Raman and friends were shocked and looked at the person...

Raman : ashok tum..

Ashok : haan mein kyun shocked huh... It was just a miss... Mein tumhe zinda nahi chodonga raman... How dare you speak like that with Divya... She is my girlfriend... Tum usse bache dogi... Mein tera woh haal karoonga na... Tum phir usse aise baat kabhi nahi karogi.. He said spitting fire...

Raman : abey saale... Mein uske peeche nahi gai... Woh mere peeche padi hui hai... He said holding his collar...

Ashok : how dare you hold my collor... He said punching Raman on his face hardly making him bleed from lips...

Raman : saale... Kispe haath utaya tune ... Ab tumhe zinda nahi chodonga... He said punching him back...

Both involved in a huge fight... Raman's friends were trying to part them away but both were not ready to leave... In the huge fight Raman cornered ashok against the notice board and aimed at punching him... But he missed in nick of time and punched his hands over the notice board... Making his hands bleeding heavily...

Ashok ran away from there fearing... But raman dint let go of him... He chased ashok like a maniac running out of the college...

Abhimanyu : arey yaar in dono ki ladai kabhi nahi katam hogi... Come lets go he said... As for raman and ashok it was thier daily routine to involve in fights with each other... So the friends thought it was another usual fight and engrossed themselves in other things...

Both raman and ashok ran in the opposite direction of one way road... In this running and chasing drama... Raman was just hit by the car and thrown away In the air and fell lifelessly bleeding heavily in front of a scooty.. The girl who was in scooty was totally shocked by the happenings... Immediately she left her scooty and looked at raman who was fallen on the ground lifelessly with pool of blood around him... She just went near him and and held his hands checking the pulse...

Girl: zinda hai... Koi ambulance bulao... He is still alive... Bulao na koi... She said looking around for someone to call the ambulance... Seeing none of them respond... She stopped the autorickshaw... And asked him to help him take raman to hospital...

Automata: arey, madam ji yeh toh accident case hai... Police case banjayega... Aur aap toh ladki ho... In sab me kyun pad rahe ho... Chodke chale jaana... Koi traffic police dek kar ambulance bula lega.. Aur koi der baad ambulance aajaegi... Aap jao aur apne kaam karo...

Girl: kaise baat kar rahe ho aap... Koi insaniyat naam ki cheez nahi hai kya...

Autowala : arey madam ji mujhse nahi hoga. Aap kisi aur auto ko bulao.. He said starting his auto...

The girl stood infront of his auto and said... Ab aap mere saath hospital le chalenge ya... Aapke baare mein police mein complain karoon... That you din't help me to save a accident case...

Auto: arey yeh kya musibat hai... Chalo madam ji... Mein chalta hoon par koi case hogaya toh... Aap hi ko dekna padega... Mujhse nahi hoga...

Girl: teekhe pehle utao inhe.. Aur hospital le chalte hain...

She placed his head on her lap and was continously patting his cheeks... To help him gain consious...

Girl: utiye... Aapko kuch nahi hoga... We will reach the hospital on time... Don't worry... She said patting his cheeks...

Raman was able to listen to the whole conversation and the way she was caring for him.. He just opened his eyes little... Her face was visible to him in a blurred visual... Seeing him opening his eyes little... She went a bit closer to his face... Aapko kuch nahi hoga... She said... Which just echoed in raman's ears with her partially blur face and closed his eyes again...

Once they reached the hospital he was taken into the emergency unit... The girl was just checking his wallet to find some information about him... Finally she took his license and college Id card and found that he is from her college...

Nurse came with the admission form and asked her to fill it... She filled his information looking at the license and handed over the nurse...

Nurse: aapka naam?.. Aur aap patient ka kya lagte ho..

Girl: ji mein ishita iyer... Aur mein... Mein.. Mein unka friend...

Nurse : toh tk ghar walon ko bata deejiye... He is in very critical condition...

Ishita : Ayo Murugan, yeh kya hogaya... Aaj college ki first day hi aisa hogaya ab kya karoon How do I inform his parents... please save him murugan... She sent silent prayers to god... She then found his mobile and scrolled over his phone book and found his mom's number saved... She immediately dialed his mother's number...

Toshi : hello... Raman, puttar kaha hai tu... Where have you been for a week... Papaji tumse bohot naraz hai puttar... Cheti ghar aajao puttar... She said in a go...

Ishita : aunty... This is ishita...

Toshi : ishita?.. kaun?.. Aur raman ki phone se... Yeh ladka bhi na kabhi nahi sudhrega... Usne ab tumhare saath kya kiya hai puttar... Did he tell that he love's you... Ya kuch shaadi karne ki waada kiya...

Ishita : no no aunty nothing like that... She said fully confused...

Toshi : toh ki gal hai...

Ishita : aunty woh raman ka accident hogaya... He is admitted in city hospital...

Toshi : tum kya bol rahe ho puttar... Hey matarani mera raman ka raksha karna... Raman abhi teek haina... She asked crying bitterly...

Ishita : aunty woh treatment chal raha hai.. Aap city hospital jaldi aajaye...
She cut the call and was waiting for Raman's mother...

After few minutes the nurse came and informed that he is out of danger and she can meet him...

Ishita : what will I do meeting him... Let me wait here itself... She thought... But something was pulling her towards his room... She just wanted to give him assurance that he is alright and his mother will be here in few minutes... So she went to his ward and looked at him..
She went closer and held his hands... And said... Don't worry raman you are out of danger now... Aapka mummy aa rahe hai... He was able to listen to her sweet voice... He just tried to open his eyes... But due to the effect of the medicines he wasn't able to open his eyes fully again he was only able to see her blurred visual .. He closed his eyes with drop of tears in corner of his eyes... She just wiped his tears and patted his hands...
That's when she heard loud cries outside... She came out and saw a elderly lady crying and asking the nurse about Raman's condition...

Ishita : I think she is raman's mother... She went near her... But as Toshiji was tensed about Raman's condition she directly went towards raman's ward without noticing ishita... Nurse, all these are raman's belongings please hand over to his mother she said handing over everything to the nurse...

Ishita : thank god raman's mother is here... Now she will take care of him... Abhi mujhe ghar jaakar kapde change karke college jana hoga... Though I would be late I should not miss 1st day of college she thought and left from there...

...

She changed her clothes and reached college... Without knowing about Raman's condition his friends were involved in raging the freshers... They saw ishita passing through them...

Romi: Oh teri... Udhar dekh... Kya ladki hai yaar... She is so beautiful... Usse bulao pehle...

Mihir : oyeee... Ladki idhar aao... Oyee...

Ishita : Mein?..

Mihir : Nahi tere baap... Arey idhar aao toh sahi...

Ishita : kaise batameez log hai... She mumbled to herself and walked towards them... Kya hai...

Mihir : kya hai matalab... We seniors are sitting here koi respect naam ki cheez hai ki nahi... Pehle good morning wish karo...

Ishita : good morning she said in a low tone...

Mihir : good morning sir bolo... Mein Teri senior hoon he said in a loud voice making her startled...

Romi: arey pyaar se mihir... Bachi hai dar jayegi na... Tum bolo... Naam kya hai tera... He asked lovingly..

Ishita : ishita iyer...

Abhi: wow tamilian ho... Mein bhi... Btw I am abhimanyu raghav... Aur amma mujhe pyaar se mani bulate hain...He said smiling like a fool nearing ishita...

Romi pulled him back by holding his collars from behind...

Romi: abey zyada excited mat ho... Woh teri hone wale bhabhi hai...

Abhi : kya... he asked shocked at his words...

Romi : haan... She will be My girlfriend... So tum usse door raho...

Abhi: arey romi aise mat bolo... Mein aaj tak kitni bhi ladki ko dekha sab ko tera girlfriend banaliya... This time it is true love... I am in love with her... Love at first sight he said dreamily.. Aur Woh bhi tamil mein bhi tamil so she will be My girlfriend...

Romi : arey ye kya tamil tamil laga raka... Mein usse punjabi sikha doongi so you don't worry...

Mihir : arey dono idhar kya kusur pusur kar rahe ho ...

Seeing all were involved in some deep conversation ishita was just standing there giving wiered expressions at them... That's when a boy came running towards them breathing heavily...

Mihir : arey niel kya hua...

Neil : raman ka accident ho gaya...

Kyaa... All 3 asked shockingly...

Neil: I just heard ashok telling his friends... When raman ran behind ashok chasing him... He was hit by a car... Some girl took him to the city hospital... He said breathing heavily...

All 3 were shocked and took their bikes and rushed towards the hospitals...

Ishita : they all are raman's friends?... Kaise batameez log hai... She said making a dirty face and went towards her classroom...

Omg poor Raman 😭