Ishra SS_Aashiq surrender hua...[part11 on page 123, 3Rd sep]

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divani

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello friends...
Am back with a new story...
This story is all about self centered egoistic and a flirty Raman...
And timid, soft natured and loving ishita...
I hope you guys will shower your love on this story too...
Do post your views on it...
And forget not to hit the like button...
Njoy reading..
-Love viji...

Aashiq surrender hua...

Part 1:

It was a exciting day for the students of city college .. As it was the 1st day of college, all the fresher students were excited for thier new start of this beautiful journey of college life ahead... Whereas the senior students were even more excited to welcome the freshers rather to say that They were excited to rag the juniors... Though raging was strictly banned in the college premises... The group of guys who were dominating was not concerned about any rules and regulations of the college... According to them rules were made to break...

A group of students were sitting in the college cafeteria making plans for raging the juniors...

Romi: matarani... Please fulfill my wish this year atleast, yeh saal toh college mein last year hoga... He said folding his hands and sending prayers to matarani...

Mihir : abey... What is your wish... That you have only this year to be fulfilled...

Romi : dont you know mihir... My only wish is that... Atleast this year mein ek achi si ladki patoangi aur uske saath koob saare romance karna hai... Jaise har koi couple karta hai...

Mihir : yaar baat toh sahi hai... Iss Pyaar karne waale log ko dekh kar mujhe itna gussa aata haina... I feel like punching them... Kab dekho public mein chipak te rehte hai... Aur singles ko jalate rehte hai in logon ne... He said fuming in anger...

Abhimanyu: arey yaar tum log na just bekar baatein karte hain.. woh sab chodo..Aur aaj ka plan kya hai... Aur yeh raman kahan hai... Abhi tak nahi aaya...

Mihir : raman huh?.. Yeh tum pooch rahe ho as if you don't know... Aur kahan hoga kisi fresher ladki ke saath flirt kar raha hoga...

Romi: uff... Raman ke baare mein baat mat karo yaar .. Usse dekh kar mujhe itna jalan hota hai... Ek hafte ke liye ek girlfriend banata hai woh banda... I dont understand kaise ladkiyan pat jaati hai usse dekh kar...

That's when romi earned a hard kick on his back...

Romi: abey... He turned and held the color of a person... Abey tum?.. Aise kyun maara aahhh.. Its hurting man... He said rubbing his back...

Person : this is what you will get if you bad mouth the RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA... He said putting on his shades taking it from his tee..

Romi : raman.. When did I bad mouth you yaar... I just told that Am jealous of you... Kaise paatate ho ladkiyan mujhe bhi toda sikhao na...

Raman : that's charm my boy.. Woh sab can't be taught that's my inborn talent you know... aur mein ladkiyan nahi patata hoon.. Girls fall for me... He said taking the seat nearby and putting his legs over the table...

At the same time there came a girl with a chocolate in her hands...

Girl: hey raman... This is for you baby...

Raman : ohh divya chocolate mere liye?... He said taking the chocolate from her hands and opening the wrapper and took a piece of it... Tum kao sweetheart... Isse kaake aur bhi sweet hojaogi said feeding the girl...

Divya: awee raman that's so sweet of you baby... You know aaj tum mere sapne mein aay ho...

Raman : wah... Not bad huh... Sapne mein aakar kya kiya meine... He said naughtily inching towards her...

Divya : raman.. Mere sapne mein hamari shaadi hogai... She said blushing like fool...

Raman : shaadi?... Yeh bhi acha hai...

Divya: toh tum mujhse shaadi karoge?..

Raman : haan woh bhi karlenge... Par do teen bache ke baad what say... He said winking at her...

Divya: raman you are too naughty... She said blushing and running from there pushing him slightly...

Raman took back his position sitting on the chair with his legs on table and placing his hands supporting his head...

All of his friends opened their mouth in Complete O... Burning in jealousy.. Looking at the scene that happened infront of them...

Raman : mooh band karo bachon... He said with full on attitude without looking at them...

Raman Kumar bhalla the boy with charm any girl can die for with full on attitude and ego who would never listen to anyone's words... He is all concerned about his happiness and nothing else...

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On the other side a beautiful girl dressed in a salwaar kameez with minimal make up, a typical south indian girl was excited for her first day of college... Her mother came calling out loudly.. Ishu... Ishu... Yeh sab books nahi chahiye hai kya...

Ishita : Nahi amma aaj first day so yeh sab nahi chahiye...

Amma : teekhe kanna... Tum jaldi breakfast karo aur Meine tumhari favorite payasam bhi banaya hai...come have soon, Tumhe college ke liye jaldi nikalna haina...

Ishita : thank you so much amma... Aap na world ki best amma ho...

Ishu ishu... There came another voice of her dad calling out for her from the gate...

Ishita : kya hua appa...

Appa: beta zara idhar aao...

Ishita went outside... Surprise... Shouted her appa...

Ishita : wow appa yeh mere liye...

Appa : haan beta... Yeh tere liye... Aaj college ki first day haina... You will go to college in your very own scooty... He said handing over the key to her...

Ishita : thank you appa... You are the best appa in the world... She said hugging him...

Ishita iyer a middle class girl the only daughter of her parent's.. who is beautiful, very talented, timid and soft natured girl with lots of hope's and dreams...

To be continued based on response 😉

INDEX :

Part 1 : above

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Edited by divan19 - 7 years ago

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 8 years ago

very interesting and amazing concept
loved the intro of ishra
do continue soon

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Nohsin10

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome update

Waiting for more updates

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow..college ff.i just college stories.Romi's wish is so funny yaar.Mihir just opposite.Abhimanyu too.Raman's entry was cool.though Raman Divya r not d real pair n raman was just flirting with her bcz of d way u wrote d scene i liked this pair too.don't get angry with me.Anyways any chance of Abhishek to come 4 Divya?Ishita seems to b simple n sweet n not raman's type.lets c how they will end up 2gether