Ishra SS_Aashiq surrender hua...[part11 on page 123, 3Rd sep]

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divani

@divan19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Aanahat
Lovely updt
Raman was rude towards his mom nd later apologies
Now he is in search of ishu.
Waiting for ishra meeting

Thank you ana

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divani

@divan19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: Divanru
Lovely update .
Raman net with accident while fighting with ashok .
Ishita,saw him and helped him in his treatment.
She informed his mother and went from there without meeting her ..
Ishita went to.college and met his friends .
She felt disgusted with their behavior.
Update soon

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divani

@divan19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Divanru
Nice update .
Ramsn is in hospital but don't like how he talked to his mother .
Raman has differences with his father .
All boys are behind ishita and mihika only .
At first abhi and romi were behind ishita now romi and Mihir are fighting for mihika .
Raman wants to know about the girl who saved her .
Ishita and mihika found a nice bound .
Update soon

Thank you so much for the lovely comment...

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divani

@divan19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Hello friends...
Am back with a new update...
Do post your views on it...
And forget not to hit the like button...
Njoy reading...
- Love viji ❤️

Ps: this update is specially dedicated to AMREEN who asked me to update this story...

Part 4:

Few days passed Raman was discharge from hospital... Mihika and ishita now became very close friends... Raman parked his bike and put on his shades from his tee... And walked towards the cafeteria where he usually find his friends...

On the way he was oogling at the fresher girls... His eyes fell on ishita and mihika who were sitting under the tree... Ishita was whole heartedly laughing for something hitting mihika slightly...

Raman was mesmerised by her looks... Her hair flowing in the air... Her laugh sounding like a musical tone to his ears... Her cute antics trying to escape from mihika's hold... Made him smile wholeheartedly...

He took his steps towards them... Before he could go near them... Divya came and stood blocking his way...

Divya : hi... Baby I missed you... Tum teek ho na... You know baby... I broke up with ashok for fighting with you... She said clinging on him...

Before he could push divya away from his away and look at ishita she disappeared from there...

Raman : shit yaar kahan chali gayi... He murmured to himself...

Divya : kya hua baby... Kuch Kaha Tum ne...

Raman : woh toh chali gai... Issi se kam chala na padega... He murmured to himself and smiled at divya... Oh my jaan I missed you too... He said hugging her back...

Divya : baby I love you so much... Abhi mein sirf tumse pyaar karti hoon... She said hugging him ...

Raman : haww... Love you too babe... Mein bhi sirf tumse pyaar karta hoon... He said winking and passing a flying kiss to the girl passing by his way... Babe ab tum class chalo... Il catch you later he said breaking the hug...

Divya : bye baby... I will miss you... She said pecking his cheeks...

...

Raman went towards the cafeteria and found his friends have a nice chat session... He went and kicked abhimanyu who was dramatically trying to explain something through actions...

Abhi: ahh... Raman you always do this... It's hurting man...

Raman : chill yaar.. Toda zandu balm laga lo... Dard kam hoga...

Abhi: idhar mein zandu balm lagaon?. He said pointing towards his lower back and glared at raman...

All his friends had a hearty laugh looking at abhi's expression...

Raman : then kya chal raha hai...

Romi: fo...

Raman : mooh tod doonga... Agar tumhe Fogg chal raha hai bola toh..

Romi smiled sheepishly as he was about to tell that only...

Mihir : yaar raman... Mujhe tera help chahiye...

Raman : kaise help...

Mihir : raman... Mujhe ek ladki ko patana hai yaar.. Please kuch tips do na...

Romi: raman, tum mere sachi wala dost hai toh isse kuch tips mat dena..

Mihir gave a deadly glare at romi...

Raman : arey kyun?...

Romi: woh ladki patane ko tips pooch raha haina... Woh meri girlfriend hai...

Mihir : kya.. Girlfriend?.. When did she become your girlfriend...

Romi: right from the second I saw her...

Both started involving in fight making raman irritated...

Raman : arey yaar.. Dono chup karo na... Pehle mere baat suno.. Aate hue meine do ladkiyon ko deka... Kya ladkiyan thi yaar... By god... Usme Ek Ladki ko dek kar mera hosh udd gaya... He said dreamily thinking of ishita...

Abhi: kisi bhi ladki ho... Meri ishu jaise koi nahi ho sakta hai...

Raman : ab yeh ishu kaun hai?..

Abhi: ishu, meri ishita meine bola na... That I am in love with one girl... He said smiling like a fool...

Raman : koi bhi ho I am not interested... Mujhe toh usi ladki ko patana hai... Jo meine abhi dekha... He said dreamily thinking of ishita...

...

It was during the lunch break ishita went to library to take some books for reference... Raman came to library following a girl and flirting with her... He was sitting right opposite to the girl and giving flirty looks to her...

That's when his focus turned towards ishita who was passing by with books in her hands...

Raman (St): Oh teri yeh toh wahi ladki haina... Subha meine haste hue deka... He said went running behind her... And stood in front of her blocking her way...

Seeing raman standing infront of her... She was pleasantly surprised to see raman standing in front of her...

Raman : hi...

Ishita : hello.. She said smiling warmly ...

Raman : nice smile... He said smiling back at her...

Ishita was totally confused by his behavior... She thought he was here to thank her for helping him...

Ishita : excuse...

Raman : raman, raman Kumar bhalla... Naam toh suna hi hoga.. He said with full on attitude...

Ishita : are you alright... When did you you get discharged from hospital?.. Kya kaha doctor ne... I think you need to rest for some more days...

Raman was totally confused by her talks..

Raman : tum mujhe jaante ho?..

Ishita (St): Oh lagta hai... He did not recognize me... Even I will not tell him that I was the one who admitted him in hospital...

Raman : hey... Pretty lady... He said patting her shoulder... Making her come back from thoughts...

Ishita : haan...

Raman : kya tum mujhe jaante ho...

Ishita : haan.. Woh.. Woh.. Nahi college mein sab batein kar rahe the that college president Raman Kumar bhalla is admitted in hospital...

Raman : Oh tk... Batein toh sab kartein hai... After all I am the charm of this college... He said touching her shoulder and smiling at her...

Ishita glared at him.. And looked at his hands that was placed on her shoulder making him withdraw his hands back in jiffy...

Thats when the bell rang...

Ishita : tk... Then.. Class start hogai... Mujhe jaana hoga... She said walking from there...

Raman : excuse?.. Your name?..

Ishita : woh jaan kar aap kya karoge?..

Raman : naam jaankar kya karoonga... Just to call you by name... After all we are good friends now... He said walking behind her like a cute puppy...

Ishita : friends?.. When did we become friends...

Raman : abhi todi der pehle... Please naam boldo... He said running behind her...

She stood few steps away from her classroom and looked back at him..

Ishita : stop following me like this... Koi dekhega toh acha lagega ... She said in a warning tone... And left from there...

Raman : no worries lolita... Vl find out your name very soon... He said shouting...

Ishita(St): Lolita?... Yeh lolita kya hota hai...

Raman : oyeee lolita... Tumhe hi bulaya... Tab tak tum tere naam nahi bologi na mein tumhe lolita hi bulaonga...

Ishita just gave a cold stare and went inside her classroom... He ruffled his hair and smiled seeing the direction where she left...

Ishita entered the classroom and settled beside mihika totally lost in her thoughts...

Mihika : ishu... She called her... Not getting any response from her... Ishuu... She called loudly shaking her...

Ishita : haan... Kya hua... She asked with a jerk...

Mihika : kahan koi hue ho...

Ishita : yeh lolita kya hota hai?..

Mihika : kya lollipop?..

Ishita : lollipop nahi lolita...

Mihika : lolita?.. Yeh kaise naam hai.. Mujhe nahi pata...

Ishita : Ayo mujhe abhi jaanna hai yeh lolita kya hota hai... Warna mera sar pat jayega...

Mihika : offo ishu don't worry abhi chutki mein bata deti hoon...

Ishita : kaise?..

Mihika : Google baba namah... She said dramatically...

Ishita : jaldi dekho na...

Mihika searched for the meaning in Google and stared laughing at ishita... Making her totally confused...

Ishita : kya hua... Aise kyun has rahi ho..

Mihika : yeh naam kahan se suna hai tum.. Kisi ne tumhe yeh naam se bulaya hai kya... She said laughing loudly ..

Seeing mihika's reaction she did not want to reveal that raman called her by that name...

Ishita : woh.. Woh.. Nahi toh... Mujhe kaun bulayega... Just meine suna hai... Ek ladka lakin ko bulate hue... Isiliye poocha... She said biting her nails...

Mihika : thank god ishu tumne aise koi nahi bulaya...

Ishita : aise kya hai uss naam...

Mihika : zara paas aao... Koi sunlega... She said with a naughty smile...

Ishita : aise kya hai... She said moving close to mihika...

Mihika : lolita ka matlab ye hai ki... A girl who has a seductive appearance... In short a very sexy lady... She said giggling in her ears... Making ishita widen her eyes in shock...

Ishita (St): how dare he... Such a cheapster he is... Usko toh mein... Muttal... Paithyam... She was cursing him in her mind making wiered facial expressions...

Mihika : ishu kya hua... Aise kyun ajeeb expressions bana rahi ho..

Ishita : kuch nahi... (ST) I am gonna surely kill him next time is he calls me so... She said cursing him in her mind biting her nails furiously...

Edited by divan19 - 8 years ago

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

fabulous update
ishu dint tell Raman that she is the one who saved him
lol Raman is a complete flirt
do continue soon

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my_lovelies

@my_lovelies

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Lovely update..lolita 😆

By d way you need to edit this update because some lines are repeated

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Amreen99

@Amreen99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Thanks viji di for dedicating this update to me😛

Amazing updt di😊

Raman is complete flirt guy😉

Kitna flirting karta h ye ladka...😆

Raman went to clg and started his flirting as usual...

Raman saw ishita and was mesmerised by her beauty...😳

Raman want to meet ishita...but divya aa gayi in middle..

Raman sab ke saath flirt karta h...😆

Raman ko dekh kar I remember kuch kuch hota hain ka shaharukh...di full on flirt...

Abhi loves ishita aur romi aur mihir dono mihika behind mihika...

Raman met ishita in library ...

Ishra convo was nice in library

Raman ishu ke saath bhi flirt karna shuru kar diya...

But ishita is jkr not to forget Raman...😆

Ishita ne Raman ko nahi bataya ki usne Usse hospital lijayi thi..

Waiting to see ishra love story di

Raman ne ishita ko lolita bulaya...😆

Ishita asked meaning of lolita name ...

She got angry on raman for calling her lolita..😆

Beautiful write up di...

Updt next part soon di

Thnx for pm...

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smilesusmita

@smilesusmita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

Lovely update

Raman did nt recognized her nd she also did nt say nything
Even Raman don't know who is abhi's ishita
Very interesting
Plz Continue soon

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Ishradiv

@Ishradiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Awesome update Raman called ishita has Lolita nd she don't the meaning of that she said to mihika they googlserch nd they got the mening haha continue soon nd thanks for the pm

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#200

Lovely update
Raman is a flirt hahah
Raman is, behind ishita ..
He doesn't know she saved him she didn't tell either .. He called her lolita 😆
Waiting for next