ISHRA OS || I Trust You Raman || updated 24/march

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello friends...

from when this vandu accident case start this whole idea of one shot was continuously running in my mind... and i couldnt stop myself to write it...

after finishing this blabbering i am very skeptical about the response i will get from all of you... but i think that i will not write as bad as cv has turned our favorite mohabbatein into yeh hai shaguniyya ka color plate...

okay now i really biting my nail while posting this one shot...

hope you all will not throw jootas and chappals on me and will bear my this not so good writing...

waiting for your lovely response.

love you all

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Posted: 8 years ago
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ISHRA One Shot: I Trust You Raman


DEHLI AIRPORT, MONDAY 8 PM

Ishita resting her head on raman shoulder while raman was caressing her back... raman feels some wetness on his shirt he pulls ishita more closer and says: please ishita... Stop crying...

Ishita was just snuggling more too raman and says: raman jana zaroori hai... ( is it necessary to go )

Raman nods and looks away...

Ishita cups his face and says: raman... ap wapis aogay na???

Raman kisses her forehead and wipes her tears and smiles weakly trying not to meet her eyes... ishita makes raman look into her eyes and says: why you are not looking into my eyes raman...

Raman: ishita keep believing on me... I didn't killed vandu... but don't ask anything... where I was... and now where I am going...

Ishita: I trust you raman...

Raman: I will never break your trust jaan... I will make everything alright...

Ishita: jaldi ana raman...

Raman: I will come soon jaan.. I love you

Ishita: I love you too...

As the flight announced, due to the sudden fear of losing raman, ishita tightens her hold on raman hands... raman presses her hand trying to assure her... ishita was not leaving his hands... raman forcibly pulls out his hands from ishita hold and hugs her tightly then breaks the hug and cups ishita face and says: ishita... listen to me carefully... I will return as soon as possible I can... tum apna bharosa nahe tootne dogi chahye kuch bhi hojaye... koi kuch bhi kahe... apna aur bachoon ka ghar waloon ka sab ka khyal rakhogi...

Ishita nods...

Raman: I can only tell you this that if I am hiding something from you its for our betterment...

Ishita nods..

Raman: romi I am giving you responsibility of kids and ishita...

Romi: bhai you don't worry... I am with you...

Ishita looks at romi.. raman nods and says: romi knows the truth... he will tell you when the right time will come...

Saying this raman leaves without turning back as if he will become weak when he will see ishita again... while ishita was just looking at his retreating figure waiting for his single glimpse to behold his image forever...

Tu jo nazron ke saamne kal hoga nahi

Tujhko dekhe bin main

Mar na jaaun kahin

Tujhko bhool jaaun kaise

Maane na, manaaun kaise?

Tu bata...

Ishita crying uncontrollably while raman seated in areoplane looking at picture of his happy family... back to bhalla hosue, Ishita hugging pihu at home trying to seek some peace from her in the absence of raman..pihu looks at ishita and says: papa kab ayengay... Ishita wipes her tears and kisses pihu and says: bohat jald...

AFTER TWO MONTH

Lots of things are changed in these two month... adi and ruhi were successfully handling the business under the guidance of romi while iyers and bhallas relation was still not mended. Raman doesn't return making iyers hatred grew more.. while bhallas were hopeful that raman will return soon and will make everything right...

Otherside, shagun suffers miscarriage when mani was gone to banglore while aaliya was at bhallas... mani was still helping nidhi to make sure she stay hidden as he fears if nidhi will get caught his betrayal will come in front of all

In all this ishita was just lost soul but still hopeful that raman will return... bad thoughts start occupying her as she feels raman is in some danger...

Roke na ruke naina

Teri ore hai inhe toh rehna

Roke na ruke naina...

Kaat'ta hoon laakhon lamhein

Kat'te nahin hain

Saaye teri yaadon ke

Hat'te nahin hain

Ishita holding raman picture .. she traces her finger on his picture and says: kab aogay raman... mein intezaar kar rahi hoon apka...

Sookh gaye hain aansu teri judai ke

Palkon se phir bhi baadal

Chhant'te nahin hain

Khudko main hasaaun kaisi

Maane na, manaaun kaise?

Tu bata...

Roke na ruke naina

Teri ore hai inhe toh rehna

Roke na ruke naina..

Pihu comes and hugs ishita wipes her tears and says: ishimaa don't cry.. papa will come soon... ishita smiles and picks up her in arms and head towards bhalla house ... but the harsh words of mrs iyer makes her stop her feet to move... she felt a pang in her heart..

Mrs iyer: wo bhaag gaya hai... He will not come back... And its all because of you ishita bhalla... you have given wrong statement and now that killer raman bhalla is free... my vandu is still waiting for justice...

Ishita hugs pihu more tightly ... and turns and says: bus amma... pihu kay samne to...

Mrs iyer: I will not keep quite... pihu ko pata hona chahiye uska baap kaisa hai.. murderer hai... killer hai... criminal hai wo...

Pihu hides herself more to her ishimaa and says: mere papa ne kuch nahe kiya... papa us din to police uncle say milne gaye thy.. us gulabo ko arrest karwane...

Ishita looks at pihu and says: gulabo...

Pihu realizes that she has broken her promise to her papa... mrs iyer shook her head and says: sun lo ishita bhalla... raman will get punishment... wo barbaad ho jaye ga...

Unable to bear more curses from her mother for her husband... ishita shouts: enough amma.. apky muh mein jo araha hai bol rahy ho...

Saying this ishita rushes inside the house... she looks at pihu and says: gulabo ko arrest... bolo pihu... ishimaa ko batao...

Pihu: wo gulabo muje kidnap karna chahti thi...

Ishita: matlab???

Pihu tell all about raman acting as gulabo to be with ishpi and how pihu made photogram account and misunderstand that gulabo been her papa and kidnapper trying to kdnap and raman arrested gulabo with the help of police...

Ishita listened each and every word calmly and hugs pihu... pihu says: ishimaa don't be angry with papa..

Ishita shook her head in no and says: ishimaa papa pay gussa nahe hai... papa bohat pyaar karty hain na humse... bohat pyaar...

Pihu: yes ishimaa papa loves us very much...

Ishita hugs pihu and thinks about raman and cries silently... Both were lost in the thoughts of raman when Bhallas door ring neelu opens the door while police enters... seeing police entering iyers also comes there... ishita ask neelu to take pihu from hall...

Police: ishita bhalla...

Ishita: jee ...

Police: we are here to inform you about something very important...

Ishita heart start pounding fastly thinking about the worst... She gathers some courage and says: yes...

Police: we have found mr raman kumar bhalla...

Before ishita could react mrs iyer again start her rant of cursing to raman and asking police to arrest and punish badly... police says: one minute mrs iyer... we have also arrested the killer of vandita balachandran...

Mrs iyer: raman ko arrest kar liye... Thank you so much murugan...

Ishita: aise kaise apne raman ko arrest kiya... he didn't done that accident...

Ishita start crying and feeling helpless... romi enters all tensed and worried holds ishita shoulder and says: bhai ko arrest nahe kiya police ne... police has arrested the real culprit...

Mrs iyer: matlab...

Police: the real culprit is bala chandran himself...

All stands shocked with the sudden revealation... Ishita looks at romi... Romi nods and says: haan bhabhi...

Ishita: jeeju...

Police: he himself accepted his crime...

Mrs Iyer: bala to meri vandu say bohat pyaar karta tha...

Police: pyaar to Karta tha per apni girlfriend raina say... And therefore he decided to kill vandita ...

Ishita: aisa nahe hosakta...

Romi: aisa hi hai bhabhi... Bhai ne muje bataya tha Kay bala sir ne bhai say car li thi unki...

Police: and one more thing nidhi is also arrested... Raman bhalla helped us to fet hold of nidhi... And we have also arrested the helper of nidhi...

Ishita: helper...

Police: haan abhimanyu raghav...

Romi tells how raman gets to know about abhi being the helper of nidhi and if he is leaving city its mean its related to nidhi... Raman goes behind... And he has taken the blame to make bala calm... And he wanted to investigate the real matter...

Ishita: raman kahan hai mujr milna hai unsay...

Romi was at lose of words... He was not able to tell the truth... Police says: in hospital...

Ishita start getting panic... She holds romi collar and says: what happened to raman... Hospital...

Police: when we were arresting nidhi... She tried to run awag and Raman bhalla risked his life and helps us in arresting nidhi... He has been stabbed by nidhi...

Ishita collapses on floor... Adi and ruhi held their mother close and says: ishimma papa will get fine... Be brave... Kich nahe hoga papa ko..

All heads to hospital... Doctor was treating raman while all were worried for Raman safety... Ishita was just sitting like stone... Mrs bhalla was crying... She felt a hold on her shoulder she sees mrs iyer ...

Mrs iyer: santoshi... Raman ko kuch nabe hoga... Maaf kar do muje santoshi..

Mrs bhalla hugs her and says: maafi na maang madhu... Pray kar mera puttar jaldi say changa hojaye.

Mrs iyer caresses Ishita hairs... And was about to say but Ishita pushes her and says: jao amma yahan say... Dekha apki baddua say mere pati aj zindagi aur mout kay beech hai...

Mrs Iyer: Kanna...

Ishita: nahe hoon mein apki kanna... Koi maa apni hi Beti ki barbaadi ki dua kaise kar sakti hai...

Mrs Iyer: ishu.. and cries...

Ishita shooks her and says: why you didn't trust raman... Raman think you and appa as his parents... He always stood beside you... But you didn't trusted him... Jao yahan say...

Doctor comes and tells them that now raman is out of danger... Without listening anything else... Ishita runs inside OT and sees Raman...

Tears were continously running from her eyes... She sits beside him and caresses his hairs..

Doctor was not allowing Ishita to sit there but sbe was not listening anything... She was sitting beside raman holding his hand... Romi makes Doctor agree tet Ishita stay there...

After two days

Raman opens his eyes and sees Ishita sleeping holding his hand... His lipa curve into smile... He touches her face... Sensing his touch Ishita opens her eyes and start crying...

Raman: shushhh... Jaan... Ishu... Stop crying... I am fine...

Ishita: muje kehty ho stunts na karoon khud ye stunt karne ki kiya zaroorat thi...

Raman: Nidhi ko pakarna zaroori tha...

Ishita: I love you raman... Phr aisa mat karna...

Raman: I love you too... Shrauv kshitija amma appa kaise hai...

Ishita: theek hain... Apna khyal karo. Pata hai pihu kitna ro rahi thi...

Raman: zaroor ishimaa ne tang kiya hoga

Ishita: raman...

Raman: acha baba sorry...

Door open and kids runs inside and hugs Raman... Bhalla family also comes there and thanks god for making Raman alright... All were happy and contended as everything is settled while iyers were outside the ward looking at raman with guilt and unable to face bhallas...


ishita rests her head on raman shoulder and closes her eyes to make herself believe that bad days are ended and her raman is with her safe and sound... while raman tightens his hold to assure her that he is with her...


That's it my dear friends I hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comment and response don't forget to hit like

Love you

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely... Brilliant...
How I hope this is the truth Raman is hiding...
The emotions were do pure... Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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super duper fantabulous ,,,,aur jitne v word h taarif k liye sb h is Awesome os k liye,,,gud job yhm se bhttt jyada better...n sorry for nt commenting regularly ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Awesome OS Rida
It was a twist that u showed Bala as Vandu's killer as he loved Raina
Romi also knew the truth
Raman was sstabbed ouch
Lovely OS Rida
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was a very sweet and well written OS - who knows what the CVs will give but you've given a nice, IshRa centric, version of what's going on! Thank you :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Lovely update 😊
This was a different kind of os 😛
Bala was himself the killer 😲
Thanx for the pm too 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Superb update
Even i m suspecting bala only
Loved the whole idea
Beautifully written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Awesome os Di
I felt like real itself
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome os Di

I felt like real itself


Thanks for pm Di

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