ISHRA ONE SHOT || Andhera Tera Maine layliya || last part;pg 8 feb/19

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello friends

I hope you all will be fine... This one shot is written on the request of kanika... Kanika I hope you will like it...

Firstly I would like to let you all know about the background of the story... This one shot is based on current track... Raman has disguised himself as gulabo and came to Mani house for his family as he got to know about Nidhi plotting using Mani... Here in my story shagun is not saint... She is with Nidhi and faking pregnancy... The scene start where Nidhi with the help of shagun and Mani kidnapped pihu and gulabo... Nidhi asked Ishita to come at cliff to save pihu her main motive is to kill Ishita right there to avenge her so called revenge...Mani doesn't know Nidhi real plan while shagun is happy as isheeta is gonna die...

Enough of my blabbering...

Below is the one shot...

last part : Mera mujh mein kuch nahe sab tera

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello friends... i hope you will shower love on this one shot also...please a good long comments will give me motivation to continue writing my unfinished story...

do read above background of the one shot

enjoy reader

|| ISHRA One Shot ||

~~~ Andhera Tera Maine Lay liya ~~~

Nidhi start screaming and screeching happily when she see Ishita coming there... While gulabo aka Raman trying to calm pihu...

Ishita: Nidhi... Pihu AUR gulabo jee ko Jane do...

Nidhi: today I will take all revenge from you...

Raman was looking around the cliff he sighed in relief when he found police surrounded them and are hidden behind Bush...

He thinks: thank God police are right there... I will not leave you Nidhi how dare you tried to harm my family...

Flashback shows how Raman got to know about shagun faking pregnancy and helping Nidhi while Mani is being blackmailed... He told all truth to police and inspector Abhishek hatch a plan to catch them in their own game...

Nidhi points gun at Ishita and says: you are very foolish Ishita.. now get ready to go to your murugan... I will not leave you today... You have to die...

Ishita sees pihu scared and trying to free herself from ropes to come to her ishimaa... Seeing her crying Ishita felt a pang in heart...

Ishita: Nidhi... Dekho mein ne tumhare kehne pay police ko nahe bataya Raman ko bhi nahe Kuch bataya... Please pihu ko Jane do... Usne to Tumhara Kuch nahe bigada...

Nidhi: uhmmm me think... Wait let me ask my my partner... Shagun...

Shagun comes smirking looking at Ishita while ishita were left shocked... Shagun looks at Ishita and says: oh... Come on isheeta... Really you always believe me whenever I ask forgiveness ... Kitne jaldi bewaqoof ban jati hi Tum...

Ishita: how could you shagun... Pihu...

Shagun cuts her and says: isheeta... Baby per bura asar Hoga if you give lecture... And both start laughing...

Nidhi: so shagun tell me what should I do with this pihu...

Shagun: maar do...

Raman tightens his hold on pihu and hides her in himself... While ishita screams at shagun. . and says: pihu ko janam Diya hai tumne...

Shagun: pihu is your and Raman daughter... Why I will love her... What will I get by letting pihu alive when she got to know about my truth...

Ishita cries...

Shagun: Nidhi it's getting late... Just finish them off my poor husband is waiting for me... After all I am pregnant.. phr usually shock bhi to Dena hai Kay in trying to save Ishita and pihu shagun lost her baby ... And Nidhi and shagun laughs...

Nidhi: what a wonderful of the world today Ishita is silent and not giving her bhashan bechari kaise degi... She didn't believe her own husband and trusted shagun and Mani who helped me... She left her own husband who was trying to ask forgiveness...

Shagun: pata nahe Raman kiyon ISS pay itna Marta hai itna pyaar Karta hain...

Unable to control his emotions Raman who was trying to cut the rope eventually succeeded and shouts at them: kiyon Kay Meri madrasan sab say alag hai she is an angel of my life.. reason of happiness... My strength... Saying this he gets up and pull off the wig revealing himself...

Ishita sees Raman and gets teary while shagun and Nidhi gets shock...

Raman lifts pihu who hides her face in her father chest scaredly Raman says: don't be scared pihu papa is here...

Ishita: Raman...

Raman: plan was superb Nidhi and shagun but you forgot that rkb is ahead of you... Kiya laga tha... You will try to harm my Ishita and pihu and I will let you touch her...

Raman smirks seeing pale face of Nidhi and shagun and says: kiya kaha tha Ishita is foolish... She trusted others over me... You try to use the difference between me and ishita... Iss mein Ishita ki galti nahe hai... It was my fault my ego and anger pushes Ishita away from me...

Raman: magar ab AUR nahe... Now you both will get punishment of your sins... Abhishek...

Ishita was just numb to react...Nidhi and shagun gets stunned to see surrounded by police... Raman signs one police officer came and took pihu from Raman and was about to take Ishita but Nidhi smirks and pushes shagun from the cliff [here Ikklls shagun granting wishes of all forum members] all attention goes towards shagun and Nidhi pulls Ishita and put gun on her head...

Raman: don't dare to hurt Ishita...

Abhishek: leave Ishita... And surrender yourself to police.

Nidhi: nahe mein marongi to ISS Ishita ko maar KAR...

Raman: no...

Nidhi: now how will you save your Ishita Raman... I will kill her Infront of your eyes.. AUR Tum Kuch nahe KAR sakogay...

Raman: don't shoot.. no...

Nidhi: aye... Koi Shaan paati nahe karna ... Warna ..

Raman: nahe.. choor do Ishita ko...

Nidhi laughs and says: Raman tumne Keh Diya AUR maan liye..

Saying this she was about to hit the trigger but Raman was sharp enough to understand her meaning he pushes Ishita from Nidhi hold and took the bullet on his chest unable to hold his balance he falls from cliff...

Ishita gets devastated seeing Raman lifelessly falling she shouts: ramannn...

Nidhi gets arrested by police... Ishita runs towards Raman she sees Raman holding the tree he smiles at her... And says: I am sorry ishita... Ishita shook her head and screams for help while Raman hold on the tree loosen and he falls...

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He goes and ishita kept looking at him... His last smile...

Acha chalta hoon

Duaaon mein yaad rakhna

Mere zikr ka zubaan pe swaad rakhna

@ hospital

All family were crying thinking about Raman ... Ishita was just sitting like stone only his last smile was flashing in her mind...

Dil ke sandookon mein

Mere ache kaam rakhna

Chitthi taaron mein bhi

Mera tu salaam rakhna

Adi and ruhi were hugging their ishimaa and crying for their papa feeling of loosing their papa was making them scared...

Mr and Mrs bhalla were crying.. Romi who have just got to know about the accident came running there and see all crying for his Bhai.. he couldn't stop himself and says: maa papa... Why are you crying... Papa apne kaha tha na you doesn't feel proud to be called Raman papa... Raman Bhai apky sab say Bure bete ... Maa you couldn't understand your child...

Mr bhalla: Romi...

Romi: no today I will not stop.. I know this is not write time.. but I will not stop... Ajeeb baat hai... When Bhai was at fault no one dare to say anything to him and when he was right all start accusing him... Kiya kabhi thande demag say apne Bhai say baat ki...

He looks at Ishita and goes to her he kneels down and says: bhabhi... You know na how much Bhai loves you and kids.. but you never trust him... You have also kidnapped Nidhi out of law to get statement in favour of ruhi... Illegal to ye bhi tha... Per jab Bhai be aisa kiya to wo galat AUR ap Sahi kaise ...

Ishita looks at Romi as she recollects how not only Raman she was also at fault in MMS fisco... Romi continue to say: you made my Bhai a monster... Threat to his own kids... he kept his ego aise and disguised as women to safeguard his family... You trusted everyone but not Bhai... I am not blaming you but just showing you the true picture...

Doctor comes and says: now nothing is left in our hands...Any one from you can see him...

Ishita moves towards ICU her heart bleed seeing Raman laying lifelessly... Needle pricked in his arms but he is not complaining... Tears were endlessly flowing from eyes... She remembers how Raman saves her and got hit by bullet...

Andhera tera maine le liya

Mera ujla sitaara tere naam kiya

Channa mereya mereya

Channa mereya mereya

Channa mereya mereya beliya

O piya..

She feels Raman getting up she says: Raman...

Raman smiles at her and without saying anything he turn to leaves...

Ishita: Raman... Kahan ja rahy ho...

Raman: if I stay back I will only hurt you...

Ishita: nahe. Raman aisa nahe hai...

Raman: aisa hi hai Ishita...

Ishita cries and says: I love you Raman...

Raman: I love you too Ishita... Lekin mein tumhain AUR dukh nahe day Sakta... Jane do muje ...

Mm.. mehfil me teri hum naa rahe jo

Gham toh nahi hai, gham toh nahi hai

Qisse humare nazdeekiyon ke

Kam to nahi hai, kam to nahi hai

Kitni dafaa subah ko meri

Tere aangan mein baithe maine shaam kiya

Channa mereya mereya

Channa mereya mereya

Channa mereya mereya beliya

O piya..

Ishita dream break as she see Raman struggling for breath... Ishita scream for Doctor.. Doctor comes and ask Ishita to move out...

Ishita gets scared remembering her dream of Raman going away... She reminisces the time they spend together... Their love... Their sweet bickering... She cries.

Doctor comes with a sad face while ishita runs to them and says: Raman... Theek hain na... Kuch bolty kiyon nahe.. Romi holds her while ishita was going mad thinking that Raman is leaving her...

Doctor: I am sorry...

Ishita screams Raman name and falls on floor while family unable to believe that their Raman left them without giving them any second chance... Kids were crying thinking that their papa left them.. they will not get his love pampering and scolding...

Tere rukh se apna raasta mod ke chala

Chandan hoon main

Apni khushboo chodke chala

Mann ki maya rakhke tere takiye tale

Bairagi, bairagi ka sooti chaula

Odh ke chala

Channa mereya mereya

Channa mereya mereya

Channa mereya mereya

O Piya..

i know its incomplete... if i get good response i will continue it..😉😆

That's it I couldn't write more... Hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comment and response

Love you

Rida

Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one shot
but Raman should not have died


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Edited by dhruvharia - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvharia

Nice one shot

but Raman should not have died


Yay me first to comment


thanks dear
its not complete...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Raman died. O god this was so good Not exactly but I hope something similar happens in the show too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start
This is much needed lesson for all.
Ishita over trusting outsiders time and again specially Shagun
Nidhi-Shagun hatching
RKB in action that too in dual role
Good for nothing police again failed
They surrounded still Nidhi could throw Shagun, catch Ishita and at the end Raman is shot.
Romi showed double sided picture. Till now it was one sided.
And he is true, Raman wasn't right either but so much indifference from family.

As of now a sad end, but a brilliant write up
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb os... end was emotional... plz di raman ko thik rakhana...vo ishu ko chod kar nahi ja sakta...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsome update
Pls update soon
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update n also very interesting part hope raman ll be alright soon n pls next part dena plss

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