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shavetamehta32

@shavetamehta32

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

wonderful awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous incredible super se bhi uper brilliantly written beautiful I liked the story very much plzzz update soon next part waiting for the next update. update soon

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divz9769

@divz9769

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Beautiful os nice concept

ishra twins is so cute ishan and rashi cute name

they both wants ishitas attention ishita received invitation for reunion party raman asked her what is that she said invitation for reunion she said she will not attend raman insist her finally she aggreed

raman goes to office mihir said he have to attend some party as sponsor he denied saying he have to takecare of twins he received ishitas call she asked him to come with ger to the party he got to know its same where he have to go he said he can't come to ishita

he wanted to give surprise to ishita he came home when ishita left he was going when twins strated crying raman took them to the party they were too happy

subbu was ogling at ishita laxmi is so cheap she was trying to insult ishita raman came their with twins they shouted loudly for their mumma ishita gave reply to lakshmi

last scene was too beautiful

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cutekhusboo

@cutekhusboo

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

awesome os
loved it
loved rashi & ishaan's cute antics
they r super cute

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--HANISA--

@--HANISA--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

SO LOVELY DEAR JUST LOVE IT

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rufana

@rufana10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

lovely OS

ishra's symbols of love...ishaan and rashi

awww...dey were so cute...

bonding of adiru wid their ishimaa was nice...

ishita went to d reunion party which was sponsored by raman...

he came there wid ishaan and rashi to give surprise to ishita...

subbu and laxmi...disgusting people...

loved how raman warned dem...

ishra dance was fab...

loved it...

superb di!!

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Dewdivz

@Dewdivz

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Lovely os
Ishra happy with ruhi, adi, twins
Cute babies
Isu gave good answer to subbu and his wife
Thnkz pm

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Ishra_g26

@Ishra_g26

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

lovely os rida dii
ishra happily married with their symbol of luv
ishaan & rashi
adi ru happy to hving their siblings
ishita reunion party
sponsered by raman only
that subbu & laxmi
ishra gve good answer to tgem
last their dance
happy family
luved it dii

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Swarna

@swa6

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

very nice os dear...

its always mummas can take care f everything n multitaskers😉 daddies are good for nothing when it comes to managing kids...😆 Raman experienced enough for life in a day alone with his four kids 😆

keep writing...waiting for next update😊