Ishra:writing challenge on OS,TS based on Idea - Page 10

Lovely update!!!
Poor Raman!!!
Story showed the importance of how effectively the mother takes care of the family.
Lovely


That's really great...
Thanks for the pm.

Rhimjhim.. please make the title like this it will be helpful...
Ishra writing challenge: os home alone with kids : PG no Jan/4...
It will be helpful...

so beautiful
poor raman has to manage kids

Lovely os rimjhim
poor raman n mihir
bachcho ne band baja di unki
it was fun reading it
hoping 4 more in future

nice story loved it
aww ishra had twins
ishu not in mood to go on reunion and raman convinced her to go
oh Teri mihir tune to raman ko mast surprise de diya sponsor bhi kiya to kya biwi me reunion party
chalo ishu be ready to be surprised
uff this subbu shaadishuda hokar bhi ishu pe line maar raha hai
waah path line maar raha hair air biwi ji ulta ishu ko showoff karke dikha rahi hai arey pagal pehle apne pati ko sambhal
wah ishu kya kaha that don't be sorry
oho puttar ne entry maari apne twins me saath
ishu roh ishu her kids also doesn't like subbu nautanki
puttar searching biwi
this Laxmi MATLAB piche ki pad gayi ishu ke
chalo raman enters and jya jawab mila subbu air uski biwi ko good one
oho possessive puttar warns them to stay away from his biwi
aww and I love the song serial me scene ki yaad dila di
nice os
if someone also wanna write a short story then message me about the update I would love to read and review it

Lovely beautiful OS...

lovely os
bechara raman thak geya bache ko manage krte krte
dats y mother is supr imp.
office scene i can't stop my laughter
loved it

This is sweet .. ishra have 2 kids of their own.. aww.. I liked the way ruhi and adi addressed her as mumma.. nice touch . And of course Raman needs to be pampered.. he's the baby now. 😉

Superb os
Kids r too cute
Poor raman
Loved it

another nice story
aww poor raman stuck in between his four kids
chalo bhae raman kangaroos hain bhi to tere
poor raman missing biwi so much air upar she bacche pagal kar rahe gain
biwi ka phone aaya puttar ki roh jaise lottery lag gayi ho
aww I love reading this phone call conversation
oh Teri bhalla kids in ramans office
uff yahan abhi bhuchal aaya tha aur raman ka office main tabahi macha gaya
chalo an adi ka exam bechare raman ko thoda tension ho gaya ki an roh gaya bhae biwi mare GI
ye biwi back to her home bacho she zyada papa khush ho gaye honge
aww puttar cutely sleeping in biwis embrace and telling her how much he missed her

Awesome is