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Aradhana

@aru_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#571

very nice update
felt bad for adi

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swathin

@swathin

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#572

Superb update
Loved it
Felt bad 4 Adi

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Jyoti8

@Jyoti8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#573

Superb update

Adi missing his family and dad alot, his loneliness making him more sad

He is jellying up with ishita and kids very nicely

Adi identified raman and cursing his fate as he is not part of it

Continue soon

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#574

Lovely beautiful update .

Loved it a lot .

Felt bad for adi ,why Raman didn't recognized adi .

Update soon

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: Divanru
Lovely beautiful update .
Loved it a lot .
Felt bad for adi ,why Raman didn't recognized adi .
Update soon

thanks a lot.

raman saw Adi 7 years ago when he was a mere child but now he changed a lot so Raman didnt recognized him.

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boran

@boran

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#576

lovely update
adi is seeing the bond ishita shares with her kids
he also sees the bonding between the siblings
he is thinking how lonely he is and how these kids have such Caring mother and a family that pampers them
he is angry that neither his mom cares for him and separated him from his big family and his father also doesn't care to check him
adi is amazed that his mom doesn't know about his favourites and ishita noticed in such short span of time
he wish in the next birth he get her as his mother
shagun is trying to interact with raman but not getting a chance
finally raman came face to face with his father
he is shocked that these kids with whom he is bonding are actually his siblings raman doesn't recognizes adi
will wait to read next part update soonish 😊

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#577

Nice

Adi is craving to see ishita as his mother

He is imagining himself in that beautiful famiky

He was shocked to see raman and happy that it is his family but scared will he be able to become a part of it

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DivanAngel

@DivanAngel

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#578

Lovely update

Adi come to know about raman

Bring rooh.ris rub father

Cont soonnn

Thanks for pm

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#579

Awesome update

Poor Adi craving for love and care but shagun was busy searching Raman😡😡

Adi wants to be part of rooh and her siblings family ...and wants to share ishu's motherly love

Finally he met Raman and felt little jealous for his sister. ..that she got all the the love care and family but he got nothing. ...Raman didn't recognise him but was thinking about his first son😭

Continue soon

Thanks for pm 😊