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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: peg_pionne

Great start waiting for the next part 😉


thnxx dear
updating in a while
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Posted: 8 years ago

SHOT 2

She was lost in a heaven, the pleasure that kiss was giving her was just taking to a different world altogether. His lips began moving against hers hungrily. She clutched his collars tightly while his assault on her lips continued. He moved his fingers in her tendrils freeing them while she pulled him more to herself as her fingers found their way to his hair. She opened her mouth giving him an entry and he took in all her flavours. They kissed for a long time and parted back as they were now getting breathless. Her eyes were still closed as he looked at her parting back, catching his breath, it seemed she was still lost in that moment. He kept looking at her without blinking his eyes, waiting for her to open hers. He wanted answers to some questions. She opened her eyes after feeling no further movement from him for a long time. Her hands were now resting on his collar while he was looking at her keenly. Their eyes met yet again and did the rest of the talking though their mouths refused to do their job. Raman was the first one to break the eye lock as he gained his senses and soon, they were back home after a silent journey. They settled in their respective beds but sleep was nowhere near their eyes. Ishita cuddled to her pillow thinking about the happenings of the evening while raman was in similar thoughts too. That kiss didn't feel bad, it didn't feel wrong, in fact, it felt heavenly to be in his arms, his gaze gave her goose bumps and the memories of that kiss made her shiver. Her fingers touched her swollen lips only to hiss with the small cut he had given her, he shouldn't have been this rough with her she mentally noted and cursed him for the same though a sly smile played on her lips as she finally gave herself to sleep hiding her face in her pillow thinking about his feelings on the same. This was surely something more than friendship, she had understood by now, they had crossed that line today and she hoped for another development in their relationship soon too. The next morning would surely be a bright one for her, and for them too, she just couldn't wait for the break of the dawn.

Raman lazily woke up and his eyes fell on the wall clock making him realise that he was super late for office today. He cursed himself for having slept till late and the next moment, the reason for this struck his mind. The happenings of the last day again created a havoc inside him and he wondered what would be ishita's take on the same. He didn't want to lose his best friend, his chotu ishita because of a single mistake of his, maybe he should not have kissed her just like that in the heat of the moment, but this wasn't in his control, he had just gone with the flow. He always had some feelings for ishita, well this was the reason of his break up with shagun, as according to her, he was so much into ishita that he just gave a damn to shagun's existence, he never cared about her more than actually equivalent to how he cared for ishita and every single time, he had ,made shagun understand that there was nothing more than a pious and true friendship between them, both had been together since childhood so knew the other better than anyone else, they had always been caring towards the other, especially raman. But that day when shagun crossed all her limits, talking ill about his relationship with ishita, calling her names, he had enough. He slapped her, strictly against the values his mother had brought him up with to respect woman, taken by his rage. He could never bear a word against ishita and that was the reason he had not told ishita about his break-up as he didn't wanted her to feel guilty about the same. At that time, he hadn't realised that, he just assumed that shagun wanted to get rid of him so targeted his friendship with ishita, his belief had got strengthened when he had caught her red handed, with another guy, she was actually cheating on him and finally, they buried their already dead relation.

And what had happened the last night was a major development in their (ishra) relationship. He had kissed her, and she had kissed him back with the same fervour. Did it mean what he was thinking? He hoped for the best and making up his mind to talk to ishita, he ran to finish his morning chores. He was all ready to talk to her now, but what would he talk to her? He didn't knew, he knew he had feelings for her, he was sure about that but was just a bit nervous about his choice of words. He didn't want her to feel that he pities her. He knew his chotu, she won't bear it and he will lose her for a lifetime, something he clearly didn't want to happen. He was measuring his room in tension when his mother called him for breakfast. He took a deep breath, closed his eyes and making up his mind, telling himself to be strong and have a talk with her before things go out of control, stepped out of his room determined to talk to her.

He didn't pay any heed to his mother's calls for having breakfast. He just ran into the iyers and barged into her room without caring to knock the door only to have to close his eyes and the door instantly seeing the sight before his eyes. "shit!!" he murmured and walked out of the room. She was changing when he barged into her room like a cyclone, unannounced. Though it was her mistake, she should have locked the door before doing her job but he was equally guilty too, he should have knocked at least once before storming inside a girl's bedroom like that. She cursed him and herself too and after a lot of hesitation, opened the door knowing well he was waiting for her, though things had turned more awkward for them now.

Raman didn't meet her eye or even looked at her once. He just entered the room and settled in the couch and another round of silence followed. Ishita was looking up at him in between awaiting his talk but he was just not speaking up. Damn, why had this awkward situation cropped up between them, why couldn't things be simple for them? She thought and for a change, this time, she decided to break the ice.

"raman" she called him softly but he still refused to look at her, idiot was busy niharofying the whole room but her not giving a damn to all the efforts she had put in to get ready for him. She cursed him again but then, suppressing her anger, decided to have a talk with him like mature adults. This wasn't the right time to indulge in a fight, they had more important things to do as of now.

"raman, whatever happened last night... I think" before she could say any further, he cut her in between

"no ishita please don't say anything, I know things have gone a bit awkward for us at the moment, but please don't say or make me feel that you are regretting it and that it should not have happened between us, because that would be something unbearable for me. I won't be able to take it. I know I might be sounding stupid and mean but the truth is, I.. I love you ishita, I really do, maybe I always have but just failed to realise it, I always suppressed my feelings for you in the name of friendship but I can't do it anymore as finally, I have decided to listen to my heart and follow it, kar hi li maine mohabbat ishita, kar hi li... kya karoon dil hai na, aur dil toh pagaal hai, ek pagli madrasan se pyaar kar baitha... (wiping his tears) it's ok if you don't feel the same for me, I will make sure that I never become the hurdle in your way, I will never force you for anything

He finally looked up at her awaiting an answer. She just kept silent giving him other thoughts about the same and he got up to leave but halted hearing her

I -ho gaya? Bol liya jo bolna tha? You are wrong Mr.Bhalla, your heart isn't but you are an idiot, you claim to be my bestie, you claim that you know me more than anyone else but see you can't even read my eyes, why the hell do you think I let you kiss me last night and why I kissed you back? I too love you, you duffer, but just like you I needed a push to realise the same, which our kiss from last night gave me, but...

He didn't let her complete, just ran to her closing the distance between them as he took her in a tightest possible hug. Both kept professing their love to the other as their mouths didn't get tired of singing the same and eyes never left the other. Raman dropped a soft kiss on her temple again pulling her in his embrace. Both stayed there for a long time when raman spoke up

R -you know what ishita.. I was about to say sorry for having barged in your room like that... but I guess I don't owe you an apology anymore... after all you are officially mine now... isn't it?

Ishita shook her head smacking him making him smile

I -hmm... I am all yours

So that's all for now

Will wait for your responses

akriti154 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
updated the next part
hav a look
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Posted: 8 years ago
Update faster di am waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update akku
At last they confessed their feelings for each other
Update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful part n loved it ek aur part likho na plss how ishra talk to their parents n finally ishra realise that they love eachother n confessed too cool n pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for quick update Akriti... its a beautiful update indeed... waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update...
Finally both realised Thier feelings...
Raman went to her house and proposed her...And she reciprocated the same...
Loved it ..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
finally they realized it z mor dan frndshp n confessed thir love
continue soon
thnx for da pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Finally they confessed.
Happy
Update soon

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