Meri ishq khumaari bas tumse,pt 9 on pg 131 on 25 /1 - Page 26

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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful teaser di
Ishra's childhood is always treat to read
And their childish talk is so cute
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Part 2
Lovely update...
Raman told toshiji about his new friend he narrated how they become friend & mention he share his food with her. Sweety toshiji friend tease raman as he keep on blushing when mention about his new friend. Poor raman he get annoyed as sweety make fun of him...raman could not remember her name. Toshiji know his son very well & told her not to disturb his son. Appa told amma about ishita new friend he wiling to wait with her untill he reach as ishita is alone. Ishita praise raman food & wish amma to do for her also. Ali raman friend angry with ishita as she took his place. Raman feel bad as ali not wiling to friend with him again. Ishita told ali about her intention. Finally Ali accepted ishita friendship raman become happy ...thank u for pm & update
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Lovely teaser...
Cute ishra raman invite ishita & her parent to his house...
Continue soon..
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HHi friends back with new update .


Part 3

Some more days passed Ishra along with Ali become very good friends ,they shared a very nice bond now . One day ishali (ishita+ Ali) saw Raman coming to school dressed in a black suit teamed up with crisp white shirt along with a small black bow tie in his neck . They smiled fully on his sight but also were amazed to see him dressed like this ,before they could ask anything Raman himself asked flaunting himself
"dekho main ekdum plinch ki talah lag laha hoon na " ( see I m looking like prince na ).

Ishrali (together )- haan laman tum to ekdum princh hi lag lahe ho .lekin tumne ye dress kyun pahni hai ,aaj koi funchion hai kya ( but why are you wearing this , today any function is there ).

R- aley aaj mela bilthday hai .

Ishrali (singing )- happy birthday to you

That's when the teacher arrived in the class and informed everybody " so kids today is one of your friend's Raman bhalla's birthday is there . We will sing happy birthday son for him then he will distribute chocolates to everybody ,ok ".

K- (singing)- ok ,mam .

T- then come let's wish Raman .

"Happy birthday to you ,happy birthday to you dear Raman ,happy birthday to you ."

Kids also repeated same and wished Raman ,he got too happy listening to everybody .Then he distributed chocolate to his classmates ,then gave to his teacher ,then he took ishali with teachers permission with him and went to every class for giving chocolates to every teacher .

At the lunch time Ishrali were having their tiffin when Raman spoke " Ichita, Ali aaj tum log mele ghal aana ,thik .
(Ishita ,Ali today you people are coming to my house )

I- kyun .(why)

R- ale buddhu ,aaj mela bilthday hai ,main ab 4 years ka ho gaya ,ab main big boy go gaya hoon icliye mele ghal pal palty hai .
(arey duffer today is party in my house as its my birthday ,I m of 4 years now ).

Ali - haan main to bilkul jaaunga aur aunti ki kheer bhi khaoonga ,wo bahut tasty banati hai ( yeah I will surely go and will also eat kheer made by aunty ,she makes very tasty kheer).

I- okk ,main bhi aaungi lekin mujhe to tumhala ghal hi pata nahi hai .
( ok,i will also come but I don't know your house )

R- ale tumhale appa to jaantein honge na ,main unko bhi invite kal loonga , theek .
(your father must be knowing it ,I will invite him too ).

I(sadly )- Phil meli amma akele ghal pal bachengi .( then only my amma will be left alone)

R- koi nahi main unko bhi bula loonga , haan ye theek lahega,tum uncle aul aunty ,chab koi aana .
(don't worry I will call your amma too ,yeah this will be all right ).

I- achcha bolo tumko gift mein kya chahiye ,main appa che wahi khalidaungi .( tell me what you wanna as gift ,I will buy same from appa ).

R(after thinking for sometimes )- mujhe na ballliii wali lemote cal chahiye ,itni bali.

(I need a biggg remote car ,this much big )

He said showing the size to her ,while she was listening him keenly .Both decided too that what more they will do in party ,they even decided what will they play and also that he will show her his room .Soon their school time ended and all the kids went back to their house .Raman was waiting for Ishita's appa to come ,so that he can invite them but to their bad luck today instead of appa ,iyers driver came to pick ishita. Raman told ishita to come along with her parents to party ,she happily agreed and went to her house .

Raman too returned to his house ,he happily announced that his friend ,ichita is also coming to party ,now toshiji and sweety aunty can see how beautiful she is . On the other hand ishita reached her house and told amma about going to Ramans birthday party . Amma agreed, thinking she has just come from school , soon she will forget . Ishita changed her cloths ,had her lunch and went to sleep .

In evening Raman got ready wearing a blue pathan suit with black waistcoat . He was looking too cute and handsome in his pathani awtaar .Soon the party started ,kids started coming to bhalla house . Bhalla's has invited their close relatives and friends for party along with Raman's friends . Soon all his friends had arrived except ishita. Toshiji called Raman for cutting cake but he was standing on entrance ,waiting for ishita but she didn't come .Mr bhalla and toshiji were calling him ,but he was not coming rather he was crying that his best friend didn't come . Finally toshiji and Mr bhalla took him to cut the cake by giving him different offers of his favorite chocolate, ice cream and toys but he was all gloomy thinking that his best friend didn't come moreover if she will come and see that he had cut cake without her then she will cry a lot .

On the other hand ishita too was crying uncontrollably as her parents were denying saying they don't know Raman'd address moreover only Raman had called them not his parents ,how can they go to anyone's house that too in party without any invitation .

I(crying )- Maine bola na laman he mujhe aul aap dono ko bulaya hai ,uchki biithday palty mein .( I told you na ,Raman had called him along with you two in his birthday party .)

Appa- I understand your point kanna hut I don't know his house ,how we will go to his house .

I(thinking for a while )- ale wo to Ali ke ghal ke paach rahta hai ,aap uchke ghal chalo ,Phil hum wahan se laman ke ghar pahunch jaayege ( arey he lives near Ali's house ,you take me to Ali's house from there we will reach to Raman's house ).

Appa - but kanna I don't know Ali's house too .

Ishita again started crying and told " chab aapki galti hai ,aapko mujhe lene aana chahiye tha na ,to aap laman che uchka adless bhi pooch lete.( its all your fault why didb you come to pick me ,if you would had come ,you must had taken his address na ) wo kitna dukhi hoga mele bina (he will be so sad without me ).

She said sadly and again started crying .Seeing her crying like that appa promised ishita that he will take to her to his house next day but she was still sad and was not believing her father, atlast appa took her for shopping ,she bought a big remote control car as his gift while a barbie doll set for herself , then she had pasta outside and finally come back with a tub of kesar pista ice cream and a coronet but then also the sadness that she couldn't attend his birthday party was still there .Till the time she was wake ,she was again and again confirming her father that he will take her to Raman's house next day ,finally she slept after long by getting scolding by appa for asking same question again and again .

There bhalla's were also guilty thinking that they didn't went to school to call ishita for party beside knowing that ishita is his best friend .Mr bhalla decided to go to his school next day and invite ishita and her parents for dinner .Raman slept without creating any fuss as he got tired playing with his friends .

Next day ishita got ready for school and she kept his car to give him when appa told her not to take it along but ishita says that it's Ramans birthday gift and what she will gift him ,If he asked for his gift .Mr iyer didn't have any answer to her question and kept the toy in car . Soon they reached the school ,both ishra reached school together ,they came out from car and went to each other . Raman was angry on ishita as she didn't come last day . Ishita passed the big box to him and spoke " laman ye tumhala gift hai "( raman this is your gift ).

R- I m not talking to you ,tu kal mele ghal kyun nahi aayi ,main inzaal kal laha tha na ( why didn't you come last night ,I was waiting for you ).

I- aley main to aa lahi thi ,apni led wali flock bhi nikali thi pal appa laaye hi nahi bole ki unko tumhala ghal hi nahi pata .
( I was coming ,even I took out my red frock also but appa told that he don't know your house ).

R(seriously)- ohh to ye ploblem thi ,main bhi kitna buddhu hoon ,mujhe unko ghal ka addless batana chahiye tha ( ohh that's the problem ,how stupid of me ,I should had told my address to uncle ).Solly (sorry).

I- main bhi solly, tujhe pata hai main kitna loyi ,mujhe bahut bula laga .
(me too sorry ,you know I cried a lot)

R- main bhi bahut loya phil cake kata .
( I too cried a lot then cut the cake ).

They were busy in talking to themselves while their fathers met and introduced each other ,they talked about their kids and their behavior . After talking some more Mr bhalla invited iyers for dinner which Mr iyer happily accepted . Ishita gave the packet to her ,which Raman opened immediately ,he got happy looking to his favour car . They played with it for sometimes when the school bell rang ,Rsman. gave the car to his father and instructed him to take it to house safely . Mr bhalla nodded and went taking his car and reminidibg Mr iyer again ,he promised saying they will definitely come .

That's all for now friends hope you like this ,enjoy reading and do comment.

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Updated next part ,enjoy reading .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very cute update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sweet cute fabulous update dear
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Superb update
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