Writing Treasts : welcoming all (updated part 6) and note on page 52 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
is it akriti. Ok akku ji, i want to continue after you. :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: laughingpearls

is it akriti. Ok akku ji, i want to continue after you. :-)

just pm her and tell
So she won't say it to other
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
excellent start di
loved it so much

ishra are newly married
wow..that's really suprerb

thanks for pm
akku di...please update soon

wonderful idea
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
nice one
good idea waiting for akku
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Akku Di
We all are waiting
Update the next part na
Sooner
Please😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Akku Di degi
She said she will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

heyy cuties

I am here with my part of the story

and those who haven't read the first part,here's the link PART 1

PART 2 HAULE HAULE HO JAAYEGA PYAAR

Shagun was curious to see whom raman bhalla had married

She made her way to the stage where the couple was being showered by greetings and blessings for a happy life ahead with ashok in tow

S -so you are the one

Shagun scanned ishita from top to bottom she was a simple girl dressed in a heavy pink color saree light make-up and an average personality definitely not suitable for raman bhala according to shagun

Ishita felt uncomfortable with the way shagun was looking at her and unknowingly held raman's hand and as if sensing it raman slipped his hand around her waist holding her tight bringing her closer to him unmindful of the thousand pairs of eyes watching their every single move and a pair of fuming eyes too

The couple shared a beautiful eye- lock much to the annoyance of shagun who felt royally ignored while ashok was happy watching the scene playing in front of his eyes thinking that at least now shagun will stop her raman puraan and concentrate on them

His professional rivalry was another thing but yeah the man who was once raman bhalla's friend was happy for him

A-congratulations to both of you

He forwarded his hand which broke their eye-lock and raman shook his hand with him though unwillingly which eased a bit of ishita's tension though shagun was a total annoyance

S -I seriously didn't knew RKB has such a taste

She looked at ishita as if she is some filthy thing making her eyes well up something raman didn't took much time to notice

R -exactly shagun RKB and his tastes are far beyond your understanding

He failed not to mock her while ashok literally dragged her from there saving his wife from further insult

He placed an assuring hand on ishita's shoulder and soon they got busy with the other guests

The party ended and ishra were back to their room ishita was sitting on the bed waiting for raman while he was in the washroom

He came back after some time and passing a smile to ishita settled down on the bed whilst ishita began making patterns on the bed cover expecting him to take things further between them

R- don't feel bad about what shagun said in the party.. she is like that only

Ishita just nodded her head

R -good night ishita

His words sounded like someone just dropped a bomb on her ears all her dil ke armaan aansuon mein beh gaye she got angry but didn't say anything and lied down all sleep evading her as she felt her dreams of a happy married life being crushed mercilessly

The other side raman was also sailing in the same boat he also wanted to be close to her kiss her senselessly but didn't want to make her uncomfortable so was keeping himself in control

Soon he was in deep slumber while ishita was wide awake thinking about raman's behaviour with her which was bugging her on one side, he was concerned about her and the other side, he didn't care to even talk to her and explain her if he needed time to take this relationship ahead

Her chain of thoughts broken with a strong arm wrapping around her

She smiled seeing him holding her so protectively in sleep as if he leaves her, someone will harm her she softly caressed his hair with her hand and kept looking at his cute pout which was teasing her to kiss it

She kept looking at him without blinking her eyes shamelessly drooling over her own husband absorbing his sleeping figure in her heart

Finally unable to curb her wish any more, she softly pecked his lips and closed her eyes fearing his reaction but thankfully he was asleep

She smiled mischievously and closed her eyes with a broad smile on her face as if she got some hidden treasure she snuggled to him and soon sleep overtook her

The next morning, raman woke up first and saw her sleeping hiding her face in his chest and her palm gripping the pocket of his shirt

She was so damn cute!! He thought to himself and tried to move a bit only to be held back by her he ran his fingers over her long hair caressing them with all his love before he planted a soft lingering kiss there

She opened her eyes slowly blinking them numerous times only to find him looking at her lovingly

His gaze was melting her and her cheeks began colouring up on their own emitting heat

His thumb came over dancing on her cheek softly making her look up and meet his eyes

"good morning" she whispered softly to him

"this is indeed a good morning" he replied still busy playing his fingers on her cheeks

He pecked her forehead and got up the bed again leaving her in mid

She hit her fist on the bed in utter disappointment while he got busy in getting ready for the day

Ok I stop here so that the next writer can have a fair chance to add a twist in the tale

Want to read further, ask Hansa Di as she would be continuing it

And yeah don't forget to leave your comments

LOVE

AKKU😊

Edited by akriti154 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
updated the next part
hav a look
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Nice update. shagun and ashok are disgusting as usual. update soon.

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