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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Raman saved Ishita from hitting by car
Ishra moment was lovely😳
Now who is this sanaya


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

Mind blowing updates everyone
Akku hansa dee and pearl
Hatsss off guys
Wish I can join u too
Will be waiting for ridda dis update

Update soon
Nd yeah do pm me



thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely
ishita was going to hit by car
raman saved her
ishra kiss
raman past is very complicated
update soon rida di
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ishita was abt to get hit but raman saved her
He also confessed his love
And their first kiss aww
What is raman's past that so complicated
Who us Sanaya, she wants revenge from both shagun and raman

Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
and this shagun i hate her
fir se problem create karne aa gyi
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello friends...

I hope many of you know me.. well I am rida..

I hope you all will like it...

Writing treasts

Part 5

Raman and ishita reaches there home holding each other hands firmly...both were drenched in rain... raman asks ishita to change else she will fall sick...

after changing ishita comes out and sees raman entering room holding coffee... ishita mouths thanks as she needed it... Both sat beside raman wraps his arms around her and both enjoys the coffee and their proximity...

Raman starts the conversation...: ishita.. you will not leave me na..

Ishita: why I will leave you raman...

Raman: ishita I promise you I will tell you my whole past but I need some time...

Ishita: its okay raman... I trust you..

Raman: please ishita don't misunderstand me when you will know the truth... tumhare ane say pehly mein bohat akela tha ishita... I will not able to bear if you leave me... he cries holding her hand

Ishita feel bad seeing raman in so much pain.. she simply took her in hug and tries to console him...

raman slept in her embrace due to the emotional turmoil he is faced... ishita caresses his face and says: raman I will never leave your side... I promise you in every thick or thin you will always find me standing with you...

Flashback

Raman shagun and ashok were college friend pihu was shagun little 12 year younger sister whom shagun raman and ashok loves a lot... ashok always loved shagun while shagun loved raman. While raman has no feeling like love..

life was passing smoothly until sanaya and nidhi came in their life..sanaya falls for raman in first sight while niddhi was best friend of sanaya ... she always tries to come close to raman but raman always maintain a safe distance.. being their class mate raman was always there for her help which she misunderstand...

it was some picnic... sanaya thinks to get close to raman by hook or by crook... she hatch a plan... she lies to raman that her boyfriend is asking her to meet some secluded area... and asks raman to accompany her.. raman denies at first... knowing well about raman the he is very kind hearted. She start her plan to execute..

after reaching the area she torns her cloth and calls raman and fakes that some one is forcing her... raman reaches there and finds no one but seeing sanaya in bad state.. he tries to console her... sanaya knowing that's its right time hugs raman and both falls on the bed in a very compromising situation...

niddhi as per plan comes there with some other friends... all thought that raman has tried to force her but sanaya lied that they are thinking wrong... they both love each other and wants to have some private time...raman was shocked with sanaya lie...

when every body leaves.. raman asks why she has lied.. she start her drama again that its for him.. and she doesn't want anybody to know what happen because everybody will mock her.. raman being kind hearted accept.. sanaya tells raman to act along and after some time they will break this relation...

raman agrees... sanaya asks him not to tell this to anyone...

when raman and sanaya returns every student teases them ... ashok was shocked listening to all this he was not believing it... while shagun was devastated to know that raman doesn't love her... she feels extreme hatred for raman... ashok proposes shagun and shagun accepts his proposal in anger
time passes...

one day sanaya were discussing all this on phone with some one when raman listened all.. he was shocked... hurt and angry... he slaps sanaya in front of all college... raman insults sanaya very badly and expose her in front of all...

shagun gets happy and have some hope that raman will again be hers... sanaya cries and asks raman not to do this she truly loves him but raman leaves with shagun and ashok... leaving behind sanya more angry she wants to take revenge from raman...

niddhi and raman parents were friends.. no one knew about nidhhi involvement in sanaya case... sanaya was rusticated from college her career her studies all got ruined...niddhi and raman marriage get fixed leaving shagun shattered.. all her dreams gets broken...

raman has no issue with niddhi he agrees to his parents. Both were living happily with the each other in courtship.. but unknown to raman niddhi is also helping sanya to take revenge..

they were about to get married when niddhi fakes a video about how raman has took revenge from sanaya by raping her... Leaving all shocked... she broke their marrage and left... Raman was taken to police station for further investigation...

shagun and ashok were with raman because they believe that raman cant do this to anyone...they promises to raman that they will find out who is behind all this... mr and mrs bhalla met with accident and dies.

Ashok and Shagun were still with Raman but one event changed all their life... how the best friend turn into enemies... sanya wants to take revenge from Raman of her insult.. she plots to end Raman. Raman got bail for two days... pihu wants to meet Raman.. She comes with Shagun trio enjoy their day.. Shagun leaves pihu with Raman and tells him to drop pihu when both will get free from cartoon movie...

Raman and pihu plays laughs and enjoy the day to fullest... Raman was driving the car to Shagun house to drop pihu... but his car brakes were fail... he tries his best but his car hit with a huge lorry... pihu dies at spot while raman was badly injured...

Shagun blames Raman for his carelessness... she break her friendship and also gives fake witness that Raman is responsible for sanya state in anger to take revenge... this event develops hatred between Raman and shagun...

Shagun gets married with ashok and wants to destroy Raman at any cost.. while raman felt betrayed by Shagun... mihir Raman cousin helps Raman and wins the case... but because of sanya and nidhi vicious plan three life's were destroyed... trio were not happy in their life...

flashback ends...

raman was sleeping but suddenly his expression start changing... he gets up and shouts that he didn't killed her.. he is innocent... he was crying crying.. ishita felt pang in her heart seeing raman in so much pain.. she tries to console him but no vain he was just mumbling that i didn't killed her shagun.. believe me.. I am innocent... and lost his conscious...

other side

shagun was crying holding pihu photo.. ashok comes and tries to console her but she shouts at him that he believe raman is innocent...

ashok: shagun... calm down...

shagun: what was my pihu baby fault... Why did raman do this... She cries...

Ashok: don't cry shagun..

Shagun: you know ashok I love raman... but now I just hate him... why did I love raman.. why??? I will never let him live peaceful...

Ashok hugs her and tries to console her seeing her so much broken... after whatever happened he never seen her so much broken...she is strong women...

Shagun: you are with me na.. you love me na... you will not leave me... you will not betray me like raman...

Ashok shook his head in negative and promises that he will be with her... he thinks: I will never forgive you Raman it's because of you I and shagun never able to move forward...

Other side

Niddhi and sanaya were sitting happily... niddhi: sanaya what's next... sanaya smirks... and says: it is something big my dear...

Niddhi: what do you mean???

Sanaya: what say if ishita get to know her husband is a rapist and killer... I know surely she will leave him.. and Raman will not leave Shagun ...

Niddhi: Shagun ka kiya MATLAB...

Sanaya : Raman will think that all this is done by Shagun.. and we two will enjoy when their happy life will get ruined... both laughs...

That's it my dear friend... waiting for your lovely comments and response don't forget to hit like also...

Our lovely writers divanru aka pooja will continue it...

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Posted: 8 years ago
resd
unres
lovely updt di
raman actually has a bad past
nidhi n sanaya wicked
shagun mu raman
hope it all get cleared soon
thnxx 4 pm
Edited by akriti154 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Congo Di
You are first 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_pearl

Congo Di
You are first 😉


thnxx aru

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