Ishra OS - ikk kudi jida naam mohabbat ,gum hai( completed) on 11/9

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HHi friends I m back again but not with any new story or any update but with a new OS .Actually most of you know one of our IF member and my sweet little buddy sweta aka Divek ishra has score 98% marks in her exams and she demanded an OS as her gift from me .So friends I m here to fulfill her demand with new OS .


IKK KUDI JIDA NAAM MOHABBAT GUM HAI



Bhalla mansion was beautifully decorated , with flowers and beautiful lightings as it was marriage anniversary of Mr and Mrs bhalla ,one of the most richest person of Delhi .He has many enterprises in delhi and all over india ,he and his elder son Raman Kumar bhalla take care his business empire .

This huge party is planned by Raman only ,it is a surprise gift for their parents ,hus father had a very busy schedule and he even don't have time for himself so Raman has decided to celebrate their annicery is a grant manner so that his parents can enjoy their life a bit .

Raman has almost invited every important person of Delhi ,their clients ,their investors and all their employee. They had a huge number of employees then also Raman has invited everybody ,as he wanted almost everybody to enjoy their happiness .Mr and Mrs bhalla were center of attraction today everybody was meeting them and were wishing them ,Raman was happy to see happiness on their faces .He was looking after the guests and was attending their clients at the sane time he glanced at the stage to check his parents and saw them talking to a beautiful girl .

He just wanted to check his parents but his sight stopped their itself on that girl ,she was a beautiful girl on her mid twenties ,she was wearing a blue anarkali suit ,her hairs were too long and were open.A strend of hair was disturbing her as well as Ramans sight when she was talking to Mr bhalla and she was tucking it behind her ears ,as if wanted to give him the clear view of her beauty.Raman was lost in her ,he walked towards the stage like a hypnotised person ,but at the same time he saw her climbing down the stage ,he walked to her ,he was just about to reach her ,at the sane time a waiter passed almost touching her ,she tried to escape and in this process she banged with Raman ,she was about to fall when he held her in nick of time . She was now in his arms ,all her hairs were spread of her face ,blocking his view ,he slowly removed them and saw the most beautiful woman in front of him ,she also saw him both shared an intense eyelock ,they were lost in each other,when he felt a tap on his should which broke their moment .Ishita straitend herself Raman turned to see the person who was non other than his best friend mihir .For the very first time Raman was feeling irritated on his call ,he turned in a jiffy to check ishita but to his bad luck she was gone.

He scanned the whole hall but she was no where ,he ran towards the entrance and saw her leaving the mansion ,before he can reach her she drove away and before he can notice color or number of car she vanished in dark night ,he was disappointed. He wanted to talk to her ,hr wanted to know more about her ,he wanted to befriend with her but all his wishes can't be fulfilled as ishita was gone .
Raman was still standing in the sane place ,when mihir called him from behind ,he reached to raman and asked ," what happened Raman why you suddenly cane out ,you even don't greeted me properly ,is everything alright ".

R- yeah ,every thing ok ,u just came here to escort someone .

M- ok ,I thought you are ignoring me .

R- nothing like that .

Saying so both the friends went back to the party hall ,Raman tried to busied himself in guest and friends but his mind was still stuck in that beautiful moment were ,he held her in his arms and he tucked her hair ,he was still lost in those beautiful almond dark brown eyes .

The party ended ,it was night .Raman went to bed after a huge hectic day ,practically a person sleep immediately if he /she is tired but today sleep was very far from him as all his mind was filled with thoughts of Ishita ,he was trying to shrug the thought that she must be some employee of his company ,why he is thinking about her somuch .He anyhow made his mind understand that she is just a random girl why us he thinking somuch about her .After making himself understand he layed again in bed and closed his eyes trying to sleep but again those beautiful eyes and her beautiful face again flashed in front of his eyes .He thought something in his mind and got up from the bed .Raman brought his lappy and opened the database of his employees to know more about the girl.He shorted the list ,at first he sort the list by females employees ,then sorted it with ages and went through all the girls who were in age group of 22 to 30 but he didn't get any information about her .One by one he checked employees of all their companies in Delhi buy he didn't any trace of the girl ,at last he slept disappointed.

On the other hand in iyer house ,ishita changed into her night clothes and went to the bed ,she layed on the bed and closed her eyes to catch some sleep but the moment she closed her eyes ,she felt his soft touches on her face tracing her features ,she immediately opened her eyes and found that it was her illusion ,she again tried to sleep but again same thing happened ,at last she closed her eyes and recalled his touches and intense gaze on her ,she was like enjoying it .

Ishita iyer she was daughter of Mr viswanathan iyer .He was CA of bhallas, and as her father was CA ,she was also a CA ,but she practice under her father .Raman has send an invitation for Mr iyer but he was not well and had to complete some important work that's why ishita went to party on her father's behalf .she don't know anyone in the party that's why she returned from there ,soon after wishing Mr and Mrs bhalla .its not like ,ishita don't know Raman ,being the son of one of the most richest person ,he was one of the most elegible bachlor of Delhi more over they were also clients of iyers ,so she knows him by face and name but not personally , she was feeling goosebumps in her body on his touch ,she was having a different feeling after their encounter in the party.

Some more days passed ,Raman was continuously searching for ishita but not getting any traces of her ,he has gone through all the list of his companies but he didn't found her any where ,he checked the list if all the invitees whom they had send the invitation of party ,and know that most of their clients are aged person that to men not any girl.He also shared this with mihir ,he also helped Raman but it was difficult to find a girl without any name ,picture address moreover he had see her in party ,but beside him nobody recalled her ,Raman even enquired it with his parents also but they were unable to help as that day they met many people and were not able to recall a girl .

At last Mihir and Raman's parents thought that may be this will be Raman's illusion ,on the other hand Raman has almost become mad for her ,though he had only a glimpse of her but then also he recall her face very well .

Ikk kudi zida naam mohabbat gum hai ,gum hai


His parents thought to marry him so that he can forget that girl and start his new life but he was adamant that he will marry her only .His parents were hell worried for him as they think that he is living in illusion but he knows that the girl whom he loves exist and he will meet her one day ,On the other hand ishita also started growing feelings for Raman after the party and now she was also deeply in love with him but as he was very rich and she don't even know about his feelings ,she never took any steps towards him .Both were deeply in love with each other but were apart as Raman was still searching her and she don't want to initiate her feeling because his father is very good client of them and she don't wanted to creat any rift between their father and their business terms due to her one sided love .

Six months passed like this ,it was mihirs engagement ,Raman unwillingly got ready to go there as he was mihirs best friend.On the other hand ishita also went in the same function as she was mihikas best friend .The party was in full swing Mihir was waiting for mihika .Soon she arrived with her mom and ishita on either side ,Raman was there in stage with mihir .All eyes travelled to the staircase from where the ladies were climbing down ,Raman had a glimpse if mihika then he looked at ishita and was happily shocked to see her .The ladies reached the stage ,mihir supported mihika to climb the stage while Raman climb down and walked to Ishita. she was already looking at him as she already know that he will be in party ,he reached to her and cupped her face ,she closed her eyes to feel his touch .

Soorat oss di, pariyaan wargi

Seerat di o.. mariyam lagdi
Hasti hai taan phul jhad'de ne
Turdi hai taan ghazal hai lagdi

Lamm salammi saru de kad di haaye..
Umar aje hai marke attah di
Par naina di gal samajh di

Ik kudi jida naam mohabbat
Gum hai, gum hai, gum hai (x2)


Everybody was busy in engagement rituals so nobody noticed them ,Raman take her to an isolated corner ,she was still closing her eyes ,he tucked the strend of hair which was blocking his views and traced her cheeks,her breath stopped on his touch .He cupped her face again and spoke huskily " where were you ,I was searching you like mad ."

Listening to this ishita opened her eyes and looked at him with questioning eyes, Raman spoke again " yes jaan I m searching you from the day we met and ,and you just vanished ,are you real or some illusion ."

Her eyes become teary listening to his confession and innocent question .She spoke looking deeply into eyes " why you were searching me".

R- are you actually dumb or pretending to be one .

Ishira again gave him a questioning look ,he cupped her face and spoke dropping a feathery kiss on her forehead" because I love you damn it ".

I- you don't know me then also you love me .

R- pyaar karne ke liye naam ,pata jaanne ki zaroorat nahi hoti hai ,WO to ho jata hai khud se jisse hona hota hai.

Ishita took a deep breath and closed her eyes as if feeling his words,she without saying anything hugged him tight mouthing " I love you too ."

They left the party then itself ,then he took her to his house and introduce her to his parents .Ishita introduced herself as Mr iyers daughter ,Mr bhalla immediately recognised her and talked to parents ,soon their marriage was also fixed and they became one forever .

THE END

That's all friend ,hope you pike this OS .Enjoy reading and do comment ,try to give lil long comment .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved
Unreserved
Lovely os
Love at first sight 😳
She met his parents and left
He was searching for her
both were falling for each other
Then they meet at mihir's engagement
Both confessed and get married 😳
I Loved this one
Edited by ishraholic.maya - 9 years ago
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Hello friends added new OS .enjoy reading
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Simple and beautiful
Love at first sight
Nice
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Superb os di
raman fell in love wid ishita at d vry first sight
Bt was unable to talk to her as she left d party
he searched her everywhere bt couldn't find her
at last dey met in mimi engagement
confessed n united
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww how ..Cute.. Finally they met
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Wow...a sweet os di
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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such a lovable and cute proposal..i was like aww..
wonderful os😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short and sweet stry hein loved it both loved each other in d frst sight and Raman was searching for her like a maniac and ishita also wanted to reach him but was afraid of her one side love but destiny brought them together itz jst awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautifull os di
frst of all title loved it
raman arranging party for his parents anniversary
ishita to came on party on behaf of mr.iyer na
raman saw her and lost in her beauty
and their sweet encounter ishita in ramans arms
its more like love at frst sight haina
raman stated finding her
both were not able to sleep jst remembering their little moment both started loving each other
and finally mihir engagment
raman saw ishita and their sweet confession
and both became together for lifee
loved it
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