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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

ha ha ha
bottle chor pehli baar Suna yaar
well Raman and ruhi are sweethearts here
but wat this? she is pregnant and she doesn't even know????
plzzz update soon and update that mafia one too

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Ishra_g26

@Ishra_g26

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

nice interesting start gayu di
continue soon

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@pammi108

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

wonderfull prologue..

Please update soon..

Poor girl..

I think she should be ishita..

But she is pregnant & she does not know..

So she is mentally imbalanced?

Pregnant with whose kid?

Who was ramans first wife& what happened to her...

Lot of things to be revealed:)

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Love_pearl

@Love_pearl

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Wow,

Fully different concept.

Is ishu pregnant ?

Loved ruman bonding.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon

And thanks for the pm

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Akriti154

@akriti154

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Intriguing prologue
is dat woman ishita ??
Continue soon

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yashivid

@yashivid

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Here comes another hatke concept from one of the loveliest writer I know

Raman with cutie pie ruhi...the way he was handling her aww he is so cute.

She is pregnant n she doesn't know...is she ishu n gas she lost her senses. Y is she so dirty...ohhh I'm breaking my head.

So u update soon.

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discipline

@discipline

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Interesting start dear

Plz continue soon

Who is she why is so dirty she is pregnant? ??who is the father

Many unanswered questions r there

Thanks for the pm

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

I loved little Ruhi cute cute actions and her funny noises in rain brr hush 🤣 hehe so adorable she is. I thought yuck baby ka haath se feeder chori kiya yeh koun hai. But after reading fully the milk thief is indeed a childish one. She not even know that she is carrying baby :( . I felt so bad for that lady. Ruhi cried like anything for her doodoo can't share her belongings ha 😛

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Sweety please update this one asap and I want regular updates of this one... 😆

No excuses...😉

I don't know anything...😡

I want update asap... That's it...

Else...

Jao warna mein katti..

Devil me...😈

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Tc_Tc

@Tc_Tc

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ishrasoul
Sweety please update this one asap and I want regular updates of this one... 😆

No excuses...😉

I don't know anything...😡
I want update asap... That's it...

Else...
Jao warna mein katti..
Devil me...😈

I agree! I should be concentrating on my exams 😛 but I read the prologue and it's really interesting and I'm curious to read more so plz update 😃
And don't be discouraged- it is exam season and people are husy, they'll get to reading it after their exams I'm sure!

Edited by Tc_Tc - 9 years ago

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