MAA (On Hold)

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Outside the police station. Raman stops Aditya from meeting Ishita.

Ishita "Adi"

Aditya "Ishima"

Raman "This woman is not your Ishima she died 7 years ago let's go Adi sit in car. If you go to her you loose me."

Raman pulls Aditya towards car. Aditya pulls his hand away and runs towards Ishita and hugs her. Ishita hugs him back

Ishita "Adi go back to Raman. I am already responsible for snatching and killing Ruhi I can not stand loosing you to."

Aditya "Maa please come home."

Ishita creasing his face lovingly "I proud of you Adi you have become loving, caring, understand smart and handsome young men. Now go home your Maa always loves you. Do not cry go with your father Mamaji and Papaji would be waiting for you."

Aditya "Maa come home I need you Pihu needs you every one needs you."

Ishita "Beta go home I can not come I have a flight."

Aditya "Maa."

Ishita "Please go Adi."

Janam janam ho tu hi mere paas Maa

Janam janam ho tu hi zameen aasman

Yeh hai khabar dil mein kahin

Rab reh rehta hai magar

Mere dil mein rehti bholi bhali meri Maa

Raman "Adi come."

Aditya and Raman are driving back. Aditya remembers when he saw Ishita in hospital

Koi samjha hi naa pata tha

Jo ho sang tu na.. to ho jag suna

Pyar itna jataati ho tum

Aaj bhi koi saaz lage to

Yaad aati ho, yaad aati ho tum

Aaj bhi meri aankh bhare to..

Yaad aati ho, yaad aati ho tum..

Maa.. O meri Maa.. meri Maa...Meri Maa.. meri Maa.. meri Maa...

Aditya "Papa why did you say all that to maa you know how much she loved Ruhi and how much she loves me."

Raman says "Shut up I lost Ruhi because of her."

Aditya "You lost Ru because of Nidhi not Maa it is high time you realise that. I promise you and myself I will get Maa back home she is not leaving again."

They reach home Aditya goes to his room and Raman to his. Aditya comes and removes the garland from Ishita's photo taking of the wall.

Aditya "Maa I know papa is angry he has started hating you but no one is angry nor does anyone hate you everyone miss you Maa please come back. Maa do even remember before this all I had gone for before I could tell you I won and give the trophy when I got home I saw a garland around your photo and then Nellu Didi told me you were no more I was totally broken I decided I will go aboard and do my college when ever I came back for holidays everyone was carrying on with their lives excepting without you I could not do anything

Main Kabhi Batlata Nahin

Par Andhere Se Darta Hoon Main Maa

Yun To Main Dikhlata Nahin

Teri Parwaah Karta Hoon Main Maa

Tujhe Sab Hain Pata Hain Na Maa

Tujhe Sab Hain Pata Meri Maa

Bheed Mein Yun Na Chodo Mujhe

Ghar Laut Ke Bhi Aa Naa Paun Maa

Bhej Na Itna Door Mujkko Tu

Yaad Bhi Tujhko Aa Naa Paun Maa

Kya Itna Bura Hoon Main Maa

Kya Itna Bura Meri Maa

Jab Bhi Kabhi Papa Mujhe Jo Zor Se Jhoola Jhulate Hain Maa

Meri Nazar Dhoondhe Tujhe

Sochu Yahi Tu Aa Ke Thaamegi Maa

Unse Main Yeh Kehta Nahin

Par Main Seham Jaata Hoon Maa

Chehre Pe Aana Deta Nahin

Dil Hi Dil Mein Ghabraata Hoon Maa

Tujhe Sab Hain Pata Hain Na

Crying Aditya falls asleep.

Next day morning Simran and Pihu come to Aditya's room. Pihu wake him up. Simran notice that his eyes are wet and after long he is holding Ishita's photo and sleeping.

Simran "Pihu Mummyji would be waiting for you. (Pihu leaves). Adi tumhe Ishita ki yaad aarahi thi."

Aditya "Maa ko toh main humesha yaad karta hoo bua."

Simran hugging Aditya asks "Yesterday in police station somethings happened."

Aditya "What do you mean."

Simran "Last night when bhai and you came bhai was looking worried when I talk to he was we will shift from here otherwise Ishita will come. Is Ishita alive."

Aditya "We are not shifting from here and Maa is alive. I will bring her back I will not let her leave this time just because of papa."

Simran "Ishita is alive when did Bhai meet her. When did you meet her. I want to meet her."

Aditya "Papa meet Maa yesterday in the police station. I meet Maa in Mumbai Maa came to India in same flight as Papa from Australia she was even shoot by the highjacker she was in hospital I went there to talk to Mahika Chitti about the wedding I saw Maa. Chitti told me not to tell her who I was or any one that she was alive as she is still guilty for Ruhi death."

Simran "Ishita is in Delhi now I will go and talk to her and bring her back here once she is back every thing will be fine."

Aditya "Thankyou Bua."

Neelu comes there to sweep. She see garland on the floor. She picks them up.

Aditya "Why are you picking up garbage."

Neelu "Adi Baba this garlands were on bhabhi's photo."

Aditya "Throw them they are not going to go around Maa's photo."

Raman hears this and angry leaves the house.

Simran "Nellu go from here. Adi let's go outside."

Santoshi "Bhallaji is saying Raman wants to shift out of here to Gk."

Aditya "Adi says chill dadi that will not happen."

Aditya leaving house hears

Santoshi "This must be for that girl Simi we saw him that day with she lives in Vasant Kunj. I will go and meet her today."

Simran "Mummyji sit have milkshake do not take tension."

Outside the house

Balakrishan "Adi beta how are you has Ishu come to your house."

Aditya "No Maa has not come but I will bring her here soon."

Mahika "Why does Raman Jiju want shift out of here."

Balakrishan "Is it not obvious Mahiko."

Mahika "He does not need to do that in any case Ishu Akka is going back to Australia tonight or tomorrow."

Aditya "But Chitti, Maa can not leave again."

Balakrishan " what happened yesterday frist Raman Jiju and then..."

Mahika cutting in " what else do you expect her do she was already guilty and scared everyone hates her."

Simran & Vishwanath is hearing this.

Vishwanath "Mahiko, Bala what are you saying Ishu is alive and she is in Delhi."

Bala and Mahika together "Yes Appa."

Vishwanath "You both come in."

Bala and Mahika come in Aditya also comes in.

Madhavi "Kanna come."

Vishwanath "Madhu see what kids are saying that Ishu is alive."

Madhavi "Did I not make myself clear she is not my daughter my daughter died 7 years ago."

Aditya stopping Madhavi from feeding "If that what you think then fine Patti but I will bring her back here she my Maa you like it or not."

Madhavi "Kanna"

Aditya "If Maa is not your daughter I no one to you."

Vishwanath "Adi calm down. What is wrong with you Madhu did you even talk to Ishu and ask her where was she and why she did not come back."

Madhavi "She let us believe she was dead this not up bringing I gave her."

Vishwanath "There must be a reason she did not inform."

Aditya "Papa."

Vishwanath "But death."

Mahika "Pariappa Akka was not aware we all thought she was dead she thought she was missing."

Madhavi "You are lieing Mahiko. Kanna she is lieing."

Aditya "I don not know Chitti met Maa before me in Mumbai Hospital."

Vishwanath, Madhavi and Balakrishan together "Hospital."

Mahika "Akka was shot on hijacked plane same one as Raman Jiju."

Madhavi "What did I do I did not realise what I did."

Meanwhile Santoshi reach the lady house. Ishita is booking tickets for Australia the bell rings she opens it. Santoshi is shocked to see her she thinks it is a ghost then she realises it is really Ishita.

Santoshi "Ishita tu hi na."

Ishita "Mummyji andar aao."

Santoshi "Itane saal khain thi tu. Chale ghar chale."

Ishita "Mummyji mein nahi aa sakti Raman ko aacha nahi lagega."

Santoshi "Voh mera ghar hai Raman ka nahi."

Ishita "Mummyji aap sach mein me mujhe dekh kar Kush hai."

Santoshi "Yeh kaisa savaal hai apani beti ko dekh kar kon kush nahi hota. Tu Madhu se mile. (Ishita does not say anything) Ussne kuch khaha tumse Ishita. Uses pagal ne apaane beti ko aapane gale se nahi lageya. Voh vasie he ulti soch ki hai ussene jaroor thapar lagakar bula hoga tu Meri beti nahi hoo voh toh saat saal pehel mar chuki hai."

They both laugh. In the Iyer house

Madhavi "Mahiko where is Ishu living."

Mahika "Pariamma I do not where is Mani's house."

Santosh comes there with sweets "Madrasan lee mahu meetha kar mera beta ki Shaadi hai. (Everyone is shocked. Santoshi hugs Madhavi whispering in ears) main bhut khush hoo mujhe aapne beti saalon baad mile hai."

Santoshi is leaving.

Mahika "Mummyji you are happy for Romi and my wedding (Bending down touching her feet) please bless me."

Santoshi hugs her "Mahika today you ask for anything I will give you."

Simran is very supreised

Aditya "Dadi what happened did Chachu invite you."

Santoshi "Family does not need a invitation. Let's go Simi."

Everyone is shocked

Vandita "What happened all of a sudden to your Dadi Adi."

Pihu comes "Adi Bhaiya you know (pointing to Ishita's photo) I saw mala vali aunty in Australia."

Aditya smiling asks "Pihu you talk to Maa"

Pihu "No she was purchasing pastries and I want the same shop she told the shop keeper to give me one out of her I saw her face in mirror I tried to stop her say Thankyou but she did not hear me she was in hurry."

Simran comes "Adi what happened to Mummyji. Pihu Shagun is on the phone go talk."

Aditya "What happened Bua."

Simran "See for yourself."

Aditya "Dadi had gone to meet someone."

Madhavi "She met Ishu."

Aditya "Dadi met Maa."

Santoshi calls Simran. They all go there.

Simran "What happened Mummyji."

Santoshi "You know who was that lady we saw Raman with that night."

Simran "Bhai looked drunk."

Santoshi "Now days he always drunk."

Simran "Mummyji."

Santoshi goes to Aditya room. She calls Neelu

Santoshi "Why are there no garland around the photo."

Neelu stammering "Ac.. Actu.. Actually... A...Adi...Adi Ba... Adi Baba

Simran laughing "Neelu stop streaming Mummyji you know Adi does not like."

Santoshi "He is her son. This mother son know everything about each other. Illu from all Ishita's photos remove the garlands."

Neelu "Why."

Santoshi "Grarhpravash does happen like this."

Simran signalling Nellu to go asks "Mummyji grahpravash Romi and Mahika."

Santoshi "No Simi my daughter's. (Simran is confused) the lady we saw Raman was none other then Ishita my daughter."

Simran " Ishita I want to meet her where is she."

Santoshi "I lost the address Simi."

Aditya "So now Dadi meet Maa."

Vandita "What's wrong"

Santoshi comes there and "Nothing everything is fine Vandita."

They leave.

Simran "Where are you going."

Aditya "I have work."

Pihu "Bhaiya you will not spend time with me."

Aditya "Pihu you want come with me."

Pihu "Yes"

Aditya and Pihu leave. On the road Aditya sees Ishita he stops the car on the side. Pihu see Ishita she shouts out to her. Ishita does not hear her. Pihu runs towards Ishita. Pihu gets stuck in between the traffic. She calls for Aditya Ishita see her goes to save. Ishita save her and see how is she she is supreised to see Pihu. Raman comes there and take Pihu away. He shouts on Aditya and then slap him Ishita comes in between

Ishita "Raman aap appne jaavan beta par haath kaise hota sakte hai voh baacha nahi hai abb aur aap uss par haath nahi utha sakte hai."

Raman "You get lost he my son."

He pushes Ishita she falls.

Aditya "Maa. (Holds on to Ishita) If you want to hurt hurt me why you hurting Maa."

Raman "She is not your mother."

Aditya "Then who is."

Raman "Your mother died 7 years ago."

Raman walk away.

Aditya "I just wanted Pihu to meet our Maa."

Ishita "She does not know me at all for her Shagun is her mother not me. (Hugs him) Stop hurting yourself beta please I can not bare seeing my Adi hurt."

Aditya "Maa do not leave me and go come home.(Aditya cries in her arms) Please come home please do not leave me and go."

Ishita "Beta stop crying you need to understand I can not come back everyone is happy without me I just can not Adi."

Aditya holds tightly on her and says "Maa don't go."

Ishita leaves from goes back to Mani's house. She cries her heart out in her room. Aliya come there.

Aliya "Amma where are you going."

Ishita "Back to Australia."

Aliya "Wedding."

Ishita "I can not go there everyone will be there."

Aliya "Amma but...

Flash back

Aliya sees Aditya outside her house

Aliya "What are you doing here Aditya."

Aditya "Maa please do something please stop her here we need her."

Aliya "After what your dad and her Amma said to her she would not stay her."

Aditya "Please I need Maa she is wrong no one is happy nothing if fine the Iyer and Bhalla families since last 7 year and Romi Chachu also has broken all ties with Dada, Dadi, and Dad."

Aliya "I will try."

Flashback ends

Aliya "But Amma there is something wrong between the two families even Mahika Chitti said Romi Uncle is not living with his family and he living with some Ashok Khanna they all might need you and you presuming they are happy might be wrong."

Ishita "we both will go to Mahiko's wedding."

thanks for pm me dear

good update dear

but feel bad for raman no one is there for him dear

i agree he is angry moreover repeating the harsh words again are not acceptable and he has to realize his mistake but not by making him alone

while reading i felt you make raman character the worst moreover make ishu character best that she doesn't realize her mistake make everyone accept her not raman ( no one is there to see his pain )

adi is adamant to get ishu in his life moreover for family members but i felt he is rude to raman he has guts to question raman but not ishu

both are equally wrong punishment should be same

so all leads to make raman suffer alone

never want to blame anyone just want to blame cvs for making raman character worst to make ishu mahan

after their face off everyone forgetting her mistakes and all are well behind raman to prove he is bad for ishu

continue soon dear

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

thanks for pm me dear

ALWAYS WELCOME

good update dear

THANKYOU

but feel bad for raman no one is there for him dear...i agree he is angry moreover repeating the harsh words again are not acceptable and he has to realize his mistake but not by making him alone ...while reading i felt you make raman character the worst moreover make ishu character best that she doesn't realize her mistake make everyone accept her not raman (no one is there to see his pain ) ...adi is adamant to get ishu in his life moreover for family members but i felt he is rude to raman he has guts to question raman but not ishu ...both are equally wrong punishment should be same...so all leads to make raman suffer alone...never want to blame anyone just want to blame cvs for making raman character worst to make ishu mahan ...after their face off everyone forgetting her mistakes and all are well behind raman to prove he is bad for ishu

continue soon dear

fantastic🤗

Wow...this was really good

They go there Vishwanath and Vandita see her there. Vandita is overjoyed to see Ishita.

Vandita hugging Ishita "Ishu where were you for so long it been 7 year after news of your suicide everything broke you should have come home."

Ishita "Akka I was so broken that night I tried to commit suicide twice but Mani saved me but in the process he was paralysed so I was with him helping him and taking care of his kids (pointing to Aliya) this is Mani's daughter Aliya."

Vishwanath hears everything hugging her "Ishu you should have at lest informed you were alive we all thought were dead."

Ishita "I did not think that time Appa that you would think I am dead because there was no one around there who knew us and inform you."

Vandita see around. She sees Madhavi.

Vandita "Amma see Ishu is alive."

Ishita starts to walk away.

Madhavi "Ishu I am sorry in angry and shock I said so much did not realise what would you have all been through the past years that you were away."

Ishita hugging Madhavi "Amma"

Vandita "One second when did you two meet and why did no one tell me Ishu was alive."

Ishita "Calm down Akka"

Madhavi "Bala and me meet Ishu the day before yesterday in the police station."

Balakrishan "One thing is clear Ishu love Mehiko more then you Vando."

Ishita "Bala Jiju seriously it does not take you time to make jokes."

Vandita "But why are you saying this Bala."

Aditya comes there.

Aditya hugging Ishita "That is because Maa met Mahiko Chitti before actually she was first one to meet Maa."

Vandita "But where how."

Ishita "I was coming from Australia to India in that plan which got high jacked I was shot. I do not know why Mahiko came to hospital but I admitted to hospital where I was treated."

Madhavi and Vandita hug Ishita. The Bhallas reach the venue. Vandita pulls Ishita towards them. Ishita notices this and realises there are differences between the two families. Ishita stands up goes and meets Santoshi and hugs her.

Simran hugs Ishita "Where were you for so long. I am so happy to see you."

Ishita goes and hugs Omprakash "Papaji."

Omprakash pushs Ishita back "Papaji kon papaji meri beti toh saat saal pehli hi maar gayi thi."

Santoshi "Bhallaji yeh kya Bol rehe hai aap."

Omprakash with tears in his eyes "Inn saat saalon mein ek bar bhi aapne Papaji ki yaad nahi aayi."

Simran"Papaji aapne toh daar hi de ya tha sabko."

Omprakash, Santoshi and Simran together "Voh dekh humari choti se Pihu."

Ishita smiling "I met her already."

Everyone "When ...How? Adi."

Pihu looking at the door "Chachu"

Ishita goes and hugs Mahika. Romesh is socked and at same time happy.

Mahika says "I told you I have a surprise for you."

Romesh hugs Ishita "Bhabhi."

Ishita "I am so happy for both of you Adi take them for Vaar Maala.(To Vandita) I never thought Romi and Mahiko will get married. They look so good as a couple."

The Vaar Maala take place.

Aliya "Amma this is so boring do something."

Ishita goes to stage.

Ishita "Mahiko you are not wearing kalrila. Here let make you wear it. I am not able to tie it I have forgotten how to."

Santoshi "Ishita I will help you have forgotten everything. Mahika is not even wearing a chura."

Ishita "Here is is the chura."

Santoshi "Mahika wears it."

Madhavi "She is Tamil not punjabi she will not wear it."

Santoshi "The boy is punjabi"

They start fighting. A little while later

Ishita "Okay fine the ceremony will happen with both Tamil and Punjab customs."

By that time Pihu calls Raman. The wedding happens. The bidaai takes place.

Mahika. "Akka will you follow me a favour."

Ishita "Yes"

Mahika "Please stay back you the only you are one who can bring the families together. Please come home."

Ishita "Okay I will try."

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