Yeh Laal Ishq, Yeh Malaal Ishq - IshRa OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Os.😊

The Conversation of Ishra was so Heart-Touching.😭

The Feelings of Ishra was so Emotional.😭

The Whole OS was So Nicely explained.😊

Please write like this.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Originally posted by: arooshee

Awsome...everybody is busy depicting raman's pain...as if ISHITA is super happy...

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Brilliantly written

Loved it

The emotions...perfect

Originally posted by: pulu1995

If there is something called perfect writing, this is it. Perfect! In every sense. I haven't read something this good on this forum. Great work buddy!!! If you could, please do share your other works

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Aaani, what r u doing girl! Aaagh I don't like you. Y y y...y r u writing this oses...u r pulling me into the web of ishra again. Its so beautiful I wanna cry.

Sorry fr the rant. I do like u. 😳

Missed your writings for long Aani.


You complete what the cvs had left out. Which they never gave any heed to such scenes and we as viewers always badly wanted it. But when you complete the left out part Aani, its so heart wrenching. As a viewer i never feel complete, but as a reader of you os's on the current tracks i feel complete. The bits you pick up and make a story out of it is beautiful. You execute brilliantly where the cvs have failed.
The rudeness, the helplessness, the pain, the hurt, and mostly the love... Excellent portrayal Aani.
Loved each and every bit of it.


Always stay blessed Aani.


Lots and lots of hugs for this 🤗

OMG Aani I am totally speechless I really cannot describe what I feel after reading this update!!!!

"He knew she would not have forgotten them but the confirmation does not do any favour" best line for me

Originally posted by: remya1990

Missed your writings for long Aani.


You complete what the cvs had left out. Which they never gave any heed to such scenes and we as viewers always badly wanted it. But when you complete the left out part Aani, its so heart wrenching. As a viewer i never feel complete, but as a reader of you os's on the current tracks i feel complete. The bits you pick up and make a story out of it is beautiful. You execute brilliantly where the cvs have failed.
The rudeness, the helplessness, the pain, the hurt, and mostly the love... Excellent portrayal Aani.
Loved each and every bit of it.


Always stay blessed Aani.


Lots and lots of hugs for this 🤗

Originally posted by: -Nidoo-

Reserved. Again.

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This was SO Raman. Reading this piece was like channeling him in my mind, comprehending his anger, his desire to hurt her, his pain on her tears, his reluctance of letting her interact with Pihu, his understanding of her pain. He's such a complicated man, that no one truly understands him, ever. I dare say not even Ishita, though she comes closest. (And vice-versa)

His taunts on Mani, on being deliberately away from Pihu, his possessiveness for Pihu - spell his anger to the T. He's bruised so badly by her decision, that in some way reiterates that he's not fit for love - a notion that he himself has been fighting for a long, long time.

To know she was dead because of his words was a blow. To learn she was alive yet pretended to be dead was a bigger blow. It hurt him in ways even Ruhi's death couldn't and you portrayed this with such perfection Aani 👏 👏

Your stories are like KP-DT. You watch them enact a brilliant scene, you feel inspired, and then you think this was the final straw, this can't be improved further. And then they come back, upping their own performance every single time. It's like old wine, only gets better 👏 😳 😳