TS: Of Parental Love & Heartache| Part B - Pg 6 - May 7| - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Wow...this is awesome
I loved it
Cvs have always neglected Adi after he turned good
I actually want him to play a major role whenever Ishra reunite
Very nicely written
Continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
i loved it yaar
amazingly written up👏
thnkew for writing POv
very emotional
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
This was such a surprise yesterday! But I was sleepy then 🥱 couldn't take notice properly 😔
Yet to read the piece, but I'm really really glad you decided to write something 🤗 You always have so many insights (and logical questions 😆) that you not converting them into meaningful stories would be a waste 😊

For the shot, RES 😃

EDITED on Page 4 instead 😆
Edited by -Nidoo- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
First thing first

Was this a competition between you and Anku, Neetz?


Her comment is almost as long as your update 😆😆😆


Asking cause that got me curious


Now, coming to the crux of the post - first of all congratulations for this very important milestone 🤗 I understand how hard it is to put yourself out there in something like this

this was a lovely beginning and I never imagined one day I would say this but Adi - I think I love him more than Ruhi right now.

Honestly the guy is doing a good job and my heart goes out for him - what happened in a spur of the moment back then has affected him too only his hurt and pain isnt even considered, even thought to exist.. He managed to have 4 parents in his lifetime but the one who made him feel the most loved and wanted, the one who allowed him to grow up but be a kid as well, the one who could be crazy in her overprotectiveness but who also made sure her kid knew when he had her trust, the ONE parent ADI couldnt do without actually isnt with him but no one understands that loneliness he has cause it seems he has everything - his biological parents, his stepsister who he adores and a large loving family - but the boy is still lonely and is so still trying to cling onto whatever he can hold of his Ishimaa because she means that much to him - be it by loving Pihu so much or by keeping his relations with the Iyers despite the diktat of the family...


He has proven that you dont need flesh and blood to be a parent or a child - you need a bond of love to have that connect.

Loved it that you have explored his side of the story here, I dont have expectations from our makers 🥱

Love & god bless,
Aani
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Take a bow girl! What you've penned is no less than brilliance! Adi's totally his Ishimaa's boy; endearing, lovable and oh so adorable!

Unfortunately, Adi has always been neglected and I'm glad you've decided to finally start writing and you began with this wonderful character! Congratulations darling on your very first write-up!

Love Umera
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Noteworthy

I thought this was a wonderful read! Esp since these days, Adi seems to be waffling around despite the presence of his father and Shagun. The only one truly close to him is Shravan (and Pihu of course)

Thank you so much!

As for the fact that he is waffling despite the presence of Raman and Shagun, i believe after the earthquake track he had accepted Ishita as his mother wholeheartedly. He forgave Shagun but he never gave her the same place in his life. For him, Ishita was and will always be his mother. I don't think Shaggy's presence matters to him much. She is Pihu's mom. I think he sees her as that only and respects her. Thats all.

As for Pihu, she isn't someone he can share his feelings with. She's a child and one who has never known her real mother. Raman is his father and Adi obviously needs him like any child does. He needs his father to be there for him, with him. That's why despite having his family with him, he is lonely. Because his mother had died and his father had distanced himself from him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

woww..

vry well u've written..
superb awsme..
adi is also a imp character of yhm which was neglectd by cvs
glad u've cme wid dis story ..
lyk dis updte..
plz continue soon nd if possible try 2 add adi-ishu more scenes hw dey bond after so much of revelations/shocks


Thank you so much. I am glad you liked the story.

Also, i cant promise an Ishita-Adi scene just because its not in what i have planned. Though i will try if i can do something.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Neetz,

You have beautifully penned Adi thoughts

Do Pm me when you update please

Hi Maya! Glad you liked it. And i will try sending PMs for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: sririt

Fabulous update. Perfect Adi point of view. Emotions were like I have fallen for it over and over again


Thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Wow...this is awesome

I loved it
Cvs have always neglected Adi after he turned good
I actually want him to play a major role whenever Ishra reunite
Very nicely written
Continue soon and do pm me


Thanku so much. Happy that you liked it

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