TS: Of Parental Love & Heartache| Part B - Pg 6 - May 7| - Page 5

U have mirrored their thoughts n emotions perfectly..

Raman n ishita's introspection was bang on..

Waiting for next

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I started reading this with the expectation of it being sad as Krishy had already warned everyone 😆 but it wasn't just sad, it was beautifully sad 😭 😭

All through, Adi kept tugging at my heart, whether in his own thoughts or his parents'. He has grown into a sensible young man, but so devoid of love and attention that it hurts deep down inside. I love love love the way you penned everyone's emotions Neets 😭 😭 They were so accurately true, it teared me up to read how both Raman and Ishita neglected their son, for their daughters, first Ruhi, and now Pihu. It's not that they don't love him, but they don't tell that to him enough. He being a kid, grew up all by himself, just based on the love and guidance he received in those 2 years, while they, being adults, are still sorting the mess they all got in.

Ishita's tears, her shock at meeting her own son after all these years, her acceptance of how she did do wrong with him and the other daughter rendered so beautifully, I could imagine DT sitting there clutching her knees and breaking down 😭

Raman's realization of overdoing with Pihu, and zerodoing with Adi drove home the truth. He's right, and he has realized it. In the process of overcoming the grief of his lost daughter and wife, and nurturing the youngest one, he forgot he had a son. And it had to hit him hard.

The inclusion of photographs made it all the more real, so much so that I longed to see those family moments that you mentioned ❤️ ❤️

And Adi, as I mentioned, he just takes my heart. I feel so much for the boy. He's hurt and ignored by his parents. Yet he keeps his head high, and continues on his path ahead, unlike the both of them. He has taken the best of both and become the finest person one could ever be.

Thank you so much Neets for writing this 🤗 🤗 Only you could have done so much justice to Adi's inner emotions 😳

loved it

continue soon

do write more os on leap track,would love to read

Loved it

Poor adi...

The pain and emotions were just amazing

Continue soon