New SS: Our Ishima Needs Us! (Part 4 on Pg 12 - 1/6/16)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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awesme start dear continue soon and pm me.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Interesting Start..

So the story is being narrated from Adi's POV.. interesting!

Loved Shagun's description.. too good! 👍🏼

Ishita is injured or has met with an accident and Adi is taking Pihu as Ruhi to her !

Intriguing!

Continue soon..

thanks for the PM

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: kingmanu
You made me cry😭
I read your previous works too, you are such a talented writer👍🏼

Thank you! i am glad that you like my work.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
awesome

thank you! 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: megha2227
Nice one :) loved thnarration from Adi side. What happened to ishita?

thank you! As to what happened to Ishita... you will have to wait for the coming parts!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ishra00
Cant hold myself. Plz update it soon. And plz dnt let anything happen to ishita.

will definitely try to update by Monday... Coming to Ishita... right now i dont even know what has happened to her... hopefully as i write the next part we all will have some answers! 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1
You gave the perfect description for Shagun! 😉

This was written so damn well! 👏

It was short but the length was perfect ... Brilliant

hahaha... thank you! 😊 ... i really wanted to vent about Shagun... Her positive avatar is not digestible... and the result was this... glad you liked it!