Ishra ss-yeh mera deewanapan hai #2 pt 13 on pg 119 updt on Jul 4 - Page 65

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Congrats 160 likes

Emotional update
Doctor and raman convo was touching
How much he loves her and knows she will even leave him fir his happiness
He is taking her away from everyone
She wants to celebrate their official first night, on other hand he is not able to tell her that they have lost their baby
Crying in bathroom was heartbreaking
he asked her to hug him because only she can soothe his pain
Both r medicines for each other
Hope everything goes we'll



Thanks lalitha
Yes only ishita can wipe his sadness
Sooth his pain
Everything will be fine soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Nice one...
Want to know how will she react..
U know what surprisingly I missed toshi ji



Thanks sukky u will know it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

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Wohooo...

I read 4 parts in one go...di its just too sad...
I thought they are together and everything will be happy with runion...but it was so emotional 😭 ...toshiji yuck how can someone be so heartless...

Poor ishra and ishu even dont know what happened with her...she is and happy workd unknown to the fact thst she lost such a precious thing... 😭

Dont make it so sad sad ...plzzz i want happpy happyyy update...

Update soon...

Superbly written...so well potrayed emotions...
I am in love with these twooo...




Thanks abhu
Glad u loved it
Yes ishita don't even know what she had lost
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akyafan

Amazing and emotional update ...ishra portrait image of true careing love ...poor raman ...hope happiness comes in there life ...salute u amazingly expressed raman sorrow and ishita missed feelings 😊 👏 plz plz update soon


Thanks for appreciation dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayraa

Awesome update

Emmosional tha
Raman is caring
But feel guilty for hiding the truth her
Hope she didn't come across the truth
It will shattered her




Thanks dolly
Yes he is feeling guilty

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Part 11

A very emotional update!!!
No one tells Ishita that she has had a miscarriage
(actually to me that is wrong because this way Raman has to deal with the pain on his own and then be really strong for her and live a lie until she eventually finds out!! Then he has to be there for her to support her and again be strong for her so that means that he is doing all the giving and supporting. Meanwhile when she finds out she will feel doubly sad and hurt as she was not able to be there for him when he needed her and that they were not able to share the pain together. Please do not take this as a criticism it is just the way I feel - I would want to share the pain and be each others support from the beginning. Just my opinion please do not be offended🤗)

Getting back to the update when he goes to the doctor for assurance and then asks if she can get pregnant again and I love what he says to the doctor's question:

"Doc- does it make any difference if I say know.agar main naa kahun toh aapko koi fark padega.does it change ur love for her.

Raman- fark padega bahut padega.agar usse yeh sach pata chala ki woh maa nahi ban payegi toh woh meri khushi ke liye mujhe chod kar chali jayegi.royegi khud ko takleef degi aur uski har takleef se mujhe bahut fark padega. So tell me she can become mother or not..

Doc smiled and said- don't worry Mr bhalla,ur wife can conceive again and become a mother.very soon u guys will have a healthy baby.that's my wish and yes ur wife too will get well soon coz she has a loving husband like u.now complete the formalities and take her home."

What I said above about Ishita not able to support him through his pain as she does not know but you found a most beautiful way of making this happen without Ishita knowing the truth :" Raman- can u hug me tight.can u let me do things without asking any question. Can u let me sleep in ur arms ishita.please just once.I needed it badly.

Ishita didn't think for a second and open her arms for him.he come to her and engulfed himself in her arms.she can feel that he is in immense pain,even want to erase it also.wanna sooth his pain but don't know what's it,so she let it be.she just want to comfort him .she was caressing his hair lovingly while he was hugging her like she is his lifeline.soon she realised he is crying.she too cried with him but didn't ask him any question as per his request. She don't wanna know the reason but sooth his pain.she was go on caressing his hair and back lovingly and soon realised,he slept in her arms peacefully. She make him sleep comfortably on the bed and caressed his face- I don't know ,what is bothering u Raman.but I can feel ur pain.please jaldi se thik ho jaiye.ur ishita can't see u in pain.mere liye thik ho jaiye.joh kuch bhi hua ho just forget it.and be happy Raman.for me.she said kissing his forehead.

He stir in his sleep and pulled her closer to himself. She hugged him protectively and close her eyes to have some peaceful sleep with her Raman."

You so brilliantly expressed this emotion and so amazingly portrayed by Ishra!!!
Really looking forward to the next update soon please and also thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!






Thanks nafisha
Glad u like it
Yes he will surely share his pain with her
Glad u like doc convo with Raman
Will updt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niveditha.giri

Plz update soon...eagerly waiting to read...plz...


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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 12

After few hours Raman open his eyes only to see her sleeping peacefully hugging him.tight.he smiled after a long time to see her so calm and at peace .even he was feeling light after crying his heart in her arms.the doc was indeed right,they r actually each other's medicine.they don't want anyone else if they have each other.all the hurt and pain went having her in his arms.he softly pecked her forehead not to disturb her sound sleep.she stir in her sleep and snuggle more into him.he smiled and get out of the bed covering her properly with the quilt.

He wear his white shirt with black trouser and thought- she want something special for tonight.I should do something special for her.I want to make her happy in all senses.let arrange a special candle light dinner for her.he thought and went to arrange stuff for the dinner.

After two hours ,he arranged everything according to her taste.food,flowers, music everything. He got ready in a black tux and went to their bedroom only to find her still sleeping.he went to the cupboard and pick out a packet,a gift which he had bought for her long back.

He caressed it lovingly and placed it near her.after that he went out off the room and then messeged her on her phone.she wake up hearing the beep and saw the message.

Mrs ishita Raman Kumar bhalla ,u r cordially invited to have a dinner date with ur charming husband at 8 in the dining area of ishra heaven.please be ready on time ,ur prince charming will come to pick u up at 7.59 sharp.

With love
Raman Kumar bhalla

Ishita smiled seeing the message ,she lovingly kissed it and get up to get ready for their dinner date.she was going to find a suitable dress when she saw the packet.she smiled and opened it,it had a beautiful white gown along with matching accessories.

Ishita- its so beautiful. Saying so she keep it aside and went to freshen up.

She came out after some time and got ready .Raman appeared on time to take her along but was lost in her beauty.she was looking breathtaking in that white gown and a simple diamond neckpiece along with danglers. Her hair were tied in a loose bun ,some strands were falling on her face making her look more beautiful. But the most beautiful thing which was making her a complete bride was a pinch of sindoor adorning her forehead along with chooda in her hand.(Raman has arranged everything for her ).

Raman was lost in her when she came forward and wave her hand in front of him.

Ishita- main kaisi lag rahi hoon.

Raman look at her and said- can't u guess seeing me lost in u.u r looking angelic.jaise koi pari.

Ishita look down and blushed hearing his compliment.

Raman- from where u got this chooda.

Ishita- it was in cupboard. I know bride use to wear this for one whole month.waise toh mummy ji ko mujhe dena chahiye tha but she must have forgot due to my bad health.so I wear it my own.yeh achcha shagun hota hai.

Raman- u know everything about our customs ,isnt it.

Ishita nodded and said- its my dream to be ur bride.aur aaj main hoon.so I am so happy .bas mummy ji,papa ji aur simmi wapas aa jaaye then we will live happily together.kitna achcha hoga naa.

Ran looked at her and thought- don't know whether ur this dream will ever get fulfilled or not.

Seeing him lost in thought she asked-what happened. Kahan khoye hain.

Raman- nothing,I am just thinking why u r thinking about someone else in our private moments.its our honeymoon period or isme kisi aur ko yaad karna is not allowed.he said smiling trying to lighten the moment.

Ishita- oh really,is that so.then take me our honeymoon destination.

Raman- very soon,but now we should dine together.u r looking too pale.let's go.he said forwarding his hand ,but ishita open her arms instead of holding his hand.he smiled and scooped her in his arms and took her to the dining hall.

Ishita was mesmerized seeing the beauty .whole room was decorated with white and red roses along with scented candles with a slow music.

She smiled looking at them.

Raman- do u like it.

Ishita- its beautiful Raman.I just loved it.

Raman give her a bouquet of white lilies and said kissing the back of her palm- and I love u.I am glad u like the arrangements. Now can I have the pleasure of dancing with this beautiful lady.he said forwarding his hand.

She held his hand and said- pleasure is all mine ,handsome .

He pulled her closer,she landed on his chest.he grabbed her milky waist in his hand and both start dancing together.

Kaise bataaye, kaise jataaye
Subah tak tujhme jeena chahein
Bheege labon ki, geeli hansi ko
Peene ka mausam hai peena chahein

Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..

Ehsaas tere aur mere toh
Ik dooje se judd rahe
Ik teri talab mujhe aisi lagi
Mere hosh bhi udne lage

Mujhe milta sukoon teri baahon mein
Jannat jaisi ek raahat hai

Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..

Kyun sabse juda, kyun sabse alag
Andaaz tere lagte..
Besaakh ta hum saaye se tere
Har shaam lipat'te hain
Har waqt mera, qurbat mein teri
Jab guzre toh ibadat hai

Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai o.. teri aadat hai..



They were dancing in sync on the rythem ,she was lost in the moment keeping her head on his chest while he was wounding his arms around her.

Raman- let's go ishita,we should have dinner now.u didn't well in the morning also.

Ishita nodded and they went to the table.she saw everything was her favourite. Some Indian some continental.

Ishita-wow,u r arranged everything according to my taste.I just love it.

Raman- coz today I am all set to pamper u.saying so he pulled the chair and made her sit.after that he served some white pasta in the plate and start feeding her.

Ishita- I can eat myself,Raman.u too eat.

Raman- no I want to feed u .saying so he feed her a spoonful of pasta.she took it and asked looking at him- can I ask u something Raman.

Raman said taking another spoon- anything jaan.

Ishita- main Marne wali hoon kya.(am I going to die).

Raman look at her with confused look.

Ishita- u r pampering me today like anything like I will not see tomorrow.

Raman- what rubbish,cant I love and pamper u.

Ishita- yes u can.but I fainted and was in hospital.then u bring me here leaving ur house then u were crying bitterly.and now u r pampering me like ,

Raman couldn't let her complete and took her in a bone crushing hug.

Raman- tum pagal ho kya.kya bakwaas kar rahi ho .

Ishita- no Raman.I can sense something is very wrong with me.the way u were crying I can feel u have lost something very precious. Agar main thik hoon toh kahin mummy ji,papaji yaa simmi.unhe toh kuch,woh sab thik hai naa Raman.

Raman - woh thik hai.

Ishita- main bhi thik hoon,woh bhi thik hoon.then why u r in so much pain.ur smile can fool everyone but not me,I can see ur pain beneath ur smile.kahiye naa Raman,kya hua hai.I am feeling so suffocated seeing u like this.

Raman- nothing happened jaan.u r overreacting .

Ishita- sach.

Raman- haan baba sach.

Ishita keep his hand on her head and said- then swear on me.

Raman remove his hand from her head and said- is this some joke.u don't believe me naa.toh mujhe baat hi nahi karni.saying so he turned and going.his eyes were filled for hurting her.

Raman- (st)I know I am doing wrong with u.but I can't let anything happen to u jaan.thinking so he was going when she hold his hand.he turn to look at her and within no second she hugged him tight.

Raman couldn't hold it anymore and cried like a baby in her embrace.she caress his back lovingly and asked-tell me Raman.what went wrong .

Raman- I can't tell u jaan.tumhe kho nahi sakta.tumhari aankhon mein aansu nahi dekh sakta.please don't force me.

Ishita- main bhi nahi dekh sakti aapko takleef mein Raman.I want to know the reason of ur tears.mujhe haq hai jaanne ka.

Raman broke the hug and said cupping her face- please mat pucho.tum seh nahi paogi.

Ishita- if u r with me I can bear anything.trust me Raman,u r my strength and if u r with me I can bear any pain but cant see u in pain.bataiye mujhe kya hua hai.she said shaking him hard.

Raman cried bitterly and said- humne kho jaan.humne kho diya usse.main nahi bacha paya.

Ishita- kise kho diya Raman.kise nahi bacha paye aap.bataiye naa.

Raman- we lost our child ishita.u had a miscarriage today.finally he said making her shocked.

She crushed on the floor lifelessly listening to his words.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for ur responses.

Ps-175+ likes and long comments for early update .
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unresed...

😭 😭
Emotional update...
Raman wanted make something special for ishu...
So he himself arranged a dinner date...
& ishita she know everything about punjabi rituals...
She herself wore the chooda...
She can sense that something z wtrong vth raman...
& she asked that wether she'l die tomorow 😭
& as raman z not telling anything...
She asked to say swaring on her...
He can do anything for her but he can sware on her & lie & finally he said...
she had a miscourage...
Plz update soon...
Egerly waiting..
Edited by fSharm - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Edited...
Nice update Raksh...
Ramann is soo cute...he wanted to surprise her so he arranged for a perfect date...he feels happy n relaxed with her...
She was so happy with the surprise n she absolutely loves it...
The dance😳
Finally she asked him something that was bothering her for long...the reason behind his extra care n love . ..he said it's nothing... she asked him if she's gonna die she asked if his parents n simmi are fine she asked him every dam thing ...
But once he knew that she wouln't back off he told her the reason that they lost their baby he's guilty that he couldn't do anything to save their baby...
Waiting for ishita 's reaction ...
Continue soon...
Edited by -Nii- - 9 years ago

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