FAASLE- An Ishra TS. UPDATED Chapter 3-2 on 10/01/16 Pg 21 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Beautiful update...
My fav line " we're toxic... We will destroy each other "
Good that she didn't follow him... But don't separate them yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Vee,
I love you! I hope, u do know that! Its like I m reading whatever i have been saying and thinking this last few days. The fact that they BOTH keep on hurting each other. Its not about revenge. But still, that question of mujhe bhi dard hua tha comes up...

n Her being thrown out ...and her abhimaan... n his anguish, gussa, cant stop loving her...

ooh my... its like you were inside my head... I right now want to go running to Fiji and hug you tight... I am so happy you decided to write this. You made me feel for them again... I was avoiding talking abt IshRa, coz it was hurting me... but you made me wanna embrace them again, even though they are toxic..to themselves and to us 😆...

and you ma lady...



PS: My heart did a flipflop when i saw my name in ur dedication list...yaaay...




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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Excellent but in my view Ishita is so much strong and understanding, that she will return to her house forgiving everyone. She is not that type of character easily breakdown. However your story marching very strong with your point view.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Riahshroff

This was so emotional 😭

I loved the confrontation and Ishita is so so right. They cannot keep throwing her out of the house like this every time she's wrong
He was wrong n she just made it worst 😕
But plz tell me they will be together 😭 Jaise bhi hai... I can't see them separated 😭 😭


Thanks Riah. I cant see them separated too, but then what is the solution? 😭 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: .TIA.

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

This was soo emotional Vee. I loved the confrontation and I loved that she told him how she was hurt too 😕. This is how it should have been,
Yes they hurt each other but they love each other too.
U already know what I would want but this is upto u
Hume yaad rakhna but 😭 😆
Just love this TS 👏
🤗


Tia you read, Im so glad 🤗

You know I want what you want too, but Im just trying to decide how to end this 😆 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Chiku777

Interesting story

so emotional
beautifully written👏
continue soon


Thank you - will finish by this weekend
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
OMG so many feels! Vee this was wonderful, and almost cathartic to read because you laid out their emotions and how they have hurt each other.
I absolutely loved the voice you gave Ishita, she needed to say those things about his family being unfair to her and I loved that you let Raman express his anger.

I absolutely loved it! Loved when Ishita says that [we will destroy each other]...loved it!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beckysharp

Vee loved loved loved the way you have written this. The confrontation between IshRa was really amazing to read. I loved the fact that Ishita asserted her claim on the children as their mother!

I also liked it that Ishu did not immediately follow Raman when he asked her to return home.

Whether they reunite or not, before you end it, I hope we get a heart to heart between them so they know how much they are hurting the other!

Looking forward to the final update!

Love ya loads!


Becky thank you yaar - I know we sometimes have divergent views on this, but you know I love Ishita too, and her self respect matters to me.

Thank you so much for reading - I wanted you to like this, so I am so glad I did not disappoint 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Beautiful update...
My fav line " we're toxic... We will destroy each other "
Good that she didn't follow him... But don't separate them yaar


Thanks mate.

I didnt think it was right for her to just go whenever he beckons - I think they need to talk more and make some decisions.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalz_123

Vee,

I love you! I hope, u do know that! Its like I m reading whatever i have been saying and thinking this last few days. The fact that they BOTH keep on hurting each other. Its not about revenge. But still, that question of mujhe bhi dard hua tha comes up...

n Her being thrown out ...and her abhimaan... n his anguish, gussa, cant stop loving her...

ooh my... its like you were inside my head... I right now want to go running to Fiji and hug you tight... I am so happy you decided to write this. You made me feel for them again... I was avoiding talking abt IshRa, coz it was hurting me... but you made me wanna embrace them again, even though they are toxic..to themselves and to us 😆...

and you ma lady...



PS: My heart did a flipflop when i saw my name in ur dedication list...yaaay...





Aww Shalz thanks yaar. I've been missing you in our WA discussions - I really dont know how to end this story yet. I want them together but I also think they cant go on like this. They love each other so much that they hurt each other when they are together, but ownt they hurt more apart?

Thank you for the lovely lovely comments 🤗

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