~Kya Yeh Pyaar Nahi Hai~ISHRA TS part 2 pg 7 27/12 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2

Note: I am sorry to say but I am very disappointed with the response I am getting. Please give atleast one word replies. They motivate me to write. Enjoy reading.

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Ignore typo n grammatical errors

Raman reaches office and bumps into ashok.

Raman: hey hai bro

Ashok: bhai maine raat bhar soch liya and maine decide kar liya I will go straight

Raman: kyunki voh tumhara dost hai

Ashok: lunch or coffee ke liye bulau?

Raman: ok

Ashok: lunch or coffee?

Raman: coffee ke liye bulake lunch khilade saale

Ashok: tum hoge na saath mein?

Raman: tum donom ke beech mai kya karunga?

Ashok: bhai bhai please first time hai mera pleaseee

Raman: acha theek hai jao

Ashok leaves from there.shagun is coming towards the same place but when raman turns around she wears helmet .raman goes directly to shagun ,catch hold of her head and straightens his hair in by looking at the glass of her helmet n leaves .

ISHITA'S HOUSE:

Ishita: school se lekar college tak hamari har classmate ko call karo .har kisi ke touch mein theen char log toh honge . from them find out who he is.come on hurry up.

With this ishita and all her friends immerse themselves in calling all their friends to find out the caller.this continues till the evening.

Nisha: jo bhi hai boss uske wajah se saare friends phir se touch mein aa gaye. Bechare woh soch rahe honge hum unhe yaad karke call kiya.

Sushma: lekin itna kuch karne ke baad bhi voh mila nahi

Ishita: voh isliye kyunki voh hamara classmate hi nahi

All shouts at a time: kya?

Ishita: usne hamare saat game khela

Nisha: phir tu use call kar

Ishita: nahi voh khud karega just wait.

NEXT DAY:

Ishita phone rings

Vandita: vahi hai. She lifts the call n put it on speaker.

Raman: hellooo

Ishita: tum hamare classmate nahi ho na

Raman:abhi bhi doubt hai? Mujhe laga kal hi pakad logi

Ishita: kaise pakad leti baat toh aise kiya jaise meri bahut purani dost hai.

Raman: agar aap mere naam dhoond ne ki bajay mujhse aapke naam pooch lete jhat mein pakad jata mai

Ishita: kya mera naam bhi nahi jaanthe ho?

Raman: jab aapko jaanu tab aapko naam ko jaantha hu right?

Ishita: tum mujhe jaanthe tak nahi ho?phir kyun call kiya?

Raman: aapko jaan ne ke liye

Ishita keeps her phone aside n asks her friends who played this prank on her .

Vandita: hum kyun karenge?

Ishita: phir mujhe aise call aane ki chance hi nahi hai

Nisha: mujhe toh tum par hi shak hai

Ishita: what the hell.

Nisha: ab mujhe samaj aayi. Kal usne jo qualities bataya usi ke hisaab arrange karwaya hai na tu ishu? Jo tumhe bina dekhe pyaar kare. Jo tumhare status , property ke bina tume accept kare jise iski naam ,pata kuch nahi pata ho aise boyfriend kaha milega?

Raman listens to all this on the other side of phone and smirks

Ishita: mai kyun karunga aisi pagal harkat?

Vandita: matlab yeh sach mein ajnabi hai?

Ishita: tume sach mein mera naam nahi pata? She asks surprisingly

Raman: sab sun liya maine. trust me kal ke call hi hamari pehli baatein hai. Achanak ek ajanbi aapko call karke friendship ke liye poocha toh kya aap manenge?

Nisha: never

Raman:isliye socha aapko apki purani dostom se milakar ache impression le lu. Par yeh trick sirf aapki attention ke liye.ab mai apna poora biodata bata deta hun..mai raman bhalla . psr international mein software analyst hu

Nisha: wait wait just wait . ab ek shabd tumhare baare mein mat batana.

Sushma: kya kar rahe ho?

Nisha: yaar it's a miracle.sahi mein ek mila tumhari kahi qualities se milte.

Ishita gets happily surprised while raman sulks on the other side for not getting to know about her

Nisha: raman tum married ho?

Raman: ek baar bhi nahi

Nisha: toh tumne sab suna sach mein u don't know our friend right? Tumne kabhi dekha nahi na use agar dekha hai toh bolo abhi cut karenge.

Raman: nahi kabhi dekha nahi , he lies

While ishita's friends engage raman in a convo ishita takes her laptop n searches for raman bhalla in facebook. She finally finds an account matching all the information she knows about raman.she calls her friends n shows his pics.

Sushma: bahut handsome hai yaar.

Ishita: shhh ok mr bhalla I believe you.

Raman: thankyou thankyou

Ishita: let me be clear about one thing. Jaise aapne suna this is not for love just friendship

Raman: its ok , he says making faces

Ishita: aapne apne naam bataya so lets continue it but mai apna naam nahi bataungi

Raman: theeke kuch darling ,sweetheart , pari bula tu

Ishita smiles hearing this.

Ishita: n haan jab tak main a bolu mujhe dekhne ka ya milne ka koshish mat karna

Raman: exactly mai bhi vahi bolne wala hu, he said gritting his teeth

Ishita: n haan agar aap facebook jaisa social networks pe ho toh apna pics delete keejiye

Raman: abhi karta hu par kyu?

Ishita: bcoz mai nahi chahti ki meri friends bhi aapko dekhe.

Raman: okkk

Soon all the photos get deleted from the account ishita is looking at. So she gets confirmed that it is raman.

Raman: done

Ishita: ok bye for now , ishita said controlling her laughter.

Raman: bye , cuts the call.

After the call,

Ishita: I don't belive this

Nisha: tum kitne khatarnak ho? Ab tak bolti rahi bina dekhe pyaar karna hai.aur ab use dekh liya.

Ishita: maine kaha mujhe dekhe bina mai toh dekh sakti hu. Ladki hu yaar itna safety toh lena hi hai.

Vandita: toh phir uske photos delete kyu karwaya?

Ishita: confirm karne ke liye ki vahi hai ya nahi

RAMAN'S HOUSE:

Raman selftalk seeing the girl's pic on his phone

Raman: itni kya thedi ho yaar? Bina dekhe pyaar mai toh friendship bhi nahi karunga.socha pata nahi kitna planning karni padega tume patane ne ke liye par tu toh itni aasani se pat gayi. I love you baby

Same day coffee shop:

Ashok comes with raman there to meet his girlfriend. Raman leaves from there just before she comes promising ashok that he will on phone through Bluetooth. Finally the girl comes and turns out to be shagun for whom he gets attracted.

Ashok: hai yaar

Shagun: hai ashok . why this suddenly?

Ashok (Bluetooth): kya bolu yaar?

Raman: bahut din ho gaye tumse mile

Ashok: bahut din ho gaye tumse mile

Shagun: ohhh then

Ashok(BT): then

Raman: bolo ki uski dress achi hai

Ashok: us ladki ka dress bahut achi hai na , he says pointing to another girl.

Raman: arey bewacoof ek ladki ke saamne kabhi doosri ki tareef nahi karni chahiye

Like this with so much confusion ashok finally completes his date shagun.

On the other side raman and ishita's friendship gets deeper with days. They become best of friends. Raman started addressing ishita as pari.they started sharing every minute detail of their lives. On the other side raman is continuously giving ideas to ashok to impress shagun unknown of the real fact. Raman finds ishita's address through his friend in telecom company but fails to see her at home.

Few days later ishita's parents arrive from their tour with ishita's cousin mihika . the same night ishita tells everything about raman to her father while mihika looks at the father daughter shocked

Mr iyer: kya hua?

Mihika: duniya mein pehli baar hoga shayad. Baap beti ke saamne sharab pee rahe hai aur beti apni lovestory bata rahi hai.

Mr iyer: bcoz ishu hai hi aisi. Usne kabhi apne liye mere status ya naam ko use nahi kiya

Ishita: but appa abhi mujhe jaroorat padi hai

Mr iyer: kya chahiye?

Ishita: mujhe raman ke company mein ek job chahiye

Mr iyer: don't worry mai arrange karwata hu. Vaise kab mila rahe ho mujhe apni honewale damaad se?

Ishita: one week mein

Few days after...

Ishita's birthday:

She has been waiting all the day for raman's call but did not receive one. Her parents has celebrated with her at midnight but she wants to talk to raman once. She wants him to wish her on her special day. Just then the phone rings. She immediately takes up the call.

Raman: hey abhi ke abhi hill park aavo

Ishita: kyu?

Raman: pehle aavo toh sahi

Ishita: aaj meri bahut special day hai. Bhool gaye ho na tum?

Raman: kya? Tumhara toh mujhe nahi pata but its very special for me

Ishita: tumhari birthday hai kya?

Raman: birthday mein kya special hai?tum aao pari tume kuch dikhana hai

Ishita: mai nahi aaungi

Raman: pari please please aavo na

Ishita: kyu agar mai aavu toh mujhe dekhne ke liye?

Raman: dekhu toh tab na jab mai pehchanu. Meri ek event hai.

Ishita: event hai toh mai tume dekh lunga na

Raman: no problem . mujhe toh shak hai tum facebook pe hi mujhe dekh liya

Ishita: mai utna khatarnak nahi hu , she says stammering

Raman: us mein galat kya hai? Ladki ho apni safety ke baare mein toh sochna chahiye. Chalo yeh sab mai nahi jaanta tum aa rahi ho that's all , he cuts the call

Ishita: itni aasani se use meri feelings kaise pata chal raha hai

Mihika:tum donom ka pyaar hi aisa hai. Ab chalo chalte hai.

Ishita and mihika finally reaches the place. Ishita sees raman standing in front of her car. She immediately hides by bending.

Mihika: kya hua?

Ishita: vahi hai jo saamne khada hai

Mihika: kya lag rahe hai. Sach mein u r lucky

Ishita: vaise mai kyu chip rahi hu. Voh toh mujhe nahi pehchanta. Ek kaam karte hai abhi ek test lete hai.

Ishita and mihika gets down from the car n intentionally walks before raman observing him.

Ishita: usne toh nahi pehchana

Mihika: ha yaar sach mein genuine hai banda

Raman calls ishita

Raman: itne der kyu?

Ishita: tum hi late ho. Mai already aa gayi.

Raman glances the entire place but could not find the girl whose pic he has in his phone.

Raman:acha kaha ho?

Ishita: tume kya? Apna event dikhao mujhe jaana hai

Raman: theeke

Raman whistles n suddenly hot air balloons start rising into air one by one. Finally they form

HAPPY BIRTHDAY PARI

Ishita gets teary eyed seeing it n cries out of happiness. She searches for raman everywhere n finally calls him on finding there.

Raman: happy birthday pari

Ishita: mujhe laga tum bhool gaye

Raman: frnds bhoolte nahi. Vaise jab tak next level nahi pahunchte hai tab tak friends hi kehte hai na.

Ishita: sach mein bahut khubsoorat hai

Raman: vaise kab mil rahe ho mujhse?

Ishita: three magical words kehne three days mein tumhari saamne rahungi

Raman: what ? u mean three days??? One two three, He asks counting his fingers happily surprised

Ishita: ha three days

To be continued...

Precap: The truth comes out .

Awating ur replies.

Edited by Ishradivani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

yaaa

I always wanted to write on it
Finally yesterday I saw it n managed to write

i luv that mve
Thanks for writing it on ishra
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Amazing Update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Amazing Update
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Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hii, Nice writing
its a Telugu film story. u implemented the charters in the story is nice. but i want a extension of story after the film.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
omg the surprise was so cute!
i really hope ishu is not too heart broken how can raman do this nooo
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Awesome update
Hope they like each other when they meet for the 1st time...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for the nxt... Eger to knw wether raman acept ishu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
awesome chapter
waiting for the next update
the truth will come out😲
update soon
thnks fr pm

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