~Kya Yeh Pyaar Nahi Hai~ISHRA TS part 2 pg 7 27/12 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi

Interesting Prologue

Revenge is from Ishita side. Very different concept

hey
Thanku .ya revenge is from ishita side but its not a dark story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

It seems its a revengeful story..

Lyk d prologue..
Continue soon
All d very best 4 new story..
Keep writing
:)

its a revenge but not a dark one
Ya will update in a while
Thanku for ur support
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Ooh...revenge...

Very interesting prologue
Continue soon

hey hetvi thanku yaar
Will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ishrasoul

interesting chotto...

update soon

thanku dii
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ishra123

Congrats for new story
Interesting prologue
Thanks for pm

thanku yaar
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Kya Yeh Pyaar Nahi Hai??

Part 1

Not proofread

Ignore typo n grammatical errors

ROMI'S WEDDING

The wedding was going on a vibrant mode. Everyone present there were very happy for the couple but the most happiest were the friends of romi. Though romi had many flings in the past he is finally getting married to sarika. And so his gang was celebrating this wedding standing in a corner.

Mihir: chalo romi ka bhi shaadi ho gaya . ab sirf aap bache ho bhai

Niel: ha bhai sirf aap bache ho.aap kahe toh hum dhoondle aapke ladki KO?

Raman: heyyy meri lover se lekar flower tak sirf mai hi dhoond lunga

Mihir: ab voh kaha milegi?

Raman: hogi kahi sirf mere liye intizaar karti hui. Sirf mere saat ke life,mere pyaar ke liye

Describing the qualities of the girl he wants raman turns back only to see a girl wearing pink anarkali smiling with her friends.she was looking breathtaking. Raman was so lost in her. Everything about her , her eyes,smile,lips everything was making raman go insane.he slowly started proceeding towards her without his own knowledge.

Just then the girl along with her friends moves to the stage ,wishes the couple n comes back.raman follows her everywhere n finally manages to take her photo.but in the next second he lost her path.he searched frantically for her everywhere but could not find.

Mihir: bhai use is shaadi se koi link nahi hai. Voh just sarika ki friend ki friend hai

Raman immediately catches the point n moves to the stage. He shows the pic of the girl to romi.

Romi: kya lag rahi hai bhai!!! Thode din pehle dikha deta.

Raman: thappad maru tujhe. Sarika tu ise jaanthi ho?

Sarika: ha bhai ye archana ki friend hai.mai pata kar leti hu.

Romi: bus bhai ab tension na le. Mai uska naam,address pata karke tujhe introduce karwata hu.

Raman: dekh mujhe yeh introduction ,recommendation pasand nahi hai. Bus number pata laga sirf number .

NEXT DAY:

RAMAN'S OFFICE:

All his colleagues along with raman were sitting in canteen when raman observes ashok standing outside. He moves towards ashok.

Ashok: yeh raman kaha hai???

Raman: hai ashok

Ashok: think of the devil n the devil arrives. Thanku mere bhai

Raman: kyu love matter hai kya?

Ashok: tujhe kaise pata chala? Kahi tume pyaar toh nahi hogaya?/

Raman: honewala hai.

Ashok: kaise lagti hai voh ladki

Raman: superr

Ashok: naam address ?

Raman: kuch nahi pata

Ashok: tu vaise bhi set karlega apna ,meri help karde bhai

Raman: theeke raat ko ghar aaja ,daaru peeyenge aur kuch sochenge

Just then the same girl enters the boutique opposite to raman's office.but raman does not notice her.

SAME NIGHT:

RAMAN'S HOUSE:

Raman: dekh ashok yeh love snooker game jaisa hai. Mard stick jaisa hai n ladki ball hai aur love...

Ashok: goal hai kya?

Raman: ha stick pakad ne wale har koi ball ko goal mein bhejna chahta hai par it's not easy.

Ashok: jis se mai pyar karta hu voh meri frnd hai . phir bhi I am tensed aur tune sirf number maanga. Kya confidence hai boss?

Raman: confidence nahi situation hai. Mai koi sharukh thodi hu jo I love you bolte hi voh mere pyaar mein padjaye. Pehle uski attention grab karna hai,phir attract karana hai n then use ek achi impression ayegi

Ashok: aur tab love express karoge?

Raman: nahi create karna hai

Ashok: bhai mujhe bhi kuch sikhade

Raman: tujhe kyu? Teri love toh teri friend hai na ? aur friends ke saat games nahi khelte u just proceed directly.

Ashok: bhai teri ladki ko dikhao

Raman: nahi voh sirf meri hai jab tak meri love success nahi ho jati tab tak kisi ko nahi dikhaunga , he said dreamily caressing the girl's pc on his phone

SAME NIGHT:

PUB:

Romi was drinking when he gets a call from sarika.

Romi: kya hua?

Sarika: ek good news hai

Romi: shaadi ko ek mahine hui abhi good news??

Sarika: shut up raman bhai ki girlfriend hai na uski number milgayi.

Romi: acha bolo

Sarika: 9126123456

Romi: wah fancy number hai!!

Sarika : chalo bye

Romi calls raman who was in deep sleep.

Raman: kya hua ? itni raat ko call kiya?

Romi: guess karo maine kyun call kiya?

Raman: saale jitna late tu kar raha hai na uske liye toh mai

Romi: shaant ho jao yaar mil gayi uski number

Raman immediately jerks out of his sleep and asks for number

Romi: 9126 1 to 6

Raman: note kiya maine ( he thinks it's 9126126)

Romi: arey yeh fancy number hai .9126 ke baad 1 to 6 hai .

Raman: thanku romi thanks a ton.

Raman feeds the girl number as 9126126126

Romi:dekha fancy number ko kitna creatively bola maine

Raman: voh already fancy number tu ghanta kuch kiya

Romi: teri kaam jo ho gaya ab aise hi bolega

Raman: chal phone rakh

Romi: aur haan uska naam shagun hai

Raman cuts off the call and thinks to call the girl.

Raman:(st) itni raat hai. Soti hogi na tum. So jao kal dekhlenge , he says dreamily looking at the pic and dozes off.

NEXT MORNING:

A girl along with her friends gets down the car at the gym and takes her bag out. But at this moment her mobile slips out of the bag n remains in the car while she goes inside

Inside the gym all are doing exercises but nisha is engrossed in phone.

Vandita: dekho isse humse jyada facebook ki padi

Girl: tujhe jalan jyu ho raha hai?

Nisha: friend ho help nahi kar sakti?

Vandita: mai wrong route mein jaane wale ke help nahi karti

Girl: pyaar karna galat hai kya?

Vandita: nahi par iski route galat hai. kisi ki naak naksh dekhe bina pyaar kaise ?

Girl: sab kuch shaadi ke pehle dekhne bhi aasan nahi hai na

Vandita: phir bhi yeh internet friendships sirf breakup ke liye hote hai

Girl: tum one year se relationship mein ho lekin kya hua?

Sushma: exactly long distance relations hi aaj kal nahi tikte phir yeh one week relations kaise hoge?

Girl: planning business ke liye hai relationship ke liye nahi. Pyaar kahi bhi ,kabhi bhi, kaise bhi ho jaati hai.pata hai meri fantasy kya hai. Ek perfect guy milna chahiye jo mujhpe marta hai . voh mujhe aise hi apna na chahiye mujhe dekhe aur milne ke bina. Mere back ground ,status jaane bina sirf mere dil ko dekhkar pyaar karna chahiye

Sushma: internet ke dinom mein yeh love letters wali baat impossible hai

Girl: isliye toh fantasy kaha

All the girls gang were back in car. Nisha sees the phone n finds a missed call.

Nisha: ek missed call hai unknown number se

Girl: call back karo

Nisha calls back and puts it on speaker.raman is in office n immediately lifts the phone

Raman: hellooo

Girl: ya whoz this?

Raman: ...

Girl: hellooo

Raman: koun hai?

Girl: aap koun hai?

Raman: vahi mai pooch rahi hu koun hu mai?

Girl: kyaaa?? Is this somekind of joke?

Raman: seriously speaking mai koun hu?

Girl: nonsense cut karde nisha

Raman: theeke already hum cut hogaye ,socha phir se connect karte hai lekin aapne toh pehchana hi nahi. Cut karde

Girl: koun ho boss?

Raman: boss nahi class. Tumhare saat padta tha

Girl: koun bol rahe hai

Raman: tum khud socho

Girl: vipul?

Raman: oh tume vipul yaad hai.phir toh mai pakka yaad rahunga

Girl: Samuel?

Raman: voh kameena bhi tujhe yaad hai aur mai nahi? Kutto ki saari toil tujhe yaad hai

Nisha: Charles?

Girl: nahi

Raman: correct

Girl: Charles ho?

Raman: tumne nahi kaha na voh correct hai

Girl: confuse kar rahe ho

Raman: tum bilkul nahi badle ho .bachpan mein aise hi mujhe chidate the aur abhi bhi

Girl: arey koi hint toh do

Raman: bas enough mai phone rakhta hu aur kal phir karunga.pehchan paayi ho toh theeke varna friends ke bina bhi toh jee sakta hu , he said faking sadness in his voice

Raman cuts the call and does a victory dance

Nisha: koun hai ISHITA yeh??????

To be continued...

Note: hope u people got the plot by now.

I gave a quick update so I want many n long comments

I am nervous about this concept so please tell me should I continue it or not

Please bring to my notice if it is similar to any other stories

Awaiting ur replies...

Edited by Ishradivani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Updated first part
Enjoy n let me know how it is
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Hey dis stry is same as dat Telugu mvi na gunde jaari galanth ayinde???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Hey dis stry is same as dat Telugu mvi na gunde jaari galanth ayinde???

yaaa
I always wanted to write on it
Finally yesterday I saw it n managed to write
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

yaaa

I always wanted to write on it
Finally yesterday I saw it n managed to write


K k cool

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