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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: AshmiShahul
awesome writing diii
U made ishu a modern girl.
lvd appa's phone convo with Raman.
will tell about balance after reading once more
u know I'm a confused soul

Wh-wh-what 😲
Again confusion baby 😲

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deepali.rock

@deepali.rock

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Only one word..HAAYE 😳 😳

This was such a sweet one..I m in lala land ❤️

I have a request.. 😳

Since you said it could be a TS..

please right another part 😆 OF their SUHAGRAAT 😳

PRETTY PLEASE 🤣

Edited by deepali.rock - 9 years ago

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kras

@kras

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Amazing amazing os

Omg ishu is so bold

But she is so emotional also

She is just like a kid

Raman loves ishu

But he hesitate to tell her

And he is also right

Because according to him ishu is a kid

And a spoiled brat

But all well when ends well

But i really feel bad for raman friend

She loves him

Raman deny her straight

And I like it

And that girl also help raman

She didn't break her friendship

And I love it

Edited by kras - 9 years ago

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Ishu27

@Ishu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Superb lovely update gayu. Loved it da chellam. Ur best asusual..

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Awww so lovely update

Dil chura li is update ne

Now please give another part as well

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Ishradivani
Awww so lovely update
Dil chura li is update ne
Now please give another part as well

How can I give another part for OS 😳
Anyways... Glad you enjoyed it dear 😃

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gunmu

@gunmu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Wow that girl was ishu

I was really shocked

Raman action after ishu avoiding him

was too good.

No shagun reallyyy you are

tooo good.

Thank you for the story 😛

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: deepali.rock
Only one word..HAAYE 😳 😳
This was such a sweet one..I m in lala land ❤️

I have a request.. 😳
Since you said it could be a TS..
please right another part 😆 OF their SUHAGRAAT 😳
PRETTY PLEASE 🤣

Glad you enjoyed 😳
Tch tch... another part...that too SR... 😲
🤣🤣🤣