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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Nice prologue

Just tell me who is ishita,saree one or dress one

Its damn confusing and this little devil can do anything

Update soon

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shreya303

@shreya303

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

It came in my mind just like that Rida 😆
Well... Glad you liked it 😳

No Pls!!! No apshagun!!!!

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Mdwst
Well well someone is on a writing spree nowadays ...,, Gayu ,... Girls girls girls every where falling for rkb.., but I'm Sure Ishu is not one of the 2 it is it ? Nice babe ... I have commented on ur other os yet.

Yeah... Writing fever 😆
Glad you commented Viji 😃

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Divanru
Another prologue of new os .
Gayu I must say you are writing in bullet speed dear .
I m yet to read previous one .😭
Ok coming to prologue ,it was nice .
Ok let me guess ,the girl in saree was ishita and the girl in short gown was shagun .
Its my guess but as you are twist queen you can do vice versa.
At first I thought that ishita is his professor and raman is behind her .
Ok continue soon.

I'm machine gun when it comes in updating OS
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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Updated the OS...
Enjoy reading...
PMs after a while...
A little busy 😳

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Sorry I took so long to unres

But it was so sweet I read it like four to five times

Awesome shot

I was so sure after reading the prologue that the girl in skirt is ishu and I was so right

Its so good to see ishra in a new light

A bratty ishu and a seedha saadha Raman

Not so seedha saadha yet😉

Their first meeting was cute and so were the later one

Oops she kissed him in front of the class and in place of scolding her he was scolding himself🤣

The saree scene was nice

I felt bad when he rejected her and she went in a shell

Love when it said let's get expelled together

All in all a lovely one

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: cutieruhi
Yippee me first.
Res will unres soon
I am so fast

Heee... That you are 😉

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

awesome writing diii
U made ishu a modern girl.
lvd appa's phone convo with Raman.
will tell about balance after reading once more
u know I'm a confused soul

Edited by AshmiShahul - 9 years ago