We've Only Just Begun - IshRa FF IMP Note Pg 50 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
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First things first, I apologise for the delay in unreserving my post. Please forgive me 😳


As usual, a beautifully written piece, giving us, the reader an opportunity to witness what a day in the life of our favourite couple would be like. I am seriously in awe of the way you so effortlessly are able to take the reader through the journey with such detail that we are able to visualise the actors/characters before our very eyes.

I'm glad we were able to see how the rest of the Bhalla clan are doing. They annoy me as much as they did on the show. Particularly Mr Bhalla whose character I was so disappointed by his behaviour towards Raman and Ishita.

'Ishita and Raman had been the pillars that stood strong, bearing every affliction that could harm the family... taking it on themselves to protect them all. They had sacrificed selflessly for each one of them, giving up on their own life and happiness...and done so without any regrets' .This so true yet the family, except Simmi and Mihir are unable to see this. I am glad the Bhallas are no longer one unit and are struggling. I hope they are giving their comeuppance for taking Ishra for granted.😡

I loved the morning scene in particular Raman helping Ishita whilst she slept in and then falling asleep with Ruhi. I was in stitches with the morning shower scene, imagining puttar's trying hard to control himself which we know he is not easy. The kiss on the shoulder was the cherry on the cake.☺️I seriously love this Ishra and their little family.


Rinki (RIP), still annoys me and I wish someone just slaps her for causing this mess.


I could go on and on but then would probably bore you to death and end up regurgitating your whole chapter.


The heart to heart between Raman and Simmi was lovely and gives us an insight into the turmoil and reasoning behind Raman's behaviour. I like these two and have always enjoyed their bond. Ishra are the true heart and soul of the Bhalla family without that you are left with nothing but an empty shell

I truly love it and can't wait for the next instalment🤗

Edited by Boo2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a beautiful update. It was so so so nice. I loved it. This is how family is and how it works. Really loving Ishra compact family moments. The thoughts of Simmi were so nice that though ishRa were in love before but it was caged.
So beautiful. In Bhalla house all shattered. Simmi knows the importance of ishRa in that house. I know not only family needs them they also need family. But the responsibility they shared in Bhalla house has left everyone dependent on them. Romi's business issues; still Papaji saying ill about Raman that though he did he showed that he did all that.

Loved IshRa family moments, how Raman helped ishita in morning. Adi has grown over leaps and bounds. He has become more responsible. Really loved the update. It was complete picture of family. Loving Simmi so much. She knows everything. Mihir is as usual lovely.

Update was too long but so nice. Will wait for next update. Thanks for PM, will wait for your intimation with PM for next update as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Anku and Neets
The update pace is nice.

It showed both of the family how they needed each other.

Simmi and Mihir thoughts were lovely and beautifully explained.

I do have a request Bhallaji 360 turns was not explained properly in the show if you can please give your view why he suddenly showing ill will towards IshRa

Waiting for your next update

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update and display of emotions and i really like this understanding ishra...just love it...pls update soon and pm me if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was awesome Anku..
That's how Family acts in this kinda situation..
Simmi & her thinking is nice..
Mihir & his thoughts towards Rinki is neat..
His talk with Raman is highlight...
IshRa is class apart in this update..
Bro-Sis talk is also pretty emotional in this update..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome uddate dear
U define every emotion every action of family LOVED IT
Standing Ovation to u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dis wats d true yhm story CVS must shw dis.. Instead of all other craps...
Plz give ur stories 2 CVS...
It was superb update...
Plz update next part asap..
Tq 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow, amazing ..brilliantly written..I wish this was shown in yhm..simmi's thoughts, mihir's thoughts too good... Raman simmi convo..emotional and nice bonding
Ishra no words...they are simply beautiful...thanks for the pm


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Posted: 9 years ago
Just wow:)))))The pace is just perfect...no complaints there..
Loved everything--Simmi, Mihir, Adi, Ruhi and especially our Ishra
I envy Ishita yaar...Puttar is such a perfect husband..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good Lord, Anku and Neets! U ladies have been doing a wonderful job by executing this story up and I must say I am seeing this as a REAL PIECE AND NOT A FICTION ,such is the writing...As in I could literally visualize the happenings in both the Bhalla houses!
I loved how you differentiated between both houses, the daily chors IshRa got to do and being dependent on each other along with fulfilling their kid's needs, studies etc with Simmi's arrival, conversation with Raman and getting back like old times, teasing and pulling legs and the other hand, where all are isloated to their own respectives jobs. Simmi's speaking back hard to Romi and Papaji was the best scene...

(general) Sometimes or rather I say, majority, people are been taken for granted esp the naive and innocent ones, who wouldn't speak back, yet all the fault and dirt comes on them for no fault of their's... This is a real punishment for being so good which is definitely intolerable.

Mihir-Raman conversation, I did feel pity for Mihir...! Rinky being a jerk and to handle such wives are real pain in the ass!

I just loved it..how much ever I keep praising, it will definitely not end..This is the one piece where you find in real life and not in reel, not now or not even in 10 years..Daily soaps are gonna be in the form of soaps, lather lather and make it more messier and before pouring water n cleaning, make it even messier..!

Beautiful Beautiful job...! Looking forward on how IshRa are going to manage their new life with baby steps!

👏👏👏👏



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