A Small Little Thing called Life - Ishra TS [Completed]

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Hi People...
I'm back with a new TS (Fictional)...
It's of two parts...
I'm so sorry for not updating Do you hate me... Not a promise, but i will soon...

Without Further rants... here's my Story...



A Small Little Thing called Life
-Shravs😳😳







"Ishu are you feeling better now...??"

"Yes Rinky, I am...btw, what did the doctor say... is the baby fine..??"

"Yes, the baby is fine Ishita...but... It's you who's weak, ... and the concern here is , baby will eventually get affected Ishu... why don't you just understand that..."

"But Rinky, I do take good care of myself , i do follow all your eating and medicine schedules and i'm also going to that Easy-To-Deliver exercise club... what else you expect me to do... I think this is just normal weakness a lady endures while pregnancy..."


"You are physically doing Good Ishitu... I'm talking about your mental health, Doctor doesn't even know about you ,but even she could understand that you are emotionally very down and stressed out. See, I know the situation you are in and whatever my baby bro is doing is wrong..."


"Nooo... Raman isn't wrong Rinky... It's me ... I put myself through this , My intention was to support him and lessen his pain and sufferings, but I guess, i shouldn't have done something like that, I shouldn't have hidden something like that... Especially, such matters..."


Tears started to roll through her cheeks... Rinky pulled her into a bear hug... Ishita held her tighter...


"I'm thankful to you Rinky... You have been my angel... you have helped me in my life a lot... you have showed me correct paths as and when i required them..."


"Shut up... You are also very special to me... right from the days when you were my fan... I do reminisce those days, I so miss my fan in you... your comments on my acting skills or the surprises... huh... nostalgic...anyways... right now we have to leave... otherwise these people are gonna kick us out..."


While in the car... Seeing Ishita in deep thoughts.....


"Ishita do you remember our first meeting at the studio where you came with lots of roses..."


"Yeah... I never knew, i would be able to meet you then... I just texted you, because i thought you were going through the same in your life... and stuff... but then , when i got your message back and those advices... i was somewhat relieved from my situations then... somehow convinced my mother to let go off me to see you after my broken engagement... when you expressed you would love to meet me... Those were the days Rinky... when i never even in my dreams thought you would eventually become my sister in law... Everything just fell in place after our meeting... My health got better, even my counsellor was astonished to see those remarkable changes in me... My amma was so thankful to you... and the most important thing, your advice to me to pursue my higher education and all those... It just feels nostalgic... You are seriously a magic wand..."


"Ohhh... hello... Don't make me fly... Btw, I'm annoyed ... You stolen my family from me... they all love you more... My di , My maa , My papa , My dadu , even the little ones... earlier it use to be me... their fav aunt... but now, it's you... huh.."


"You aren't serious are you..."


"Huh... Madam ... Up for Ice-cream your fave Choco-dip?????"


"That's because of Ra..ma... ahem... I mean Raman never use to let me eat any other...eventually I fallen in love with it..."


"Ohhh hooo...Somebody's taste buds have changed... Ahem ahem..."


"Ohhh... you of all shouldn't tease... common..."


"I love teasing you both... lovey dovey couple... actually... you both give me chances to get teased, not my fault..."


"huh..."


"What.."


"Don't you remember, when you came back from your never ending higher studies... that day, it was you both... the way you both were catching each other's glimpse... omg... I and mumma... knew it then and other... bhai has fallen for you... otherwise , the one who runs away from marriage. relationships and especially girls would never have ogled at you like that... The best part was, when you fell right into his arms... Ohhh... man... Someone can surely make a show ... romantic show of your story... "


For the first time, Ishita had a genuine smile , Rinky noticed it... and thought to herself...


(ST)This is what i want Ishu, Doctor's plan is working... I cannot let anything happen to you or the baby... You have to be in good mood... This baby is important Ishu... not because it will certify your truthfulness, but because, this will be the connecting node in your love story ahead.



"Ishita do you remember the way mom asked you to marry Raman... n they way you were looking at me for some help... haha... I'm still not over from that face, that puppy face of ours... I tell you mumma was so enjoying that too... and then when bro made an entry to the room... you were all numb... then me and mumma played with him too... Oh my god that was such a fun... you must have seen Raman's face then... he looked as if someone had sucked air from his lungs... "


"When ???"


"Don't you remember... when Raman came into the room, we told him that you are getting married... "


"Omg... when did this happen... i was so not anticipating maa's marriage proposal then that , i don't even know this happened..."


"Yeah , we know that...you were actually absentmindedly blushing and that helped us more to tease him and he actually believed us... haha... "


"Haawww... maa did this... omg... i didn't even know... "


"Then... you had your flight so, i told him to drop you to the airport... again you started blushing... then... you went to freshen up... Mummaa and I told him... the truth... Omg... you should have seen the blush and satisfaction on his face... he literally had a sigh of relief..."


"I can never ever forget that drive... I almost thought today i am going to miss my flight ... but still we made it on time... I didn't feel like going away leaving him behind... ... Then he came in with me...I wondered how could he do that... but I hesitated to ask... we had our dinner together for the first time... and then he told himself understanding my confusion...That he just booked a ticket... to enter the airport... I was shocked and angry... Omg... I can never forget that day... So many things happened... and I met my soulmate... He is just perfect for me in his own imperfect way..."


Ishita said dreamily ...


"Ahem ahem... I liked the Marriage drama more... all those Punjabi Madrasi combo ceremonies...sometimes the tamil costumes... sometimes those Punjabi sherwanis... I tell you he got hell annoyed... he just wanted you in his room...The best part was, you both were teased a lot by all the cousins... "


"I know... huh... Very bad you people were... you people didn't let us speak also... "


"As if you both heed any attention to our teasing... you both were busy with yourselves..."


"Nothing like that..."


"But, the funniest part was when you weren't leaving me... "


"When ???"


"Suhaag Raat madam..."


Ishita blushed hard...


"I was so scared to get in there... I didn't know why but i got reminded of my past in those moments and again was scared of moving ahead..."


"Huh... you weren't even letting me go... you hugged me as if , your life was dependent on me... I got scared... you kept on mumbling you don't want to go... Mummaa was super pissed... then i had to cool you down... my poor brother was wondering what's wrong... Mumma then for the first time shouted at both of us... Oh my... i thought dadu is going to yell at you next but then he supported you like anything... then... somehow you got convinced... i made you enter the room... made you sit in the bed... huh... You were literally shaking... that eyes... you were pleading not to go... I didn't had it in me to leave you alone so, i had to do that... wait till Brother enter..."


"Huh... The very first mistake of mine..."

"Ohhh hooo... Nothing like that... every girl is afraid... Even i was... Do you thing I wasn't afraid ???? If you ask mumma... even she will say... she was... it was just that... new house, new culture , new people... bad past experiences... everything added to it... But believe me Raman understood your situation fully because , We both saw Simmi di do the same... "


"Yes... He understood me... But, I didn't understand him then... I didn't think about him... He wanted to enjoy our togetherness... but, something in me stopped myself from moving ahead that day... But, i never expected him to make me feel that good that day... He made me feel owned... He spoke to me about the family members asked me about mine... we just kept on speaking... and i didn't even know... as in when i drowsed off... and eventually felt asleep in his arms... He wanted a wife in me and I only served him his friend..."


"You both were perfect couple"


"No... you and Jiju... Just perfect..."


"haha... You are in your own way... You both are dependent on each other and the best part is you both don't even understand it..."


"Huh... Care to explain..."


"Whenever he use to have random schedules... you always use to be up... have dinner, breakfast and lunch with him... when you yourself had a random schedule of work and Raman use to do the same... But, both of you never made it a big issue or acknowledged..."


"That's so normal..."


"No... baby... It's not... You both enjoy the bliss of togetherness without even knowing it..."


"huh... "


"Achcha you remember... the day when he came all drunk... That day... I was surprised to see you were making all his favourite dishes and he just entered drunk and you were just annoyed..."


Rinky noticed the change in her demeanor... She stopped the car...


"Ishita where are you... Come out ... we are home already... Come..."


Ishita got out still in trance... her mind was not letting her forget that one day which took everything away from her...



To be continued...😳😳


Posting the second part in sometime...Till then enjoy this and let me know...😊😊

Thanks for reading... Hope you all liked it... Hit the like button, if you did... Do let me know about what you feel about this write up via commenting...😊😳



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Part 2

A Small Little thing called Love
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"Raman... Are you drunk????."


"Ishita... "


He hugged her not saying any further...


"Raman Whao... what what are you doing..."


He hugged tighter and nuzzled her neck...Giving wet kisses here n there...


"Raman... You..."


He captured her lips in a soul searing kiss, deepened the kiss even further while Ishita responded him without hesitating and he started exploring her further... Which made Ishita lose her control too... and They consummated their marriage in most unique situation possible.., where one of them didn't anticipate it, Though loved those moments as precious treasures and the other wasn't in senses to acknowledge the moment they both were awaiting in their Marriage... You heard it right, After the First Night, As a perfect partner , Raman waited for his Ishita to be as passionate as he was, in all this. Though, Both of them didn't knew it would end up this way... their special moments would be this way...


After the Love making session, he slept off in her arms... Though she wasn't anticipating such a thing coming from him, She didn't take it otherwise.


"Raman... I'm very Happy today... I was in initial days of our marriage very scared with all of this., But then, I thought you don't have interest in me... You see my past made me feel complexed... But, Today , I feel owned... I don't really know if you will remember this , But , I will never forget these moments Raman... You showed me how much you love... Even though weren't in your senses, The way you touched me as if I'm a fragile baby, you showed me how much you love me... If you will not remember this, don't worry, we will create another treasure of memories for ourselves... but, i will be more shy then..."


She pulled his cheeks , Kissed his forehead and got up to put her clothes , though she was hell tired and sour, As she didn't want him to see her all naked.




"Ishita... Ishitaaa..."


"Huh... yes Rinky..."


"where are you lost my girl...?? huh...Common... Have this milk... And yeah mom is on skype and she wants to talk to you..."


"Hi Maa..."


"How are you..???"


"I'm fine... ernmmm... how is Papa... and others at home...???"


"Everyone is doing good..."


"How is Raman maa??"


"He is doing good too... What happened to you... Rinky said you aren't willing to have godhbharayi (Ceremony name which is conducted while a woman is pregnant)"


"No maa... You know how the situation is... I don't wanna ruin Raman's mood Further..."


"So what about the Kid... Don't you want blessing for the kid..."


"Maa... "


"Don't do that... I'm not budging for any of your puppy faces more...First you wanted to leave the house and stay with Rinky, then, you didn't come here for once... I'm just pissed Ishita... You are our daughter too... But, all you got to think about is just Raman and you... You didn't even come here for Lohri... and That was your first lohri with your husband... "


"Mummaa... You leave this... Don't make her cry now,... Let her be... Nothing goes wrong, when your morality and humanity is intact... Leave her alone, If she wishes s..."


"Maa.. I'm really very sorry, i put you all through this... Raman will not like any of this... If you still think that this should be done for the welfare of the kid then go ahead, I am really very grateful that my in laws trust me enough to support me when their own son doesn't trust this kid as his own... "


"Shut Up... I'm your in law??? Is that what you think of me... Did you forget, I told you I am your Mother... You are our daughter... don't anger me more by saying all this or by making us a third person in your life..."


"Sorry... I didn't mean to say it that way... And you have to believe me when i say this, I don't have any to call my family other than you all... You all are the reason, I'm still pulling this out... Otherwise, i don't even know, what would i be doing..."


"Don't get emotional , doctor has prohibited you... Anyways, whatever you decide , I'm with you dear... I didn't say anything to hurt you... It's just that a mother can't see both her kids in such pain..."


"Is Raman okay maa???? why is he in pain...??? anything happened ?????"


"How you think he will be okay Ishita... That too without you... He is so use to you, He is habitual to you... He is not the same as before... "


"This is all because of me... I'm hurting all... I shouldn't have had birth..."


Ishita cried hugging Rinky... While her mother looked at her helplessly... Though spoke up determinately...


"Ishita... I'm coming to you tomorrow..."


"No maa... Raman needs you more... please don't leave him alone... please... see im good..."


Said Ishita wiping her tears away...


"No Ishita... I'm coming, In fact daduji has ordered all of us to celebrate your GodhBharayi... So we all are coming... Simmi and her family will join you shortly..."


"Okay maa... But, Is he coming...?"


"Yes ... Rinky Raman is also coming... Dadu ji's order, he won't be able to avoid him..."


"That's a good news... after seven months finally these two will meet..."


"Maa... Don't force him... please..."


"Ishita, let us handle all this... you just be at peace,,,... "


"Hmmm..."


"Btw, I forgot to say... KIds are coming, so be careful, until i come... don't play with them as you use to... don't tire yourself"


"Okay"


This time genuinely she smiled thinking about the cherries she fell in love with...


"Ishita we all will come in the noon tomorrow... Don't stress yourself with food making... I won't refuse you to cook, because i know you won't sit quietly... but, I am warning you , Don't stress... Make something that you make regularly for yourself... just fit the quantity to us all.."


"Okay maa..."


"Rinky aren't you going home...??"


"No mumma... I'm here, Doctor has advised me not to let her alone... any how your son in law is out of town..."


"Okay good then... "


"Okay mummaa... We shall sleep now... "


"Ohhh yeah... even i wanna sleep... It was a long day for me... arranging everyone's clothes and packing ... huh... Okay lovelies bye... see ya tomorrow..."


"Good night... I'm waiting for you... "


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"Ishita You also go and Sleep... I have to call up your jiju and talk... Lemme know if you want something or feeling dizzy again... i will just finish call asap and will sleep beside you..."


"Don't bother take you time,..."




Ishita went to her room... Thinking of the last time she met him... before seven months...



"Ishitaa... Ishita yaar... Is everything okay... why the hell did you faint... ??"


Everyone looked at Raman as if he is crazy...


"What... Will you all just keep staring at me or will at least tell me what happened to my wife..."


"You are the reason behind all this..." Said his mother accusing him much to his surprise making him perplexed..


"Whao... what... what did i do???"


"Raman , I didn't expect it to be this early... She is just a kid... Not fair..."


"What... what did i do... will you all keep on talking in puzzles..."


"Raman ... They all are teasing you... It's every wife's wish to tell her husband all this by herself... Give her a chance she will tell you... " Said Daduji...


"Ishita what happened to you honey... Is everything alright... Did you overwork yourself for me or cooked something which requires your tedious hard work..." Asked Raman with all the concern.


"Ishita tell him common..."


"hmmm..." She nodded...


"Tell me honey what happened.."


"Raman... It's ... like.. I'm... no ... I mean you... no... I mean we...that day ... no i mean... "


"Heyyy... To be mom... Omg... I'm flying... you made me aunt so soon... I didn't expect it to be so soon... " came a chirpy voice from the door... It was of Rinky... who got the news from her mother and took the next flight to wish her friend and brother...


"What ... what did you just say... and wait... how are you here..."


"Rinky you just let the news out.. let Ishita tell him... get in... first..."


"Omg... he doesn't know... yet .. I thought he must be flying already distributing sweets and stuffs..."


"What's happening here"


"Ishita common tell him..."


"Raman... I'm ...I mean we ... "


"Ishita common..." said Rinky with all joy... Though Ishita had double mind how he will see this, and will he remember their consummation that happened...


"Raman... You are ... we are going to be parents..."


"What... I'm not sure , i get that..."


"Raman , I am Pregnant"


"What... "


"Common Raman you are going to be a father... common have sweet..."


"Mom... wait a minute..." He shouted at top of his voice...


"What wrong with you Raman..."


"Ask This lady... what's wrong with her... Ishita how can you be pregnant... you are kidding right??"


Ishita had tears by then... She understood he doesn't remember anything that had happened that day... She couldn't think what he will think of her right now... when a question came from his voice that changed her life upside down...


"If you are joking that's really not looking like one... and If you are pregnant... I want to know... when did we have any of such relation... I am waiting for you , for nearly like three months or so... and here, you are claiming to be pregnant with my child... Ishita out with it... I'm not in my right frame of mind to think... My mind isn't working... just tell them all... that we are not pregnant..." Looking at her face, he couldn't help but ask that one question he never wanted to ask... " Is that your Ex-boyfriend's ??? Is that that Subbu's ?? You recently met him didn't you ???... Will you ever speak up.. I'm going mad here... Are you kidding..???? ... "


He just blabbered all that came to his mind, without even thinking or devising what he was talking about..



"Raman.." There came a very fragile voice.. which he dreads he hear... She was all scared...


"Raman... That's your child... "


"Okay... when did i touch you... "


"Raman..." She said helplessly... Not able to say anything more... Rinky came to her support ... Raman stomped off his feet , for the first time leaving behind his crying Ishita... not able to or rather not wanting to console her back...




"Ishita.. what's all this..."


Ishita started shaking thinking the worst by then... Rinky was advised by all to take care of her... when she spoke up...



"Rinky can you do me a favour??"


Everyone turned to her astonished...


"What happened Ishu...??? what you want me to do... Is everything okay... you both are scaring me,,,,,"


"Rinky can you take me with you to Mumbai... I swear , I won't disturb you... will you please...??"


"Of course you can come with me anytime... but what's all this... what's happening..."


"Please just take me... i don't have it in me.. to see Raman's eyes which may have hatred for me... "


"Why will he hate you Ishu??? are you mad... You are his Lifeline...Don't you know ... how much he loves you..."


To be Continued...😊


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Edited by shravsss - 9 years ago
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When you told me you are coming up with something new i knew it that you would once again slay it!
The concept and the plot the way you have woven it is so wonderful.
The relation between is Rinki and Ishita is adorable. A sister-in-law who supported and trusted her when she felt no one was there for her is something which every girl wants. A person who would trust her unconditionally.

Rinki and Ishita's first meet is so adorable. Aweee

PS: I know the whole plot is which is not shown here or can be dug up by anyone except those who know what I'm talking about. But then whenever i relive the happiness i feel more elated and excited even though its been months together.

Okay now ill come back to Raman and Ishita's relationship.

PS: First itself ill tell you I'm sorry i couldn't imagine Divyanka and Karan in place of Raman and Ishita here as i imagine in every story. I could imagine non of the actors of YHM in their names. I think you know what I'm talking about. The faces i imagined is apt for the story. I really really wish the relationship that is portrayed in this story becomes true.

Okay back to the story-

Ishita was right in her place to give him space to think. She chose her self-respect and i think every girl should do that because someone doubting her dignity is something really cheap. Though Raman did not doubt her as we got to know in the end he should have been aware of what he was throwing at her. Bringing Subbu into the picture was his biggest mistake.

That doesn't mean that Ishita was right. She feared he would be guilty and that is something everyone in love would thing emotionally but making that as a reason for their relationship breaking is a very stupid thing. If she would have told in the start itself that it was his kid and the circumstances that led to their consummation then all that 7 months drama could have been avoided because in the end he had let her go in the start because of his guilt. Their 7 months separation would have been avoided.

The family's support came as a huge relief to them. Though they remained a silent spectator which was a bad thing they gave the much needed support Ishita.

Can i request one thing can you please pen down Raman's POV as well because he was also in an emotional rollercoaster which we haven't witnessed. I would love to know his POV.

All in all a very beautiful update. Leaving the separation part i want such thing to happen in real life Im not Joking!!!!!

Okay now thats a long post of mine! okay bye!

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Part 3

A Small Little Thing Called Life

-Shravs😳




After lots of pleads, her in laws let her go with her Sister in law. She had kept on crying all through the journey... As Rinky was a celebrity... She couldn't even console her properly, Random people just popped here and there from no where, to talk to he, regard her for her performance or to take selfies with her...


In the meanwhile, Ishita determinately thought of making him understand... once she gets to her Rinky's house.


"Rinky jiju won't mind this right??"


Asked Ishita suddenly, as both of them got into the car...


"Are you mad... Why will he... He is actually waiting for his sister..."


"Okay.."


"Ishita ... you wanna tell me what happened... ???? if not that's okay... i understand... some things are beyond that line and cannot be shared "


"Are you crazy... Right now, You are the only person, I suppose will believe me..."


"Oh.. common... our family knows better than not believing a person like ou... tell me what happened... why is Raman reacting that way... I'm still kinda find this bizarre as in how he thought this is not his baby... or what was that... you both didn't really i mean... you both were the most romantic couple... i mean... are you guys kinda playing... i'm still not ... i mean i'm confused..."


"His anger is true... and He doesn't actually know, that it happened between us..."


"Right now you are kidding... "


"Okay Rinky... He was drunk... and he forced me... actually... it was nothing like forceful and all... just that, It just happened out of nowhere... I knew he was waiting for me... my acceptance to take that step in our marriage... i actually get his action.. afterall he is a man... i'm his wife... whom he loves and he knows i can die for him... obviously... it wasn't wrong... I mean... it's just that... He doesn't remember those moments that are treasurous... I don't actually know... what to do..."


"Are you saying he doesn't know... but why didn't you tell him...??? "


"I thought he would know... but then, a day he just came all annoyed and told me that one of his friend who is girl was harassed by her drunk husband and stuff... I didn't want him to get guity and stuff... I didn't say any of it then... I didn't know this will blow up this much... but I'm hurt that he could think of me like that... like really did he say that... or is my ears buzzing... did he say wa it subbu's... like seriously... ??? he can think of me like that... "


"I'm speechless... i seriously don't know what to do... and Btw, he said out of anger... all of us know about you better than to think something like that.. Talk to him about this... I'm sure he will understand..."


"I don't know... But, I'm determined to make him understand...Even, If it is to show him a DNA result... I will ... "


"You just tell him... You know him better than believing a DNA test will be the only solution.. don't you???"


"Yeah right...Sorry..."


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"Ishita..."


"Ohhh Simmi di... omg... how are you... ???"


"You don't look good though..."


"Simmi di , I'm better after seeing you ... like seriously.. can i get a hug... where are my cherries..."


"Mamiii..." came the voice of the kids...


"My cherries... wooohooo... "


Hugged those cute little pies , who can make her smile even in worst of her moods.


"Jiju... Namaste... How are you???"


"Ohhh... hoo... here I thought, my sister forgot me... Doesn't have enough time to hug me... "


"ahhh... "


With that the Gloominess in her mind just washed away...


While cooking the next day for her family... She was in best of her moods as she missed cooking for him... She missed seeing him... She missed his comments... those small little pick up fights...All those memories just made her yearn more for him...



"Ishu... Did you ever try to tell him your part of story...??"


"No , I text him everyday, He never replied , Never picked my call... Most of my time use to go calling or texting him initially... Then, a day finally , he blocked me... Maa told me not to lose my self respect... and I told maa... not to tell him anything, when he has made up his mind with the worst, Explanations are meant to be given wherein a decision or a conclusion isn't made... "

"Then, What have you decided... To live here, all your life..."


"I know I can't burden Rinky and Jiju more than i have already... I will try one last time Simmi di... All I have in my hand is to prove him that this is his child... But, I don't know how to do the damage control... Our relationship has gone down the drain... I didn't lose respect for him, or something, but, This will never change the fact that this happened... we all say, our past shouldn't affect our present, but, the fact is, Present always is impacted by our past... "


"Can I ask you something... and please don't get me wrong by my question... please"


"Go ahead"


"Why did you meet Subbu, without telling Raman???"


Ishita with a light smile, wiped away that one tear drop that threatened her to fall of her eye..


"Ishita.. I didn't..."


"No Simmi di... I will clarify... It's your right to question... I met him because his wife was not keeping well... and I know he was broken... I have always been his emotional support, I know he is/was my Ex but does that change the fact that I am a human, I just out of courtesy, gave him a shoulder to cry... You may see this as my love towards him, but , it's nothing like that di... there were days in my life when he had impact... But now, he is just another fellow human, i forward my helping hand to... He is just a known stranger di... I really don't know how to make you believe that i don't actually have any relationship... I just helped ... helped him with career... finding him a job to support his wife's disease... "


Ishita wasn't having it in her anymore to explain, She somehow had the only support she thought she had was her family, she won't be able to take it, if that fell apart... Tears rolled from her eyes... and Simmi di hugged her tight mumbling sorry...


This was the scene when Rinky entered the kitchen


"Ishita... Ishu...what happened..."


"Sorry Chinky ... I just made her cry... "


"What... Di... You seriously... ???? "


"No no... I am alright... she just was reminding me the same thing you did last night about the first meeting, marriage and stuffs... Just that i miss him... i mean... you know right... nothing else..."


Simmi was baffled by her reply...


"I thought something else... anyways... common.. it time for your milk... and all the kids are going to have milk.."


"Do i look like a kid... hawww..."

"Mami... This is the kid we are talking about..." Said one of the cherries placing the hand on her baby bump...


"Ohhh hooo... Okay let's compete..."


"I never saw you agreeing to drinking this glass of milk so fast... I think simmi di must leave them here until the kid is inside you..." said Rinky teasing Ishita a little bit...


"Huh..."



The much awaited moment of her life came... She welcomed all her family, with brightest of her smile... when her eyes searched only for her Raman... She saw the door twice after all had entered... She welcomed all of them... But, He never came inside... Her face fell... She thought to herself may be he didn't come... That's when daduji asked


"Where is Raman..."


Ishita's face blossomed like a sunflower...


"Yes... I'm here " Came her man's voice... causing her to close the eyes, feel his voice, which lacked the actual chirpiness and it had a bit of lifelessness...


"Ishita... Ishitaa... Ishitaa..."


"Ishita open your eyes... "


Ishita opened her eyes blankly... Saw everyone staring at her... the one person she wanted to see was nowhere to be seen when, she sensed the touch of her man. She was held in his arms...Her head was in his lap... That's when she heard his concerned voice which showed all the love he had for her...


"Ishu..."


"Raman..."


"Are you okay..."


"Hmmm..."


She tried to get up... when he held her firmer... Held her tight as if to console himself that she was there for sure... There came his voice, Which he didn't even know, he was about to say... but his heart said...


"I missed you Ishu... why did you do all that... "


"Raman ... Do you really think your Ishu is unfaithful... ??? "


"No.. My Ishu is/was never unfaithful..."


"Don't you believe this is your baby...???"


"I don't know..."


"Raman... You are the father... I swear..."


"It's not about that, It was never about that you fool... "


Ishita looked at him perplexed...


"Did I really force you Ishu... was I an animal that day... I really don't remember anything... I am so ashamed of myself... How do you think, I will tell my child, his father is an animal... a drunkard... a bad husband... I... I...am S... "


Ishita captured his lips the very second he started to say the word Sorry... He hugged her tight not letting go off her... As what felt like eternity, they broke apart...


"Raman... You hurt me... All this days, I thought my Raman doesn't know me enough to think straight... You said Subbu's child... Raman... How could you... Don't you know, you are my life... you are the only one, whom i will nevermind hurting me... because, even if you hurt me, The wound's remedy will also be you... I thought you knew this much about your Ishu... Don't you know, It's was hard for me to live without you all these days... I was lifeless... "


"Sshhh... Please... Don't make me more guilty than i am..."


"Why are you even guilty... you fool... I was happy even in your drunkard state you could only think of me... you could only think cuddling in my arms... are you fool... It just happened... do you think , i couldn't have stopped you that day... You fool... You are in all this universe the only person i can accept anything for... And stop calling yourself animal... Even when you weren't in your senses, you were careful enough... Don't ever think what we shared that day was something to be guilty off... I treasure those moments...They won't come back to me ever...You are/were the first and last ever man in my life Raman... I can never share something like that with any other ..."


"Chipka diya na... itna bada bhashan... " (Huh... Already started with your Lectures for the poor me...) [Though, There is no equivalent statement to this line in english... Apology]


"Huh.. btw, how the hell , did you cut my call, block my number... you better have a good explanation than that stupid guilt of yours... or else you will have to face a longer lecture... and this time i won't stop..."


"I know better way to stop you Madrasan..."


"Ahem ahem... " The family which surrounded them, finally made their presence acknowledged by the couple, Who lay cuddled to each other, in the hall.


Ishita hid herself not able to tolerate the embarrassment, while Raman had a wicked smile on his face carrying her to one of the nearest room shutting the door, to do the only job, he wanted to do, right from the time he realised he is a father... i.e He wanted to feel his baby as the baby's mumma does everyday...



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The End...

Hope you like this TS...
Lemme know how you find it... I will be awaiting your comments..
Thanks for reading...
Edited by shravsss - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Completed the story...
Do read and Let me know...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story!
Perfect end.
I loved it.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was a nice TS Shravs..
Both have different perspective of that matter..
U portrayed her emotions beautifully..
Keep up the good work..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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excellent TS
amazingly written 👏👏
really loved it so much...
do write more like this dear 😊
thank u for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely story...
Perfect end...
Rinky was too good...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb story
y ended so soon
want to read more

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