Originally posted by: sush_rddt
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When you told me you are coming up with something new i knew it that you would once again slay it!
The concept and the plot the way you have woven it is so wonderful.
The relation between is Rinki and Ishita is adorable. A sister-in-law who supported and trusted her when she felt no one was there for her is something which every girl wants. A person who would trust her unconditionally.
Rinki and Ishita's first meet is so adorable. Aweee
PS: I know the whole plot is which is not shown here or can be dug up by anyone except those who know what I'm talking about. But then whenever i relive the happiness i feel more elated and excited even though its been months together.
Okay now ill come back to Raman and Ishita's relationship.
PS: First itself ill tell you I'm sorry i couldn't imagine Divyanka and Karan in place of Raman and Ishita here as i imagine in every story. I could imagine non of the actors of YHM in their names. I think you know what I'm talking about. The faces i imagined is apt for the story. I really really wish the relationship that is portrayed in this story becomes true.
Okay back to the story-
Ishita was right in her place to give him space to think. She chose her self-respect and i think every girl should do that because someone doubting her dignity is something really cheap. Though Raman did not doubt her as we got to know in the end he should have been aware of what he was throwing at her. Bringing Subbu into the picture was his biggest mistake.
That doesn't mean that Ishita was right. She feared he would be guilty and that is something everyone in love would thing emotionally but making that as a reason for their relationship breaking is a very stupid thing. If she would have told in the start itself that it was his kid and the circumstances that led to their consummation then all that 7 months drama could have been avoided because in the end he had let her go in the start because of his guilt. Their 7 months separation would have been avoided.
The family's support came as a huge relief to them. Though they remained a silent spectator which was a bad thing they gave the much needed support Ishita.
Can i request one thing can you please pen down Raman's POV as well because he was also in an emotional rollercoaster which we haven't witnessed. I would love to know his POV.
All in all a very beautiful update. Leaving the separation part i want such thing to happen in real life Im not Joking!!!!!
Okay now thats a long post of mine! okay bye!
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