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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

I had already read two parts of this one but still i will wait for next 😉

Update soon sushi 😉

hehe i know that baby!!!
will write more soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ishra123

wowww
awesome Start
Eagerly waiting for next update

thank you so much!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Part 2


"Didi yeh parcel ishita ko dena tha" but since the music was loud and people were talking loudly she couldn't hear properly and ends up hearing Rinki's name as someone was calling her.

"Theek hai mein dedungi" she takes the parcel and goes and gives it to Rinki..

"Yeh kisne diya hai?" Rinki questions as she receives the parcel.

"Pata nahi didi ek ladke ne aake yeh diya" Priya answered and disappeared to enjoy.

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Rinki was confused and hence opens the letter attatched to it..

Hey sweetheart,

Mujhse aur door nahi raha jaa raha... aaj raat mein tumhare liye kuch khaas arrange kiya hai.. I know ki u r busy but please mere liye aajao darling!! And ya I have sned something special for you... do have a look at it and please don't refuse... I will be waiting for you in The Orchids hotel at 7 ... I have booked a suite in Mr & Mrs Sharma's name... do come and the reason for the name is privacy... don't let anyone know about this plan incase someone asks make some reason... but please do come sweetheart...

Your love

Xoxo

She puts the letter back in the envelope.

Rinki was confused. Who would send this to me, Mihir??? Awee yesterday I was dying to spend time with him. Is this plan because of that?? Omg so cute mihir I will be there... But before she could open the gift packet someone calls her. So she calls Mihika (who is now in love with Abhishek)

Mihika: Kya hua rinki??

Rinki: Mihika yeh le.. mein aati hun..

Mihika: yeh kya hai?

Rinki: who yeh... but someone calls her again and says her to hurry up.. hence she tells in hurry.. there liye and goes away...

Mihika(st) Mere liye? Isse??

She opens the letter which was on top and reads the same written in the letter and blushes.

Yeh shayad Abhishek ne bejha hoga he wanted to spend time with me but because of the wedding I couldn't go to the date with him yesterday. So sad fine I will surely go today!!!

She sees ananya who came out of the room and was on the edge of the stairs so she runs to her leaving the gift packet on the table...

On the other hand Ishita had done booking the hotel in the name of Mr & Mrs sharma to enjoy the privacy. She wanted to message Raman but she couldn't find her mobile but later remembered that ruhi and shravu had taken her mobile. So she borrowed Vandu's phone and opened his contact list. There wer three no.s saved in the name of Raman..

Ishita(st) Ab ravan kumar ka kounsa hai isme. Mein bhi na kitni baar kehti hun ki don't change ur no. so many times doesn't listen to me only. Now I don't even remember his no. aiyoo.. okay wait I think this is no.

She said scrolling to the last no. saved as Ishu's Love

Why has she saved it has Ishu's love.. aiyoo akka bhi na chalo koi baat nahi let me message him.

Love,

Tumhare intezaar mein doobi doobi sa rehti hun... meet me in Orchid hotel at 7... The suite is booked in the name of Mr & Mrs Sharma. Will be eagerly waiting for you.

Yours

Madrasan

After hitting the send button she goes into her room to pack her things for making their night special.

Bala on the other side sees the beep of his phone

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will be continued


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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Haha
Hilarious
Liked this confusion
Missing this in show

continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
mummy...
yeh kya tha sush? tu toh badi smart ladki hai
mast concept socha hai with wonderful confusion
accha ab jaldi update Karna. I can wait more
thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Sorry for being so late
Hahaha nice one sush
Like the confusion
Omg all r coming in the same place
Quite hilarious and interesting
Update soon
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Can't wait for next update & plz remove this confusion soon & very cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
part 2 awesome n confusion wow love it

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