TS || Passing the parcel|| Part 2 page 3 19/10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys! Okay i am back with this thread because I had written a story for the topic os-thon but couldn't complete there.. so thought to post it in a separate thread and continue it here!!! ill post the 1st part i had written and will post the second part some time soon.. because now I'm off to sleep..😆
hope you enjoy! not proof read please ignore the mistakes
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Part 1

Raman never thought it would be so difficult to spend time with his madrasan. He had the feeling that after his American trip he would be able to devote his full time to Ishita. But everything he planned just failed in the end...

The only thing he felt now was immense anger at his madrasan for allowing his cousins in their room, for spoiling his plans to send them out of the room by spraying the pesticide in the room..

Grrr... Yeh madrasan bhi na!!!! Kyun bhagvaan... mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai??

He placed his head between his palms cursing his fate... but this was not the time to be sad or curse his fate... he need to do something... he is RKB he wont accept defeat so soon... he need to make sure he spends time with madrasan alone...

That's the time he came with an idea...

After few hours, in Bhalla's house

The house was extremely crowed with relatives of raman. As soon as he entered he truly felt like there was a marriage going to happen in the house. The noise, the songs being played, peoples happiness this was what felt...

However he chided himself and searched for his madrasan the one who has made him crazy... crazy with love..

Hai madrasan kaha reh gayi tu?? He mumbled scanning for her through the crowd. When he dint find her he decided to go to his room.

Ishita's Story

She knew all that Raman was doing to spend time with her. After their confession she saw all new desperate Raman who wanted to spend time with her, make her his. But looks like the fate had different plan altogether. It was a marriage house and getting a free time together became a difficult thing.

When the pesticide incident happen she had no idea raman could have done that just to send them out of the room to spend time with her. It made her sad for spoiling his plan but she knew she couldn't accept with him in this after all it was THE MARRIAGE HOUSE...

Raman after the fight with her last night hd not spoken to her nor had seen her. It made her heart ache. She wanted to see him she couldn't stay without seeing or speaking to him even for few hours. She was addicted to him like a drug. Her life depended on him.

Now standing in the hall surrounded by people she tried to find raman to see if he came. When she dint see him she was disappointed. However, she knew the only way she can soothe her heart is by doing what raman has been wanting to do spend time with her. Hence, she came up with a plan to do something for her Raavan Kumar.

When Raman dint see her in the hall he tried searching for her but again failed.

"Ab main kya karun. Jo uske liye laaya tha use kaise dun.. khash jaldi de pata aur who meri ishara samaj paayegi!!! Pehle se hi saara plans flop karne mein lagi huyi hai.. pagal aurat!!! " he muttered to himself...

On the other hand ishita was busy booking a suite for them for a night in his favourite hotel The orchids'

" Han... aap ek din keliye book Karen.. haan pura white and red flowers... nahi scented candles rakhiyega.. koi baat nahi.. haan haan jaroor ... jee red wine ya.. ya ... okay okay thank you"

Han.. ab dekhte hai Raavan kumar hume kaun alag rakh sakta hai" she grined talking to herself...

Suddenly her expression changes "Lekin mein aapko bataungi kaise? Call karungi to kud kud karenge.. chal ishu jaldi soch"

Raman decides to send the gift which he had brought through third person. He attaches a note to the gift and goes out. He sees a boy playing downstairs.

He calls out to him.

"Acha sun mere liye ek kaam karna.. yeh packet lekhe mere ghar jaa aur ishita aunty ko bulake yeh dena.. agar usne pucha ki kisne diya hai toh bolna uske admirer ne diya hai. Theek hai" he aid patting his shoulders.

The guy takes the parcel and goes to their house.

He calls out for Ishita but Raman's cousin Priya comes to the door.

"Didi yeh parcel ishita ko dena tha" but since the music was loud and people were talking loudly she couldn't hear properly and ends up hearing Rinki's name as someone was calling her.

"Theek hai mein dedungi" she takes the parcel and goes and gives it to Rinki..

"Yeh kisne diya hai?" Rinki questions as she receives the parcel.

"Pata nahi didi ek ladke ne aake yeh diya" Priya answered and disappeared to enjoy.

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will be continued



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeyeyeye my first comment
Amzing start baby...
And as i read further PRIYA🤣🤣
Continue soon
Waiting to read wat confussion is gonna b created nw
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweeetz

Yeyeyeye my first comment

Amzing start baby...
And as i read further PRIYA🤣🤣
Continue soon
Waiting to read wat confussion is gonna b created nw

hahhahha yes its you baby its you hahahahah
well congo shone bet ke post pe pehla comment I'm impressed..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start sush.do continue soon will be waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I had already read two parts of this one but still i will wait for next 😉
Update soon sushi 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wowww
awesome Start
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Awesome...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divanru

Nice start sush.do continue soon will be waiting for next update.

thank you pooja di!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

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added!
thank you so much!
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