Ishra ts-ruk jaana nahi tu kahin haar ke last pt on pg 7 added on Nov6 - Page 3

I won't be surprised if Shagun too turns out to be like your Shagun in the show. Thank God she is dying but I'm sure ki Shagun won't be gone for ever as she is makers ki fav.

OMG wow that was amazing and extremely well written!!!!!!!

amazing os dear

well written dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

for ishita

-i feel the pain ishita going through by your way of written dear
-love adi and ruhi supports her
- love the talk between shagun and ishita more i love was ishita answer for shagun question while i read how much she has trust on raman love that he is love her only ever and forever happy to read it dear

sorry to say dear don't mistake me dear

what i hate most is

for raman

- really really feel bad for raman the way everyone behave with him i cant tolerate anymore dear 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

- there is no love for raman by their children
- between parents involving childrens is not accepted
- really hate adi and ruhi due to partiality over raman for ishita
- i accept that raman did mistake he have to pay for that mistake but for him punishment is too much dear
- who give rights to ishita to take adi and ruhi i am happy that she doesn't want his property ok but what about children now they are angry on him ok for them they don't want father anymore only mother
- till day his love for their childrens is fake like that they behave dear

- whom they blamed him for always hurt ishita till day he doesn't give any happiness to ishita if it is yes then childrens she say that only happiness for her life she thinks (adi and ruhi) this happiness also given by raman only with out raman how can she get dear

- every words used by his childrens to him was hell dear (no one can digest the words they used dear)

- whether his love for ishita is fake dear

i am really very sorry dear by giving negative comments to your wonderful update dear

i loved the way you plot the story

shagun betray him was nice dear i just want her to move away from raman life

i really love after they make him out in his home in their life by using harsh words he doesn't think about anything went to home for see his family was amazing dear

try to meet ishita in hospital was lovely dear

somewhat i accept that her anger is justified but way she used is not accepted dear

if it is happy ending i will be happy dear

by making that they hurt him directly after that if they miss him and worry for him and unable to see him in pain means somewhat accepted (but all are behaving that till day his love for them is fake that is not accepted)


i know that dear i am not capable to suggest you can make like this and all

what i said here is as a reader what i felt dear

so please don't mistake me dear

thanks for pm me dear

awesome os di..ishita was right raman deverse all this..shagun will never change disgusting lady..but am happy shagun cheat raman...raman is making me hate him more and more..i like the end...some end should be like this because there was no come back

It's must for me to have happy ending but still I loved ur work. Beautifully written.

its amazing...

Superb OS

Great OS...

Nice os raksha 😃