Ishra ts-ruk jaana nahi tu kahin haar ke last pt on pg 7 added on Nov6

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Hi guys I am back with a new os.yes it is based on the current track.I have written an os on this track,dagaa nahi karenge sanam.everybody loved it.so back with another one.

Its started with the revelation of surrogacy. Everyone gets to know that shagun is the surrogate mother for ishra baby.everyone was hell shocked with this revelation but the nlmost shattered soul was ishita.her trust on her love was broken into zillion pieces.she couldn't take it anymore.she ran to her room and cried her heart out.she was on floor crying bitterly for her broken trust and heart.

Ishita-why u did this to me Raman. U never thought how I will feel after knowing this truth.subbu only told me infertile but u make me feel this emptiness inside me.u make me feel an unwanted thing.I will never forgive u Raman.I just don't wanna live anymore, I don't have a reason to live.she was thinking all kind of bad things when she heard a knock on her door.

Ishita- Raman get lost .I don't wanna see ur face.

Its us ishimaa,said adiru.they were crying for their ishimaa.

Please open the door ishimaa,please.

She couldn't deny their plead.she walked towards the door and her children hug her tightly with all their might.she felt relieved in taking them in her embrace.

U r safe naa ishimaa, we were so scared. Said adi.

Ishita look at them.they r not her kids but love her like any other kids in the world.she look lovingly at them.

Ruhi make her sit on her knees and said-u know naa ishimaa,me and adi bhaiya loves u more then anybody in the whole world.we know papa did bad to u.he cheated u but we r always there for u ishimaa.

Adi-yes ishimaa if papa give u tears ,we r here with u to wipe it off ur face and bring a smile on ur face.we r always with u.we three r a team ishimaa.papa cheated us ,he is no more on our side.let him be on shagun mumma side.we will be there for u.

Ishita was overwhelmed hearing their words.she hugged them tight and thanked the almighty to send these angels in her life.she wipe her tears and thought, if Raman didn't bother about me then why I will cry for him.no I will not cry for him but will smile for my children.

Adi-ishimaa papa wanted to meet u but we have said that he is not allowed to u.I am ur bodyguard naa.he said showing his body.

Ishita smiled at his cute gesture.


Ishita-send him in .

Ruhi-no ishimaa u will not meet him.he made u cry.

Adi-yes ishimaa ,he will hurt u again.

Ishita- then u too can again heal me.

Adiru go outside only to send Raman inside ,who was waiting to meet ishita.shagun was sitting on the sofa silently seeing the whole drama.

Raman goes inside and try to came near her.she was standing near the window.

Ishita-dont try to come near me.say what u want to say from there only.

Raman-i know u must be feeling cheated but trust me,I have done this for u only.I want to give u the happiness of being a mother.

Ishita-for ur kind information I am already a mother.I don't wanna talk about my motherhood, proceed.

Raman-ishita please try to understand, having ur own child ,of ur own blood is completely a different feeling.I know u treat adiru as ur children but I wanna give u a child of ours,that's why I did this.

Ishita came to him and slapped him.

Ishita-adiru r my children and I don't want anyone,listen carefully anyone saying anything about them.they belongs to me only.I know they r urs and shagun's kid but I am their mother and I don't want any other child for me.u got that. U have cheated me and I am not going to forgive u ever.

Raman tries to close the distance but she back out saying-stay away from me.

Raman-i love u ishita,I have done this for u.why don't u understand.

Ishita-i totally understand that u loves me a lot.so can I expect something from u.

Raman-tell me,I will do anything for ur happiness.

Ishita-swear to me that u will do whatever I say.

Raman- I swear to u ishita,I will do anything for ur happiness.

Ishita- then get out of this house.I don't wanna see ur face.just take ur pregnant shagun with u and get out of my house,my life.

Raman was shocked beyond words.

He fumbled-what r u telling,how can I do this.

Ishita-why not if u can bear shagun for my happiness then why can't u get out of my life for my happiness. U can leave with ur pregnant shagun wherever u want but not in my house infront of my eyes.

Raman-but she is pregnant with our child.

Ishita-no she is pregnant with ur child.I have my children with me.I don't want anyone else.if u really want my happiness them just get lost.

Raman-but I love u alot ishita,I can't live without u.

Ishita-if I can live without u for my kids,u can also live without me for ur kid which is going to born.I have no feelings for that child.

Raman-but ishi

Ishita-leave Raman.leave my house write now.

Raman goes outside the room taking heavy steps.ishita goes outside and stand in a corner.

Ishita-i told Raman to leave this house as I can't leave with him anymore.anybody who don't agree with me can voice their feelings.

Shagun-now can u send Raman out of his own house.

Toshi ji-u r not suppose to interfere in our personal matter.if u r just surrogate mother,behave like one.u have given ur womb for money so its better to remain silent.

Everyone go to ishita's side and said-we agree to ur decision.

Raman was standing alone.he started walking when adiru called him,papa.

Raman smiled and turned,adiru goes to him and said- take ur baggage along with u.and signalled towards shagun.after this they go and stand beside ishita holding her hand.

Raman goes from there taking shagun along.he took her to a flat nearby.

It's been a week since Raman left the house, things r settling in bhalla house but for Raman his everything is lost.his love,his children, his family.all he has is the baby in shagun's womb.so its become mandatory for him to take care of her.but nobody was there to take care of him.his food,his clothes his everything. He was all alone.sometimes he goes to bhalla house but nobody talk to him but just ignore him.


He goes to ishita's clinic to talk to her.the receptionist told him that she is busy.

Raman-told her that I have come to meet her.

Receptionist-sir her answer is same.u can wait if u want.

Raman sat down there, he want answers from her.after half an hour he barged into her room to see she is sitting silently .

Raman-why u r doing this.

Ishita-because I don't want to talk to u.

Raman-but u have to answer me.why u r doing this to me.I have done this for u then why u r punishing me.

Ishita laughed and said-u still think u have done this for my happiness.no Raman u did this to make u feel happy.so that ur guilt that u couldn't save our baby lessen.u didn't do this for me.so stop lying to me and to urself also.u r still not feeling guilty for what u have done.she came to him and give him an envelope.

Raman started opening it but she stopped him and said- the day u realise ur mistake.open this that day.saying so she goes from there leaving him alone.

Raman goes to his office.his whole day spent in his office thinking about the envelope. He wants to open it but then he thought when I am not guilty then why should I open it.he fold it and keep it in his wallet.

He goes to the flat,yes its a flat where two strangers live together for a baby.shagun was waiting all dressed.

Raman-u r going somewhere.

Shagun-yes,I wanna eat ice cream.take me.

Raman wanna deny but thought its a good ways to keep himself busy and distracted.

Sharam goes to a ice cream parlour only to see ishita with adiru.they were having an ice cream competition, Ishita was smiling looking at her kids.Raman also wanna be a part of this competition. He goes to them and asked-can I join.

Adiru look at him and said to Ishita- ishimaa let's go from here.

Ishita-but the competition is in mid.u can't leave ur work in mid for anyone.

Raman was disappointed by her words.

Ruhi-yes adi bhaiya ishimaa is correct. Raman goes to shagun.

Shagun saw all this and smirked ,soon Raman will be all mine.

Raman ordered ice cream for shagun.adiru goes to ishu's car and she went to pay the bill.Raman goes behind adiru.

Raman-adi listen to me.

Adi-we don't wanna talk to u.

Raman-but why beta.

Adi-because we r not enough for u.u wanted a new baby .u were obsessed so much for a new baby that u don't bother to hurt us.ishimaa never wanted any child other then us.even on day of her miscarriage she was worried for us but her own baby.still u did this.u r noone to us.we love our ishimaa only.come ruhi.saying so they goes from there.

Raman was shattered listening to Adi's words.yes its true ,he wanted that baby.ishita was satisfied in her life.

He sat on the bench nearby.

In the parlour,shagun comes to ishita.

Shagun-u must be feeling very bad naa.Raman is with me not u.actually u shouldn't feel bad.Raman was mine forever.I ditched him and when I came back he comes to me again.he always loved my only.u where just a replacement. She laughed.

Ishita -no I am not at all sad.because I know he is mine only.actually not only him,his everything belongs to me.his children r my children,his family is mine,his body ,heart and soul belongs to me only,not only this,the child in ur womb is also mine.I told him to leave me that's why he is with u.it doesn't mean that he loves u.and one thing more that may be u don't know ,his business also belongs to me.I am the proprietor of his company ,legally, on paper.saying so Ishita was going but she returned and said- one more thing.if he is not loyal to me,whom he loves so much then how u can think he will be loyal to u ,after all u r just a need for him.he needed u for his child.Raman don't love u shagun.he loves only me.saying so she walked away leaving a shocked shagun behind.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shagun was shocked to know that Raman don't have anything on his name.bhalla house was on Mr bhalla's name,the house where they live in on rent. There also they live like strangers.she tried many times but Raman was always worried about the child only.and now she came to know that his whole company was on ishita's name. She goes to Raman angrily and said- Raman I wanna talk to u.
Raman was sitting on the bench,he look at her and gesture her to say.

Shagun-u didn't tell me that ur property is on ishita's name.

Raman-why should I tell u.ishita is my wife and she has all the riflghts on my property so I transferred it on her name.why should I tell u.

Shagun-if she is ur wife and owner of ur property then who I am.

Raman look at her angrily and roared-u r just surrogate mother of our child.my and ishita's child.nothing more then that.I have done everything for u just because I wanted this baby for ishita but that doesn't mean that I have given u place of ishita in my life and heart.even if she is angry with me,I am hers only.no one can take her place.u got that.

Shagun-oh u r just using me for ur benefit.

Raman-u urself got ready for it.but now I understood I have done a great blunder.this child was not at all needed and so r u.

Shagun-i also don't wanna live with a beggar like u.u r the same old Raman bhalla whom I ditched seven years ago.I am going from here.and for ur kind information I am not pregnant.I was just faking it because we wanted ur money to get ourself settled in abroad.we just want ur signature on the properties paper.


Raman-we?

Shagun-yes me and manoj.we r a team.he is a flop doctor.can't do anything but I fell in love with him.and he portrayed himself as a infertility expert and u trapped in our plan but since u don't have anything for us.so good bye Raman.

Saying so shagun was gone from there leaving a shocked Raman behind.he was shattered and wanna cry his heart out. He ran towards his home where his loving one lives but to his disappointment only neelu was there.

Raman-where is ishita.

Neelu-she has gone to airport,everyone r with her only.

Raman-but why they go to airport.

Neelu-dont u know bhaiya,bhabhi is going to abroad taking adiru along with her forever.everyone gone with them to bid adieu.

Raman's heart skipped a beat.he never ever realised his stupidity can lead to this.he ran towards the airport praying to matarani that their flight didn't take off before he reach there.

He goes to the airport only to see they are going inside the airport.he shouted ,ishita.

Ishita stopped in her way.all turned back.

He ran to her ,he was taking deep breath.

Raman-please don't go ishita.I am so sorry.it was my fault.I cheated u but please forgive me.

Adi-ishimaa let's go ,we r getting late.

Toshi ji-dont listen to him beta.he will never change.

Mihir-go bhabhi ,he will always hurt u.

Raman was crying ,he said-no ishita its the last time.please listen to me once.

Ishita- papa Ji u take everyone inside.I will talk to him.

Adiru-we r not going anywhere ishimaa. We don't trust him anymore.

Raman was shattered to see hatred in his children's eyes.but he is responsible for it.

Raman-i know I hurt u but please forgive me a last time.u love me naa.

Ishita-yes I love u and I forgive u also.

Raman hugged her tight crying but she didn't hug him back.Raman broke the hug and look into her eyes.it was as cold as ice.

Raman-what happened u forgive me naa so come home.

Ishita-no Raman u didn't understand yet yes I love u ,so I can forgive u but can't trust u anymore.u have broken my trust ,shattered my soul.a single sorry can't make everything back to normal.u have a happy family but now u r not a family for us.me and my children are my family.I am going taking my children.u can live with ur kid.

Raman-but shagun is not pregnant. She betrayed me.he narrated the whole incident.

Ishita- wow Raman u didn't changed a bit.u r here only because shagun cheated u.she cheated u so u came here to cheat us again.

Raman-no its not like that.I love u all.please don't go leaving me alone.

Ishita-it was ur choice only.

Raman-u r going breaking our marriage.

Ishita-our marriage was broken long back Raman.but today I am breaking all relationship with u.I am going Raman leaving ur house,ur city and ur country.I am taking my kids with me.

Raman-please don't go .I will die without u .he was pleading her but she looked away.

Ishita-i don't know about tomorrow but today I can't give u anything other then forgiving u.

She turned her back towards Raman.a lone tear escape her eyes but adi wipe it and said- he is not worthy of it ishimaa.let's go.

Raman saw them going.he remember something and goes to his car to take out that envelope. He opened it and saw his property papers,which she had signed and a handwritten paper along with it.he started reading it.

Ek roz hum juda ho jayenge
Naa jaane kahan kho jayenge
Tum lakh Hume pukaroge
Par laut ke hum naa ayenge
Thak haar ke din ke kaamon se
Jab raat ko sone jaaoge
Dekhoge jab tum phone ko
Paigaam mera naa paoge
Tab yaad tumhe hum aayenge
Par laut ke hum naa ayenge
Ik roz yeh rishta chutega
Dil itna jyada tutega
Aakhir uss din tum ro doge
Raman aap mujhe kho doge.


(Please read it.)

Raman started crying but noone was there to wipe his tears.he saw his love,his children going away from him but he was unable to do anything.

Ishita was walking inside the airport holding hands of her kids,adi and ruhi.

Ruk jaana nahi,tu kahin haar ke
Kaanto pe chalke milenge saaye bahaar ke
O rahi o rahi o rahi

Nain aansu Jo liye hai
Yeh raahon ke diye hai
Logon ko unka sab kuch de ke
Tu toh chala tha aapne hi leke
Koi nahi toh tere apne hai sapne ye pyaar ke

Saathi naa karwaan hai
Yeh tera imtehaan
Yun hi chala chal dil ke sahaare
Karti hai manzil tujhko ishaare
Dekh kahin koi rok nahi le tujhko pukaar ke
O rahi o rahi o rahi o rahi.

That's all for now.I know many don't like the end but some mistakes are beyond repair and this is one of them.
All reviews are welcomed even if its bad.

Love
Raksha
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rakshu my sweety bang on os..

as you said,some mistakes are not repaired ,if it goes beyond repair,raman done that mistakes.most of the viewers want this type of end.

ishu take stand and fight for her children and her dignity,she cant trust him bcoz if she again give chance to trust him,she herself lost her hope on trust and love..

hmm one thing is right,if shagun again not betrayal him,he never go to ishu..he still not feel guilty,he just feeling he is alone with out his love,childrens.cv's utterly failed to show all elements,where viewers want to see..

i like ,when adi whipped ishu tear with his hand and assure her,he is with her,ruadi done their best to distract her ishmaa from raman thoughts.some times childrens witness the truth when elders act like blind..

Do write this type of os to entertain us sweety.
Edited by janani_divan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice os
ending was nice agar positive hota toh aur bhi accha hota BTW well written
ishita ne accha kiya raman ko ghar se nikalke
(par bura bhi laga)
shagun as always disgusting
she betrayed raman
u always keep writing like this
god bless u dii
love u dii
Edited by kimty1230 - 9 years ago
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It was unbelievably awesome.it was awesome because ishita left him but was happy with her family rather than crying for him.yes the words of ishita that you had come to us as shagun has ditched you again was very true for raman .and the kids they were just a sweethearts,it cleary showed than kids though don't understand everything but love.they left their biological parents just for ishita because she love them to the core and don't want any other child for her.and the family is also adorable, they stand with ishita rather than standing with their own blood.it was amazing but as a ishra fan I want them to be together .though raman has given them such a pain that is beyond repair but I want u to write one more part to bring ishita and adiru back to him.that's all yaar if I will write everything then it will be longer than your os.
Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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excellent OS di 👏👏👏
its ending is not positive which has made it different
from others and i seriously like it
di i really appreciate d message u want to give through this
OS that is some mistakes r beyond repair which is absolutely true 👏
raman did d biggest mistake of his life by breaking ishita's trust on him
ishita was deeply hurt by his action and so she decided to go away from his life
liked d way adiru supported ishita
but no doubt raman loves ishita a lot and he did all those things only thinking about ishita's
happiness...he was so much obsessive for their own child which he wanted to gift ishita that
he didn't notice that d blunder he created that was beyond repair...
his wife and children left him all alone and there can not be any other punishment
bigger than this for him for his mistakes...
di if possible make it a TS where in next part show how ishra r living their life
being away from each other and also show their reunion coz they both love each other a lot
and i think till then raman will get enough punishment for his mistakes 😳
will wait for it di 😳

Edited by rufana10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Os is updated guys.have a look and leave ur reviews if u like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres on pge 5
Edited by anisha960 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its nice dear
and frankly i didnt liked its end

i know some mistakes are beyond repair
but this is my ishra
I can never see them separated
You have done wonderful work and written it beautifully
its just that i was expecting a happy ending

I dont thing i could ever expect happy ending in show
they have ruined it completely
and here there is one plus point
here we can request the writer to continue it and give it a happy end

so i am requesting you to make it TS and plz give a positive end 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! What an OS Raksha!!!
U r unbelievable in writing OS yaar..
U shud write more OS I say...
Ishita's explanation was awesome..
Raman got screwed royally.
AdiRu supporting Ishita was heartwhelming.
"I love you & I forgive you but I never trust you" U killed it with this line...
Sometimes harsh reality sucks but that's how life goes..
I dunno about others but believe I liked it to the core😊


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