Originally posted by: Indie2121
Wow!!! Loved reading this. Read all 3 updates at one go.
Especially loved Part 2!
I've read a comment about Ishita being selfish, and I want to say that it's not at all about being selfish...it's about self preservation...some people can live within certain situations, and others feel so stifled that they HAVE to get out so that they can breathe properly.
This strong Ishita that u've created, has had enough...I also like that even though she has left, her heart was still hoping he would look for her...that IS realistic...no matter how 'strong' she was to take this stance, she still had hope in her happy ever after.
I love that this is about Ishita.
I'm waiting to see where u take this...can't wait to see what u create.
Great job so far!!!