Char Kadam: Safar Ab Jaari Hai (Part 6 on Pg 38) 28th Nov - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi All!
I am overwhelmed with the amazing response...

Trust me when I began to write this I thought no one would bother to read this one and simply move to IKNMP...so I nvr gave much thought to what I write here...

But what surprises me is that this has got better response than IKNMP...

So henceforth I have decided to give this story as much importance as others...

Thnx for being the lovely people that u are...Lots of love🤗



Without much delay, lets stalk IshRA while they have their lunch and cherish some beautiful moments of their life



Part 4


Raman's POV


"Wow...Chinese!" Ishita squealed excitedly as soon as her eyes landed on the packets of food I had got home.


"Ye usi restaurant se hai jahan aap mujhe hamari shadi se pehle le gaye the?" she asked.


I nodded in affirmative and she clapped her hands excitedly.


Soon she served the food for both and started to gorge on it like there was no tomorrow.


We were almost done when I heard some noises that reminded me of my most helpless and embarassing memory that had turned into SHEER BLISSful experience.

I am sure you know what I mean.
If you still haven't guessed then listen to the noises I am hearing now. That will for sure help you guess it correctly.


"Ummm"


"This is amazing"


"Ummm"


"I love this"


"Ummm"



Kuch yaad aya?😉

Haan wahi...First breakfast after wedding...SHEER BLISS



"Ummm"

Her moans looked never ending!



"Jaan...Kya karti rehti ho tum? Lunch time me to aisa mat kiya karo please" I begged dramatically.



"Kya Raman? Kya bol rahe ho?" she asked confused.



"Lunch break khatam hone pe hai aur tum ho ki aisi harkatein kar rahi ho" I confused her further. Biwi ko apni baton me uljhane ka maza hi kuch aur hai😉


"Raman aap kya bol rahe ho? Mujhe kuch samajh me nahi araha" she stopped eating and paid all attention to me.



"Samajti nahi yaar tum. Aisi aisi awazein nikalti ho ke banda apni sanity kho baithe" I replied.



"What Raman! Kuchh bhi" she scolded.


"Kucch bhi kya? Janti ho kitna mushkil ho jata hai mere liye. Us din car me to tumhari innocence aur inexperience ke wajah se baksh diya tha. Ab to tum innocent bhi nahi ho aur inexperienced bhi nahi...To kya kehti ho chalein bedroom me" I winked.



"Cheee...Kitne besharam ho aap" she smacked my arm.



"Kya yaar tum bhi? Dedh saal hue shadi ko, aur abhi bhi CHEEE bolti ho. Itna kyun sharmati ho? Pati hi to hun mai tumhara" I asked something that I always wanted to.



"Aap nahi samjhoge Raman. Sharam aurat ka gehna hota hai" she declared confidently although her cheeks hed reddened due to shyness. Shy yet bold! That's what attracts me more towards her.



"Oh! Aisi baat hai? Agar Sharam aurat ka gehna hai to Besharam hona har mard ka janmsiddh adhikaar hai" I gave back.



"Kucchh bhi"



"Haan madam. Kuchh bhi karne ko tayyar hoon. Bas bedroom me chalo abhi ke abhi" I said in Singham style.



"Kuch to sharam karo Raman. Ansh aur Ruhi kya sochenge?" she used her favourite defence.



"Wo kya sochenge? Wo bhi to meri besharmi ka hi nateeja hain" I teased her further.



"Enough Raman. Mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna" she said covering her ears with her palms and then taking her plate walking off to the kitchen.


I followed her to the kitchen while she kept ignoring my presence around her.



She busied herself in placing the left-overs in the fridge. I gingerly walked towards her and sneaked my arms across her waist from behind her.

She struggled to get out of my hold "Chodo na"


"Uuunhuuun" I nodded negatively and tightened the hold across her bulge.



"Kya karte ho aap Raman! Kahin bhi kabhi bhi shur ho jate ho. Waqt maahol kuch mat dekhna aap" she chided.



"Biwi ko dekhne se fursat mile to dekhoon na kuch aur"



"Aaa...So cheeesyyy" she mocked.



"Tum kya mere pyar ko khane ki cheezon se compare karti rehti ho. Mai itna delicious hoon kya?" I teased her and her senses as I nuzzled into her neck passionately.


"Raman" she whispered affected by my ministrations.



I turned her around and looked into her eyes whispering huskily "Kya?"



"Mai ye kehna chahti thi ke" she said coming closer.



"Haan mai sun raha hoon" I closed the little distance between us.



"Wo mai keh rahi thi ke" she moved her hands gently and placed them close the heart.



"Hmmm...bolo" I touched my forehead with hers.



"2:30 baj gaye. Ab jao" she said and pushed me with both her hands that were placed near the heart.



"Achha ji mujhse chalaki? Ruko ab mai dikhata hoon mera asli roop" I said leaping towards her and lifting her off the ground.



"Raman kya kar rahe hain aap?" She was surprised at my sudden move.



"Wahi jo kab se karna chah raha tha. Now there is no escape darling" I smirked evilly.



"No Raman please no" she warned.



"Ab aap meri captive hain Mrs. Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla. Mai jo marzi karun Raman" I was on a threatening spree.



"No na Raman. Please na" she begged.



"Ab tumhari koi chaal mujhpe asar nahi karnewali" I totally declined her request.



"Raman please na. Ansh aur Ruhi kya sochenge?" she again used her favourite defense.



"Yahi ke unke Papa unki Mumma se bahut pyar karte hain. Aur unki Mumma hai ke hamesha ki tarah unhe tadpati hi rehti hain" I said while placing her gently on the bed.



"Haan tadpati rehti hoon. Tabhi to ye do badmash meri jism ko apna ghar banake baithe hain" she stated.



And I slowly slipped into the memory lane and stayed there for God knows how long.


A jerk brought me back "Kya soch rahe ho Raman?" she asked.



"Waqt kitni jaldi guzar jata hai na Ishita. Kal hi ki baat lagti hai ke maine tumhe pehli baar dekha aur dekhte hi tumse pyar kar baitha. Us waqt ye pata bhi nahi tha ke tum koun ho, kahan se ayi ho, hum phir milenge bhi ya nahi. Aur aaj dekho hum sath hain aur hamari pyar ki nishaniyan bhi tumhare kok me pal rahi hain" I poured my thoughts into words.


She hugged my arm and snuggled closer "Haan Raman. Yaqeen hi nahi hota ke us baat ko dhai (2 and half) saal guzar gaye. Kitna sab kuch hua hai na is dauran! Hamari kahani kisi novel se kam nahi"



"Exactly...Aur is novel ka ab tak ka best chapter..." I said looking at her and we both smiled as our hands moved to her bulge.



"Apko yaad hai wo din jab humne ek doosre se ye khushkhabri share ki thi?" she asked excitedly.



"Of course yaad hai. Maine kitni sari mehnat jo ki thi uske liye" I reminded.


"Aur maine bhi. Itni badi khushkhabri ko aap se chupaye rakhna koi asan baat thodi na thi" she confessed.



"Same here" I admitted and we both laughed.



"Kitna lade the na hum donon us din" she reminisced and we laughed louder.



"I know. Bechari Doc to pareshan hi hogayi thi. Wo to achha hua ke wo meri batchmate hai aur mujhe pehle se janti hai. Warna to wo hum donon ko clinic se baahar hi karwa deti"



"I know right" she said and we kept laughing.



Reader's POV


Arey ye donon to bas yaad karke hase jaa rahe hain...


Hum yahan kab se is intezar me hain ke kabhi to pata chale ke in dono ne kaise ek doosre ko bataya...aur ye hain ki paheliyan me baat kiye jaa rahe hain...


Koi to explain kare ke akhir hua kya tha...


Kaise bataya tha unhone ek doosre ko...


Doc kyun pareshan ho gayi thi...


Koi to batao yaar...


Raman's POV


"Really...I can't stop laughing" She said in between her laughs.



"Same here" I too continued laughing.



Reader's POV


Ye dono to batane se rahe yaar...


Abhi to ek hi bandi hai jo humein bata sakti hai ke akhir hua kya tha...


Chalo usi se pooch lete hain...


Tab tak in dono ko hasne do...



knock knock


"Koun hai?" came from the other side of the screen.


"Hum hain CK ke readers" we replied.


"Kya hai?"



"Ek help chahye"



"Kaisi help?"



"Humein jaanna hai ke Ishita aur Raman ne ek doosre ko Ansh aur Ruhi ke ane ki khabar kaise di thi"



"Oh woh...Unhi se pooch lete"


"Yaar wo dono to hasne me lage hue hain. Hum bechare readers ko koi kuch nahi batata" we tired our emotional hatyaar.



"To isme mai kya kar sakti hoon?"



"Tum hi to ho Mannu Di jo iski khabar rakhti ho. Please bata do na" we begged.



"Sochungi"



"Sochungi kya? Hum abhi tak bhoole nahi hain ke tumne IshRa ki shadi ka invitation aur Anniversary party ki khabar hum tak pahunchne nahi di" we warned her.



"Ooops...Tum logon ko abhi tak yaad hai" she sounded scared.



"Hum YHM Cv's nahi hain jo bhool jate hain. Hum fans hain jo koi baat nahi bhoolte"



"Oh! I am sorry"



"Sorry se kuch nahi chalega. Bataana padega ke kya hua tha" we ordered.



"Ok ok batati hun. Bas thoda waqt de do please. Agle update me pakka bata dungi. Abhi mere patidev ke ane ka time hogaya. Please jane do"



"Theek hai. Abhi keliye baksh diya. Lekin wapas aake update de dena"



"Pakka...Promise"


"Theek hai...To ab jao"



"Thanks"


Chalo theek hai ab hum bhi thodi der forum me tehel ate hain.
Tab tak keliye IshRa ko hasne do aur Mannu di ko pati seva karne do...



--------TO BE CONTINUED-----------






Edited by maanvir - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
yaar di sabse pehle aap yeh batao aap kya ho matlab kya tha yeh...Raman aur Ishita ka POV kaafi nahi tha kya jo readers ka POV bhi le aayi

author ka bhi le aao

individually har reader ka bhi le aao

IF ke mods ka bhi le aao

mahaan ho yaar aap

kahan hain aapke paer...lao do mujhe main chuke kritarth ho jaun...ab toh rishta bhi hai paer chune wala 😉

sachi mein aapko shashtang dandvat pranaam

Aiyo not again

mera comment abhi shuru bhi nahi hua and like always it again looks so full

khair who can stop me...main toh comment karungi jitna lamba bhi mujhe karna hoga...aage aapki problem aap kaise bhugto kaise reply karo...hum toh besharam types hain bhaiya 😆


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update ke baare mein kya bolun boss...i am just speechless...itna jyada pyaara ki bas main toh kho gayi usmein aur wapis aane ka mann hi nahi ho raha


those noises 😆

yaar aap har baar CK se references use kar rahi ho not fair...ab mujhe jaldi hi woh padhni padegi...waise i want this ummm umm wala update today toh please de dena

par i am sure woh jo bhi tha bahut hilarious tha

btw mujhe woh vaishno devi wala kissa yaad aa gaya 😆


and inki naughty wali convo


i just cannot stop myself from thinking something par yahan nahi bolungi warna dande padenge...see u at our adda

but i totally loved it

Raman Ji toh pure mood mein hain ahem ahem ke
and yeh innocent Ishita Ji

waise toh mann ho raha hai puri convo hi paste kar daalun par kya faayda...aap samajh toh gayi hi ho how much i have loved this part

par cannot resist myself from copying few lines

"Aap nahi samjhoge Raman. Sharam aurat ka gehna hota hai" she declared confidently although her cheeks hed reddened due to shyness. Shy yet bold! That's what attracts me more towards her.



"Oh! Aisi baat hai? Agar Sharam aurat ka gehna hai to Besharam hona har mard ka janmsiddh adhikaar hai" I gave back. 🤣🤣 kitna sahi bola Raman

"Haan madam. Kuchh bhi karne ko tayyar hoon. Bas bedroom me chalo abhi ke abhi" eeshhh essshh

Wo kya sochenge? Wo bhi to meri besharmi ka hi nateeja hain"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 epic one kahan se sochti ho yaar yeh sab


Uuunhuuun" I nodded negatively and tightened the hold across her bulge.

😲 aapko yeh uuunhuuun kahan se pata chala...this is my common word when i refuse to things

yaar inki convo solid thi...filmy style mein bolun toh kuch kuch hua 😳

"2:30 baj gaye. Ab jao" she said and pushed me with both her hands that were placed near the heart.
lo bhaiya gayi bhains paani mein...this is you BTW 🤢🤢🤢

"Ab aap meri captive hain Mrs. Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla. Mai jo marzi karun Raman" I was on a threatening spree.😳


Haan tadpati rehti hoon. Tabhi to ye do badmash meri jism ko apna ghar banake baithe hain
this was something very beautiful...probably the best line of this update ❤️

now the rest of the part of the update is called real tadpana 😡

won''t comment on that

i want the next update tomorrow itself bas

hum bhi toh hasen thoda

sirf Ishra kyun akele maze le aur saath mein author

humen bhi pura pura haq hai

hum bhi toh apna net ka bill bharke IF pe aate hain kounse free mein aate hain...humen bhi padhne aur padhke hasne ka haq ka hai...hum bhi toh paise vasool karen apne

ho gayi ho convince ya aur bak bak karun

ho gayi ho toh update de daalo

warna i am spamming you today

but on a serious note, this was such a lovely update and wisely written 😉 wisely coz kyunki aap woh kissa is update mein shuru nahi karna chah rahi thi bcoz of time constrain and sirf ishra convo would be so short toh reader and author ki convo se balance kar diya

yun hi nahi main kehti ki aap unique ho

and and and i have to confess something

this story is my current fav for now...ofcourse juda hoke bhi tu will be all time fav but ek current wali honi chahie na so this is the one now

islie behna

is chaar kadam ke safar par

itna karwao na humen intezaar

update bas aap deti jao roz do chaar

aur hum aise hi barsaate rahenge

aap par humara beintehaa pyaar

P.S. sorry for the bad shayari 😆 pati effect i guess

chalo kaafi bak liya ab hum chale aapke khwabon ko padhne







Edited by DivanIsh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏OMG🤣🤣🤣
reader's pov was hilarious

part 2,3 & 4 combined comment😉
watsapp convo was awesome
ishra at their best
that same khatti mitthi nik jhok
and those cute fights then roothna manana is just flawless
loved it so much
then raman shooting her video. phas gayi ishita😉😆😆
ab bachke bhi kaha jayegi. then that dinning table scene.
i could imagine his plight. and my ever favourite besharam RKB. uska mukabala koi nai kar sakta
RKB and his one liners. maanvi u are too good in potraying our old puttar. witty, handsome and total besharam
biwi will do a degree in emotional blackmailing. full on dhamaal updates.
👏👏👏👏👏👏👍🏼
👍🏼👏
Edited by florine_20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was one hilarious joy ride! I was smiling through out. It was adorable; so cute!!

Waise the way Ishu said "Sharam aurat ka gehna hoti hai ..." I was like LMAO!!

But Raman thode kissi si kam hai!!!

"Wo kya sochenge? Wo bhi to meri besharmi ka hi nateeja hain" I teased her further.

In the entire update this was like epic!!

Update soon Maanvir 😳

I'm sure you know EXACTLY how much I loved this update!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay.. that's my comment.. in your update..woo hoo
Hehe, so cute Ishita is.. pretending that she didn't like the chapter.. But Raman knows her too well to get fooled by her so easily!
Hayye.. I miss this IshRa terribly.. at least I get to read about them here
Continue soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing part
u r too gud in writing
hatts ofg
their nok jhok wala romance
her voices
their naughty talks
everything was superb
just loved d update
liked d readers point of view
chalo ab jaldi se next update dena
wait karna mushkil hai !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
😆 omg mannu di!!!
the POV hahahahahaha superb part!!!
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
omg this is amazing baap
sooo cute, lovely, hilarious update yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hum YHM Cv's nahi hain jo bhool jate hain. Hum fans hain jo koi baat nahi bhoolte"
🤣 🤣🤣
these lines are super duper awesome 😃
as usual awesome update di 😊

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