Char Kadam: Safar Ab Jaari Hai (Part 6 on Pg 38) 28th Nov - Page 12

Originally posted by: rufana10

fab prologue/epilogue
loved part 1
preggy ishita is so cute😊
waiting to read further
update soon di 😳

Originally posted by: ..Anamika129..

I'm good now and ek dum ready to fly in char kadam airlines 😉

P.S - How did you get to know it's mee...despite my username change ? 😳

Originally posted by: ..Anamika129..

Awwie... Part 1 was such Aww

But the prologue...mera bhi same complaint jo ishita ka tha...Title se laga ke it is going to be full of romance. But ye kya tha? Shuru me hi tragedy! Kya sochke padne chali thi aur kya nikla!

But I know you will have something interesting in store for us...🤗

Loved IshRa nok-jhok

And this line -your Papa is the best person I have ever met... 👏

Originally posted by: sahooa

nice di😊

eager about d story😊

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

You're writing a story within a story? Wow! That's interesting and complicated. Would be nice to see how the story within affects the story itself!

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

Epilogue / Prologue was just beautiful di

totally loved it and it gave me an insight of chaar kadam as well

i was thinking to start reading chaar kadam but now that you are here with itna karo na mujhe pyaar i don't want to keep this on hold and rather have everything pending

i will go with this one for now and slowly read chaar kadam

hurried comment coz i am excited to read part 1

see you in next post

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

Part 1 was just so cute and dreamy

totally loved it

hate you se i love you was just tooo sweet...fell in love with that particular section

socha tha detailed comment dungi but woh jo last mein link daal diya ab use padhne ki excitement hai toh bhaag rahi hoon

BTW Ansh and Rooh stole my heart

my fav line below

"You two are very lucky. You know why? Because your Papa is the best person I have ever met. Jab tum log bahar aaoge na tab tumhe pata chalega ke how lucky you are and how lucky your Mumma is"

this was just beautiful di...but i am confused i mean yahan updates honge ya dusre thread mein ya dono jagah

mere sawaalon ka jawaab do na

chalo bye ab

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

RES

finally UNRES

Aapne kaha tha aapke saath char kadam chalen aur hum chal pade

ab aap kaise keh sakti ho ki itna karo na mujhe pyaar

Pyaar ko toh...

Dheere Dheere Pyaar Ko Badhana Hai

Hadd Se Guzar Jaana Hai

Jitne Bhi Tu Karle Sitam (Delayed updates, twists, etc etc.)

Has Has Ke Sahenge Hum (With long comments )

Yeh Pyaar Na Hoga Kam

Behna Teri Kasam

Pehle Safar mein zara bhatki hui musafir thi main kabhi chali kabhi ruk gayi

is baar saath saath chalungi

excited for the safar 😃