Char Kadam: Safar Ab Jaari Hai (Part 6 on Pg 38) 28th Nov

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: rk654
Mannu Di,,

Brilliant start...i Love it the way you described their one year journey
white colour is symbol of peace thats means raman is wearing the
white shirt to remind her..there is peace no fight😆..where did you
get this idea?? from Jiju😉...
he is not undestanding her plight ghar me band kar ke rakh diya
ravan kumar..so nice novel likh diya wifey dear ki boring mitane ke liye

you started with bang

Thnx deepu...

Ab sab cheezon pe jeeju ko credit dena band kar de 😡

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maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: v.kaavya
sooo excited👍🏼👍🏼!!! thanks for ur msg!!!😃

Thnx kaavya...

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Di I loved your idea of presentation...
So this story is going to be pregnancy journey
N
That one will have prologue wali story

Thnx sukku!

And yes dear...you got it right

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

You're writing a story within a story? Wow! That's interesting and complicated. Would be nice to see how the story within affects the story itself!

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Epilogue / Prologue was just beautiful di

totally loved it and it gave me an insight of chaar kadam as well

i was thinking to start reading chaar kadam but now that you are here with itna karo na mujhe pyaar i don't want to keep this on hold and rather have everything pending

i will go with this one for now and slowly read chaar kadam

hurried comment coz i am excited to read part 1

see you in next post

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Part 1 was just so cute and dreamy

totally loved it

hate you se i love you was just tooo sweet...fell in love with that particular section

socha tha detailed comment dungi but woh jo last mein link daal diya ab use padhne ki excitement hai toh bhaag rahi hoon

BTW Ansh and Rooh stole my heart

my fav line below

"You two are very lucky. You know why? Because your Papa is the best person I have ever met. Jab tum log bahar aaoge na tab tumhe pata chalega ke how lucky you are and how lucky your Mumma is"

this was just beautiful di...but i am confused i mean yahan updates honge ya dusre thread mein ya dono jagah

mere sawaalon ka jawaab do na

chalo bye ab

Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago