Char Kadam: Safar Ab Jaari Hai (Part 6 on Pg 38) 28th Nov - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pcnsb

Awww... such a cute update...
loved the epilogue/prologue write up.. superb..!!!
I am so very excited for this safar..!!
Agli udaan jald bharne ki guzarish hai !!
Thanx for the PM
Nandini


Thnx a lot Nandini😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir



Hey nimmo!

Thnx a lot...

Hehe...koi nahi...kisi na kisi din tubhi experience kar legi...

U read it twice? Thnk u so much


He he di wait kr ri Hu mai to wese jiju ka koi bhai h to btana
Chill mazak kr ri hu
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nimmo_3397


He he di wait kr ri Hu mai to wese jiju ka koi bhai h to btana
Chill mazak kr ri hu




Bad luck dear...Jiju ka koi bhai nahi hai...he is the ek lauta sapoot jo sirf mere liye bane hain 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
concept is gud dear
wonderful start cont soon...
thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
sry double post so sry
Edited by shilpa2323 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpa2323

concept is gud dear

wonderful start cont soon...
thanks for pm😊


Thnx dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi All!

Eeeks...Wondering where ur pilot left after getting u all on board?
I have no valid reason...Sorry is all I can say...

The flight is already delayed and I am very late...
So let's skip the note and jump into the update...


Part 2


Raman's POV


I kept checking my phone in between my work for a text message from my dear wifey since we ended our call.


I am sure the minute she ends reading the first chapter of the novel she is going to send me a message.


I was getting impatient and I could not have my mind focus on the work.
So I finally sent her a text "Waiting for the feedback" and kept biting my nails.


Ping my phone screen blinked at the arrival of a new message. I hurriedly reached for it.

"Can't u c the DO NOT DISTURB board?😡" came her reply.

Oh! She is still reading. I chuckled at my impatience and her witty reply.


"Sorry Madam. Galti hogayi" I replied to her with a folding hands emoji.


"U r still dstrbng me Raman😡" she sent.


"Oops sorry😲" I said.


"OMG! Aap nahi sudhroge. Ab no more msgs till I fnsh reading. Ok, Yes, Haan, Right kuch bhi nahi. Samjhe?😡"


Eeeks...lagta hai madam sach me naraz hogayi. It's better not to mess with her now.


Chalo beta madam ko padhne do aur khud kaam pe lag jaao. Aur koi option bhi to nahi hai. Sigh!


10 mins later...
Ping...Ping...Ping...Ping...Ping...My phone kept screaming for being tortured with continuous incoming messages.


I wondered rather worried who it could be.


"🤣"

"🤣"

"🤣"

"🤣"

"🤣"


The chat window was flooded with ROFL emoticons.
The sender was none other than my very own Jhansi Ki Rani.


"Kya hua?😲" I asked


"🤣" came the reply again.


"Arey kya hua batao to" I asked worried.


"Raman OMG 🤣"


"Pagalpan ka daura pad gaya kya?" I was irritated now.


"Shayad 🤣 🤣 Jo bhi is chapter ko padhega usko pagalpan ka daura padega hi 🤣🤣🤣"


"Oh to aapne chapter complete kiya madam"


"Haan ji...And I can't stop laughing Raman 🤣🤣🤣"


"Arey bas bhi karo. WhatsApp ke baki emoticons bura maan jayenge😉" I teased.


"Jisko bura maanna hai maane. Mai to hasungi bhai 🤣🤣🤣" she said.


"Itna funny tha kya?" I doubted. I didn't find it so funny.


"Aur nahi to kya. Mai to itna hasi ke Ansh aur Ruhi ko laga ke unke Mumma ke jism me earthquake aagaya" she replied.


Nautanki I thought...

"Now that's an exaggeration" I replied.


"No it was not" she said adamantly.


"Of course it was"


"Whatever! I to LOVED it bas" she gave the final verdict.


"You LOVED what?😉" I asked naughtily


"The CHAPTER obviously" she said


"Only the chapter?😉"


"Ummm...Ok...I LOVED the characters too" she played along.


"Sirf characters?😔" I sent an unhappy face.


"Ummm...I LOVED the ambience too😉" she didn't give up.


"Aur kuch?" I asked expectantly.


"Ummm...Aur kya? ummm...I LOVED Ishu & Miku's bonding" she tested my patience.


"Aur????😳" I probed her to come up with what I wanted to hear.



"Aur kya? Aur kuch tha nahi na is chapter me😲" she acted confused.



"Hmmm...theek hai...Mai samajh gaya. Jane do😭" I sent.


"Awww...baby ro raha hai?" she asked.


"Tumhe isse kya? Mai roun ya hasun" I made a face.


"Hehe...You are such a baby Raman...I lovvve you" she sent flowing in the emotions.


"Got u😈" I said with an evil smile.


"Haww...Aap mujhe ullu bana rahe the?😡" she asked.



"Bana kahan raha tho? Tum to already ho😆" I giggled.



"Aaapne mujhe ullu bola? How dare u? Ravan Kumar😡" she yelled through the message.


"Arey meri maa. Bhagwan keliye Jhansi Ki Rani mat banna" I sent with a fearful emoji.


"Hugh...Ab aaya na oont pahad ke neeche" she smirked.



"Haan ji...Oont to kya hathi bhi ajayega pahaad ke neche apka ye avtar dekh ke" I exaggerated.


"Hawww Raman. Mai itni buri hoon kya?😭" she whined.


"Nahi jaan. Tum bahut achhi ho. But Jhansi ki rani badi khatarnaak😆" I said.


"Maine aisa kya kiya ke aap itna darte ho?" she asked.


"Yaad nahi? Shadi ki pehli rath kaise thappad maara tha mujhe?🤢" I reminded.


"☺️"



"Ab kyun sharma rahi ho? Us din sharam nahi ayi thi jab honewale pati ko thappad maar rahi thi"


"Nahi ayi thi. Because u deserved it😡" she stated.



"Oops sorry" I was ashamed of my act.


"U better be" she said smugly.


"I am" I admitted sincerely.


"Ramannn"

That was an indication of something emotional coming next.

"Hmmm" I replied in my usual style.


"Ek baat batao"


"Haan pucho" I said knowing she would be either biting her lip or fidgeting with her pallu.


"Bahut zor se lagi thi kya?" she asked.


I knew it. Now the ball is in my court. I could play with it as I want.

"Aur nahi to kya? Itni zor se lagi thi ke aaj bhi dard baki hai" I exaggerated.


"Now that was an exaggeration" she replied copying my words from our earlier convo.


"No it was not" I copied her words now.


"Of course it was" she too was on the same note.


"Whatever! I to LOVED it bas" I gave the final verdict like her.


"You LOVED what? The thappad?😲" she asked confused.


"No...the gesture" I replied.


"The gesture of slapping u" she was still confused.


"No...the gesture of marking ur right on me" I said dreamily. I am sure she will send the blushing icon now.


"Only the gesture?" came her reply. Oh wait! What's this? Hmmm...So Madam is playing with me. Chalo theek hai. Hum bhi kisi se kam nahi.



"Haan...Only the gesture" I sent and giggled.


"Hawww...how mean...U want me to tell all the romantic things aur khud to dekho zara. Sharam nahi ati apko pregnant biwi ko satate hue. Ravan Kumar. I...urghhh...Mai to I hate u bhi nahi bol sakti. Apko to I love u se zyada I hate u se khushi hoti hai. Urghhh...I just...I just...I just...urghhh" she sent one whole paragraph.



"😆" I could not stop but laugh at her plight.


"Has kya rahe ho? Aap to mujhse pyar hi nahi karte. Pyar chodo apko to daya bhi nahi ati mujhpe. Jao mujhe bat nahi karni aap se" she replied.


Lagta hai mazak bhari pad gaya. Ye to bigad gayi beta. Kuch kar.


"Nahi jaan. I love u na" I replied.


"Got u😆" she replied.


"Meri billi mere ko meow?" I asked.


"Meow😆 Biwi hai na aapke takkar ki?" she asked.


"Haan ji bilkul" I said smiling.


"Ab jao kaam karo. Office kaam karne jate ho ya biwi se chat karne?😡"


"Ye achanak tumhe kya hogaya?😲"


"Kuch nahi! Mujhe next chapter padhna hai😛"


"Oh to ye baat hai? Jaao jaao ab pati ki kise padi hai" I tried to play the emotional card.


"Apki ye emotional card is waqt kaam nahi karegi. Wahan Itna Karo Na Mujhe Pyar ka Raman mera intezar kar raha hai😉"



"Hmmm...ye sahi hai...Mera hi novel mujhpe bhari pad raha hai. Koi nahi...Ab tum maze lo. Rath ko aake saza dunga😉"



"Rath ki baat rath ko dekhenge. Ab mai chali...ITNA KARO NA MUJHE PYAAAR" she signed off singing those lines.


Karta rahunga...Hamesha...I whispered and kissed her pic on my screen.


Ab aap log yahan kya kar rahe hain? Aap bhi jayiye IKNMP ka agla chapter padhne. Tab tak mai apna kaam complete kar leta hun.
Link neeche hai...click karna mat bhoolna...
Milte hain second chapter ke baad😃





To be continued


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Posted: 9 years ago
res

unres...

are main toh late hi ho gayi yaar. yeh res na humesha late karwa deta hai but as I always said der aae durust aae for me and applying same thing again for me 😆

chalo now back to update, finally chaar kadam ke safar ne ek nayi raah pakdi hai. hume toh laga tha ki curtains closed, volume muted and lights offed par hi kahani khatam ho jaani hai par...
Tabhi toh we always said " Itna karo na hume pyaar " 😉

now back to update...
before starting I would like to thank you for this sperate threads of Itna karo na mujhe pyaar and CK. mujh jaise buddhu logo ko badi help milegi isse 😆

yeh wala update main na main full time paaglo ki tarah has rahi thi. Ab samjh main aaya ki Raman roz white shirts kyon pehenta hai. Poor Raman but I love this poor Raman. 😉

sabse best part tha their convo. matlab fulltoss maza aaya mujhe toh. their small moments are so cute di. I think they are one of the cutest IshRa on this forum. how cutely they fight and this is a single think which made me fall for them 😳

"Aur nahi to kya. Mai to itna hasi ke Ansh aur Ruhi ko laga ke unke Mumma ke jism me earthquake aagaya" she replied. yeh kya tha? it was damn hilarious di. aap toh sabki guru ho one liners main 👏

I didn't have much to say as this update was perfect in itself and I loved it from deep core of my heart.

ishra little banter, her emotional blackmailing, Raman unique ways to manofy her, everything was perfect. loved this update di.

sorry for late reply will try to be on time from next time
so I am also signing off like Ishita style, and will meet u soon at next part.

love u always di.
Edited by aarohi26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
RES
Aarohi ki bachi ne first res le liya 😡

i am sulking now


khair comment later but update was 🤣


hasi ka raaz baad mein khola jaega

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finally unres

waise unres ke bina hi comment bhara bhara sa lag raha hai 😆

ok yeh update na aaj tak ka aisa update tha jis se maine maximum connect kiya
reason ek toh yeh hai hi ki aapne most of the chat kahin se copy karke chep di ofcourse with ur own beautiful effects 😉

and dusra reason yeh hai ki this update is so relatable and real...waise toh aapke har update mein hi reality factor hota hi hai but ismein kuch jyada hi tha...hats off 👏


and and and hats off to your speed as well...this time i know aapne kitni der mein update kiya hai...mujhe kam se kam pura ek din toh lagta hi hai update likhne mein 😆😆😆


shuru ki his nervousness and how he was disturbing her coz of that nervousness was just so cuteee...i do the same 😆


puri unki chat was just sooo cuteee...total pati patni types lag raha tha kisi couple ki chat churake daal di

and pure chat mein sabse cute pata hai kya hai

Awww...baby ro raha hai 😳
*special connection with this one 😉*


Ab tum maze lo. Rath ko aake saza dunga😉"
ahem ahem raat ko hi kyun...log toh dopahar ko bhi saza dete hain 😉


as i always say endings are the best part of ur updates and it was no less today


ITNA KARO NA MUJHE PYAAAR" she signed off singing those lines.


Karta rahunga...Hamesha...I whispered and kissed her pic on my screen.


👏


bas mujhe jyada kuch nahi kehna
yeh part forum pe aaj tak ka sabse cute part tha

ismein sab kuch tha bole toh paisa vasool types

romance, fun, flirt, teasing, impatience and most importantly happiness

and aap toh thehri emotions ko best bahar laane wali

It was just tooo cuteee

keh diya na bas keh diya


ab aage koi behes nahi



bestest part till nowww
you nailed it totally

loved the update and love you even more behna




Edited by DivanIsh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww they have d cutest fight
how can one fight soo cutely
nok jhok , fight , romance , teasing
everything In a single update
loved it too much
continue soon
Edited by anisha960 - 9 years ago

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