You're In My Veins - IshRa Two-Shot - Part 2 - Page 9 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My god this was simply sensuous and hot..amazing peace of writing..if not yhm atleast ur ts has definitely lift up my mood..
Hope u continue to write further nd quit writing on this forum bcoz of d stupid track
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome ,Wonderful and Lovely Aani...Did I say Awesome?😳

You gave such a beautiful closure to the miscarriage track that I need to thank you first..
Till today Iam feeling for the way they handled Ishita's reactions and these people already jumped to more stupider stuff..

Their pain and the way they healed and reassured each other is beautifully written as always..And the flow was so good..never jarring..

I really hope you get the inspiration back and write again..but I do understand with the way the show is going on we cannot even hope..
If this is indeed your final shot in YHM ...I would like to thank you for all the wonderful narratives and Iam so glad that you had this amazing journey which inturn gave us some amazing stories...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Aani 👏

Though I have not seen the episode after they ishita cones to know that she is pregnant. As I knew this was heading for miscarriage. I was waiting for some positive outcome in the show ...now that all seems like distant dream.😭

Coming to the TS it hot emotional... But for me it was emotional part that i will take away with this. Even in their lovrmakibg the moment he kept his hand on her ...I was too wreck ...I took a break ...came back read again ...couldn't continue. But one the best pieces you have written.

Thank-you for that Aani
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
This is the glimpse of the Ishra that we are used to and I am glad that you chose to continue this despite the show going a downhill.
Absolutely hot and sizzling. Loved how they finally consoled each other and re-registered their spots in each others lives.

Thankyou for giving it a proper closure!

And I am going to miss your stories on Ishra. However, if you do write any other time on some other forum, do PM me!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb
hot romantic update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Omg what should I say i must be sounding as broken record saing it again and again that YOU are absolutely a Wonderful.. wonderful writer Aani 👏 👏

That was an HOT... Sensuous... Beautiful update Aani... the way you portrayed there love making as it soothing each others pain.. giving each other than assurance that NO matter what they are enough to complete each other and there happiness lies into each other... Talents like DT... KP needs writers like you who can do justice with there talent with such amazing writeup.. unlike YHM CV 's who leaving NO stone to destroy there own creation... Aani That was really a beautiful.. Beautiful piece of writing.. loved it 👏 And please don't stop writing on ishra i know the current situation of the show is heartbreaking for ishra fans but still please don't stop writing on ishra... its request 😳

Thank You for the PM Aani 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A beautiful story written in beautiful words... Your words made the characters come alive for me... I wonder if you wrote the updates just like that or did go into the depth of the Emotions and Feelings... It felt as if you are feeling the pain and writing it down... Salute to you skills...
It's just wonderful...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot to everyone who has commented since the posting of the second and the last chapter of this TS, I am extremely sorry for not having replied to you'll but will do so soon most probably tomorrow. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zeny_Nian



Finished reading finally...

I wasn't getting how to rescue my upset mind from attack after attack YHM is giving! I am broken and bent by their absurdity and partiality! My ISHRA have been nothing to YHM nor we YHMians now! I donno what they are smokin' now a days while penning d script that they are coming with such Great impressive extraordinary never-seen-before story line!!🤔

Anyways coming to update goshh it was HOT and PASSIONATE to a newer level lol by newer level I meant I haven't read bathroom romance before in this forum😆 so it was like a cherry in d cake! I loved the way you have mixed emotion, love-session and conversation all at once was wahh, dint miss the pheels for a second.😳 It was perfect beyond perfection. I have stopped watching d show since cs episode and felt I can no longer relate to this new YHM and imagined something like this to be the closure thanks Aani for giving me this perfect closure!🤗

For me ISHRA doesn't exist after this night...till I can say they do exist which seems a distant dream though!




Thanks Zeny
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naadiyadanapal

Too hot to handle. 👏


I don't know how many would agree to this but Ishra are this one couple who can be so into each other so that you have to look away. I mean their moments seem so private that it feels intruding to even watch them on screen. Such is the chemistry they share, such wonderful actors bringing the characters alive. Its so sad that the CVs can't seem to use this USP of the show and sell it better. But nonetheless great writing Ani. I really wanted to see an emotional break down of Ishitha and Raman on losing their baby which the writers never really gave us. After reading this I got that closure.

Please do write again Ani, you have that magic. 👍🏼



Thanks Naadiya 😊

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