You're In My Veins - IshRa Two-Shot - Part 2 - Page 9 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Shre28

This is the glimpse of the Ishra that we are used to and I am glad that you chose to continue this despite the show going a downhill.

Absolutely hot and sizzling. Loved how they finally consoled each other and re-registered their spots in each others lives.

Thankyou for giving it a proper closure!

And I am going to miss your stories on Ishra. However, if you do write any other time on some other forum, do PM me!



Thanks Shre 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

superb
hot romantic update
did hve words



thanks Prachi 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Omg what should I say i must be sounding as broken record saing it again and again that YOU are absolutely a Wonderful.. wonderful writer Aani 👏 👏

That was an HOT... Sensuous... Beautiful update Aani... the way you portrayed there love making as it soothing each others pain.. giving each other than assurance that NO matter what they are enough to complete each other and there happiness lies into each other... Talents like DT... KP needs writers like you who can do justice with there talent with such amazing writeup.. unlike YHM CV 's who leaving NO stone to destroy there own creation... Aani That was really a beautiful.. Beautiful piece of writing.. loved it 👏 And please don't stop writing on ishra i know the current situation of the show is heartbreaking for ishra fans but still please don't stop writing on ishra... its request 😳

Thank You for the PM Aani 😊



Thanks Kavya so glad that you saw the emotional layers of this piece as well 😳😊


I dont want to quit them too but the show isnt making it easier to write on them right now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

A beautiful story written in beautiful words... Your words made the characters come alive for me... I wonder if you wrote the updates just like that or did go into the depth of the Emotions and Feelings... It felt as if you are feeling the pain and writing it down... Salute to you skills...

It's just wonderful...


thanks Akshata 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: remya1990

Aani, how could I tell you how this work is...

Beautiful...simply beautiful. Sometimes you have so much to tell and express but couldn't find any means to, and just end up with simple words. This has happened to me Aani.
First of all, a big sorry for being late...

The writing is so dipped in emotions and I love that. That too many emotions at a time. When we say writers play with words, i tell you Aani, you play with emotions.The correct stroke of emotion at the correct time. Its all seems to be blended still showing its individual presence. Its so connected that you don't actually realise that when did the tears in your eyes have turned to a smile on your lips.
Awesome!!!
This particular scene that you have created was much wanted. Thank you for this. My story of Raman and Ishita ends here.
When people write such scenes, often it becomes vulgar or would be cliche. But yours was far far far away,on another level, far beyond from the rest. For me, this took me to a peaceful land, travelling through the emotions that you have created. It seemed so pure. Like always i say, Aani, your writings are healers...peacemaker, i would call your writings.
While reading, a line had struck on my mind from The God of Small Things," her body existed only where he touched. The rest was all smoke...pulling her hips against his,to let her know how much he wanted her."

Aani, i would pray that you soon get out of the writer's block that you are facing and pen down some beautiful beautiful writings. Writers are not to be forced to write and i would never do that. But truly wish that you write soon😊 .
But when you write your new work, in any of the forum, please leave a message.
Once again thank you for this wonderful piece and a big big hug for you.
Really sorry for the late reply, was stuck with exams.
Always stay blessed Aani.
With lots of love Remya.


thanks a lot Remya for this wonderful comment I am so glad that it touched you so much and The God Of Small Things is one of the most loveliest books ever written, so for it to be mentioned in connection to my work is an honor and a delight for me thank you so much☺️😊

Lots of love to you as well sweets
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: -Atii-

RES

Unresing for both the chapters here...

IT WAS AMAZING! You're my favorite writer here and I'm SO SO happy you wrote this. And described their emotions so beautifully! I had goosebumps! It was just so so beautiful!

You're my favorite writer here so I really hope this won't be your last fic, but if it is, I totally understand!!

Amazing Aani!



Thanks Atii 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks Lily 😊

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