i read your story and i really like it
i really appreciate your writing talentyou are really a very good writeryour story's characters and their characterisationishu,s bachpana and maturity her love for her appa and raman . her kashmkash about her priorityraman's naughtiness and his love for ishu .they both are madly in love with each othermrs bhalla's concern about raman and his married lifedadi's love for ishra and raman's naughty remarks about dadi and daduishra are really gem as person and they are very sensitive and emotionalad side characters in your storythey are also really nicemimi , romika , karky love stories are really niceevery relationship like brothers love , brother sister love , devar bhabhi love , bhabhi nanad love , sisters love , jija sali relation are nicely potrey in your storyso over all it was really nice storyand i don't have enough words to describe your talentand sorry for my mistakesplease update soon
thanks for giving a long review,and for commenting about each and every character,i will update soon😊😊😊
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