Will you forgive me? An IshRa FF- Chapter 5 updated Page 28 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
really nice story
i like simmi and abhi pair
raman is in two mind nice
and i am looking forward to see what will ishita do to woo raman
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

superb update Kaarthikk
raman was sweating seeing ishita's waistline 😳
liking simmi-abhi pair...he called her hutch dog 😆
looking forward to read more 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

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awsum story yr..
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: kras

really nice story

i like simmi and abhi pair
raman is in two mind nice
and i am looking forward to see what will ishita do to woo raman
pls update soon


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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 4

The Mighty started the ignition & his grey beauty smoothly started moving without any fuss. But Ishita on the other hand is having different kind of emotions wrecking inside her. RKB was driving peacefully at the same time with listening to his groove.

Ishita 1:- Why are you afraid of him?

Ishita 2:- She is not afraid of him dumbo. Its called nervousness.

Ishita 1:- Oh please! Keep your diction aside. C'mon woman be bold. Don't screw it.

Ishita 2:- She is just nervous. You are frightening her. Cool Ishita its just your Raman.

Ishita 1:- Yeah! But he is ready to tear you into pieces when he gets a chance.

Ishita 2:- But he won't, coz still he is your same old Raman.

Ishita... Ishita! RKB shook her out of her world to grab her attention. Where were you all the time when I was calling you? He asked with a tinge of concern.

Uh! Nothing Raman. Why we stopped now?

Now! Madam this thing is out of gas it seems. Strange, I use to fill it regularly thought RKB.

Meanwhile Simmi & Abhi were moving in their car.

Wow! Abhi, you are a genius. You have sent Ishita with Bhai by executing a plan.

No baby! Don't think that much low of the Devil.

Matlab?

Your Bhai knew our plan.

Wwwhat!!! But how?

I knew him & his reactions very well darling.

I hope everything goes well between them.

Don't worry baby. It had been taken care of already. His drive would have run out of gas already. They need to do something together. So I hatched this plan winked Abhi.

Abhi, I love you said Simmi by pecking his cheeks.

Meanwhile Raman & Ishita have decided to walk for few miles rather than sulk by waiting there.

Shall we move by walk, Ishita? Ok for you!

Sure, Raman.

While they started walking they noticed a chat vendor on the roadside. Ishita always have a thing for them while Raman even though likes it didn't show it.

Wow Chat! Shouted an excited Ishita.

Chill yaar. Why are you shouting for this woman?

C'mon Raman. Chat in this climate, its irreplaceable. You knew how I used to be fond of it in our college days. Ishita could see his face fell down immediately at the mentioning of the past. She cursed her stupidity. Its ok Raman if you don't like it we will go.

Its not like that. Huh! Lets have it replied RKB.

Bhaiyya, mujhe do plate dena! RKB smiled on her childish antics He always admired for her cute little findings & her simple lifestyle. Both of them were enjoying there pani puri to the core. Amidst this they forgot to see that the place is adjacent to a park where all lovers usually meet & spend time even in middle of the nights. After their delicious chat they have decided to walk near the park coz of the ambience which lured them to go there. While entering the park they were awestruck by its beautiful decoration. The slow music which soothe their ears with chill air blowing all around, it is a small heaven. All the couples are enjoying their to the fullest. Suddenly they were showered with rose petals & the event organiser acknowledged them as they are the 50th couple tonight to enter the park. Both of them explained that they are not a couple but still accepted it as a token of gift by the organiser & he asked them to enjoy the night. While they watch the dancing couples out in the open sky, both had stole a glance at each other. It started to thunder suddenly, due to the heavy sounds of them Ishita hugged him at the moment automatically Both of them stood like for few minutes. The Mighty RKB stood like a statue at that moment. Ishita raised to see him. Both of them had an eye lock. To tackle the situation Raman started to speak.

Now don't tell me that you are still afraid of it.

Raman you knew it na! replied Ishita still hugging him.

JKR darr gayi! Wah! I should thank varna bhagwan for making you scared of this.

You are so rude. Raavan Kumar kahin ki!

Hmmm, is it the real reason? asked Raman to lighten her anger.

What?

No, I am just asking. Generally girls make some excuses to hug an handsome guy that too if he is still the most eligible bachelor you know! Winked Raman.

Ishita turned deep red. She tried to hide her blush but couldn't.

Kya ho gayi madam? Muh band ho gayi!

She didn't say anything apart from facing down.

The Rains which started before sometime now started to ease out & gradually all the couples were leaving one by one. After it had stopped completely Raman asked her to see that everything is normal. But still she was blushing like anything. He didn't understand the reason behind it. He raised his eyebrows. She showed his hands. By then Raman understood that all this time his hands were on her bare waist which made her go blush & turn red. Embarrassed would be an understatement for him at that moment. He slowly took his hand out, while taking out he felt the softness of her skin along her waistline. Both of them decided not to see other one's face due to this situation. Ishita decided to break the trance.

Uh! Can we go Raman?

Yeah! Lets go Ishita.

Then they decided to go by a cycle rickshaw for a change. But to their bad luck there is none in that time. Soon Raman made some arrangements & they got a car immediately. Both of them were silent in their car ride. They soon reached her flat. After getting down he simply stood there don't know what to say. His mobile ringed at that moment.

Hello Abhi, Bol.

Yoyo Man. Where were u? I have heard some news like the RKB is wandering on the streets with a girl at 1 am. U know stuffs like that?

Haan I just dropped Ishita in her house & standing before her only.

I think from your voice I can say that you enjoyed this outing na!

"Maar doonga Saala" muttered RKB.

Ok buddy you chill & plz return to your home by time haan. No naughty issues baby. Bye Sweetheart!

Bye dude! Smiled RKB on his Best Friend's antics.

Is that Abhi?

Yeah just checking whether I delivered the parcel on time or not, smirked RKB.

He is more concerned about you, right! replied Ishita "You are lucky Raman".

Lucky! More than lucky to have him my side. He is the only guy whom I trust to death. There is no way I would go against him or him against me.

Ishita was happy & sad at that moment. She was happy coz Raman & Abhi were true friends. Sadness due to her past blunder which bridged their gap. Unknowingly tears welled up in her eyes which caught his attention.

I know Raman. I will be asking forgiveness for a long time even it takes my lifetime. But I do have a request Raman. Shall I?

Go on Ishita replied Raman.

Plz speak to uncle & aunty. I knew they did the mistake but after feeling the pain of not talking to you for these years I think you should go bit soft on them. I am just telling this not coz I knew them or so, I suffered that pain which eats you up for years for the grave mistake. Ishita cried saying these words. Unknowingly RKB too felt some tears in his eyes. He gave his handkerchief to her to wipe her tears & both of them looked into each other deeply.

I am sorry Raman, its already late. Go home. Good night.

Good night Ishita. See you tomorrow replied Raman.

Both of them started to walk in opposite directions: one to his car & another to her flat. Both of them felt that some burden has been reduced considerably & hoped that tomorrow gives them a fresh start to their respective lives.

To Be Continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yippee me firstits a great update
Like abhi's plan to bring them closer.
The park scene was nice
Glad Ishita seek for his forgiveness and ask him to talk to his parents
Continue soon.
Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update👏
they truely love each other
and i hope raman fogive ishita and his parents very soon because they really very guilty

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