Will you forgive me? An IshRa FF- Chapter 5 updated Page 28 - Page 19

nice update dear

lovely update yaar , their midnight date was sooo romantic 😳

Well written karthik,first thing i liked your writing style..
i want to read another story from you..if possible present it.

I like the conversation b/w abhi and raman ,as well as ishra.
Ishu is deeply hurt ,its clearly visible to the raman.

Continue karo..jaldi
thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Yippee me firstits a great update

Like abhi's plan to bring them closer.

The park scene was nice

Glad Ishita seek for his forgiveness and ask him to talk to his parents

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: kras

very nice update👏

they truely love each other

and i hope raman fogive ishita and his parents very soon because they really very guilty

Originally posted by: Sri1091

So the might RKB melt ho raha hein... Hope he will atleast forgive his parents if not ishita... Raman and abhi's convo I too good I love their bond and d trust he has on Abhi... Continue soon..

Originally posted by: Indie2121

Interesting!!! And nice progression!!

Waiting for the next update!! 👏

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

amazing one kartik... i loved it

superb update yr..!

Originally posted by: Divanru

Lovely update.raman has became little soft towards her and ishita has decided to seek her apology till death .nice.I think after her plead he will talk to his parents and the rift between them will end.loved the park seen but they should have also danced na.hey karthik don't bash me as I m always demanding.thanks for pm and do update soon.