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Rina

@super_cutie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome update yaar

I was just silent reader of ur stories

I really loved the way of ur writings and it's simply awesome

But miss ur stories a lot

Plz try to continue ur writings

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arnavkidevani

@arnavkidevani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

That was beautifully heart wrenching and extremely sensuous all at once!
Amazingly written OS 👏 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: SA1234
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What a wonderful piece of writing Aani!
It was heart breaking and hot and sensuous and what not.

Ishita's thoughts in the beginning..
she thought she was immune to this pain by now only to experience it again with an intensity that she never could have imagined before.
If Subbu had broken her heart by leaving her, Raman was breaking her heart by staying !!! Wow
No one could have thought of something like that but you 👏

A few moments of silence was what followed after I finished reading it...it was so beautiful and heart breaking and it stunned me!
I have book marked this because I am not sure how many times I am going to read this and still won't have enough of it..

I have never actually been crazy about the idea of IshRa having a baby ...but after reading this..I think I kind of like the idea..

Oh!! And how can I not mention this..."Ride me " was EPIC. I thought u were aiming at something else...but this one knocked me out!!

👏⭐️👏

Thanks a lot Anju for your sweet words and I am so glad you liked this one so much 😊 😳

Honestly the idea of IshRa having a baby and not having one - I am still torn on that one, because its not like they are childless completely and does a couple really need a child to validate their relationship?

As for Ride me 😳😳 thank you

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -Nidoo-
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take your time Nidoo 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: remya1990
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Take your time Remya 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -Anku-
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take your time Anku 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: naadiyadanapal
It was a little heartbreaking.💔
But trust you with writing about emotions, god woman. You are awesome. 👏

Felt goosebumps when I read this line,

"a lone tear spilling from the corner of her eye as she does so that mingles with their sweat and is lost in the quiet of the night. "

Marvelous piece of writing! 👍🏼 I really wish the CV's start taking clues from your OS!

Thanks Naadiya 😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: shravsss
A very great piece of work...
Not able to give your loved something that's easily accessible from others... This is the worst feeling in the world...

The mother in her would die again... The wife in her would die again... The happiness that she sees in his face will fade away... Thats something she would never want... To be the reason...

Inability which makes her weak... Omg... Its the world's biggest pain... Only a girl can understand this... When someone says it as taunt... Its just hurts... But when it affects your loved one... You die...

Because you never wanted that in first place...

P. S Divyanka always pulls it off well... She makes us feel... She hits our nerve n soul as you said...

P. S. S you put all that in this... Y cvs couldn't take either this path or show a good ishra preggy track... Rather than showing an awful surrogacy track (though unconfirmed)

Thanks Shravsss and yeah, Ishita felt a heartache much more overwhelming this time around because she felt that her inability would break Raman' heart which is more painful for her than her own heartbreak