Hi Aani,
It's been a while since I read your OS.
I haven't even been watching YHM ever since Shagun got the custody of the kids and went downhill. I am sure a lot had happened and changed since then. I have caught the gist of the storyline though.
Coming to your Os, it's very emotional particularly for women.
I loved the flow of Ishita's thoughts and emotions, it was portrayed in a very realistic and subtle way and then smoothly she was brought back to reality when her husband interrupted. Then her conversation with hubby was a lighthearted banter. Again the way you have demonstrated the relationship between Raman and Ishita was superb since they were very much in their true character mode.
I often wonder about the scenario on what would happen to a woman who couldn't conceive and testing the love between husband and wife. Will they able to deal with it together and move on as a couple? Or will their once blissful, successful and happy relationship fall apart and end bitterly? Sadly in asian society, when this situation happened, most men leave their wives and start a new relationship with someone new. I have seen it happened in real life and it's was very heartbreaking to see a husband and wife who once were very much in loved had ended their marriage. This woman was very beautiful with a great personality but she couldn't conceive and that simple fact ended their marriage. Both couple went to marry someone else. Man married a new woman and had kids and the woman married to a professor whose wife died and had grown up kids.
However I would love it if you will continue this OS with Ishita breaking ye
the news to Raman and see how the situation would play out
Edited by CharmGal - 9 years ago
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